for Voltron: Universal Defender1/30/2020 c10 
11Thomas Drovin
Welcome back! I see that despite their personal issues our Paladins of Voltron have JUST managed to defeat the Robeast who was formally known as Myzax. HOWEVER Zarkon is trying a more DIFFRENT approach with Sendak his second and a handful of his troops...I wonder what dirty sneaky rotten trick are they going to employ? See you next update whenever you can manage it so I can find out! Later!
11Thomas DrovinWelcome back! I see that despite their personal issues our Paladins of Voltron have JUST managed to defeat the Robeast who was formally known as Myzax. HOWEVER Zarkon is trying a more DIFFRENT approach with Sendak his second and a handful of his troops...I wonder what dirty sneaky rotten trick are they going to employ? See you next update whenever you can manage it so I can find out! Later!
1/30/2020 c10 Shiranai Atsune
Yey! A new update!
Yey! A new update!
1/11/2020 c9 Serpentdragon
Nice work, Spirit. This is definitely a good first half to our concept for the fight
Nice work, Spirit. This is definitely a good first half to our concept for the fight
1/10/2020 c9 Thomas Drovin
Hey there welcome back for 2020! I see that our Paladins are going against Haggar's Robeast...no doubt the first of MANY...that is IF they survive battling it. From what I read in this chapter that may be a BIG problem due to Felecia's single minded stubbornness trying to find her missing Amrita and distrust of Marcus...can they get their act together in time to defeat the Robeast or doom Arus? See you next chapter whenever you can manage it so I can see what happens next! Later!
PS: Having the Princess as the 'Lion Goddess' to help convince the natives was a good idea...but perhaps it for the best they don't know just HOW much trouble she's having with her lions and their pilots. *Chuckles*
PPS: I have no doubts WHO Zarkon was talking to but I won't say anything yet in case I'm wrong. Cheers!
Hey there welcome back for 2020! I see that our Paladins are going against Haggar's Robeast...no doubt the first of MANY...that is IF they survive battling it. From what I read in this chapter that may be a BIG problem due to Felecia's single minded stubbornness trying to find her missing Amrita and distrust of Marcus...can they get their act together in time to defeat the Robeast or doom Arus? See you next chapter whenever you can manage it so I can see what happens next! Later!
PS: Having the Princess as the 'Lion Goddess' to help convince the natives was a good idea...but perhaps it for the best they don't know just HOW much trouble she's having with her lions and their pilots. *Chuckles*
PPS: I have no doubts WHO Zarkon was talking to but I won't say anything yet in case I'm wrong. Cheers!
5/10/2019 c8 Thomas Drovin
Welcome back! I see our Paladins have to REALLY work on their teamwork if they want to form Voltron, of course different personalities and such can cause frictions and THIS leads to problems! Speaking of problems...it doesn't surprise me that the castle's systems are so worn out, what do you expect after 10,000 years? Meanwhile it seems that Haggar has drummed up a Robeast to take on Voltron!
I REALLY hope that Felecia does the right thing and goes to help her team, even if she DOES get the data she needs it won't do her or ANYONE any good if they're all dead now will it? I'll see you next chapter whenever you can manage it so I can find out what happens next! Later!
Welcome back! I see our Paladins have to REALLY work on their teamwork if they want to form Voltron, of course different personalities and such can cause frictions and THIS leads to problems! Speaking of problems...it doesn't surprise me that the castle's systems are so worn out, what do you expect after 10,000 years? Meanwhile it seems that Haggar has drummed up a Robeast to take on Voltron!
I REALLY hope that Felecia does the right thing and goes to help her team, even if she DOES get the data she needs it won't do her or ANYONE any good if they're all dead now will it? I'll see you next chapter whenever you can manage it so I can find out what happens next! Later!
5/3/2019 c7 Thomas Drovin
Hey there welcome back! I see that our friends DESPITE creating Voltron need a lot of work working together from what I read. Its amazing how desperate times help the in the first battle, but when NOT in real trouble things get difficult! *Chuckles*
Also it wasn't JUT the Paladins the Castle needs work too, but after 10,000 years I can understand this, the systems haven't been properly used and need work, like the Paladins. But these things can be dealt with in time...which no doubt Haggar is doing for Zarkon I'll bet.
Marcus' behaviour was very odd indeed towards the END of this chapter, and I wouldn't put it past Zarkon if Haggar had something to do with it, she IS a witch after all. Anyway...all will be revealed next chapter right? See you then whenever you can manage it! Later!
Hey there welcome back! I see that our friends DESPITE creating Voltron need a lot of work working together from what I read. Its amazing how desperate times help the in the first battle, but when NOT in real trouble things get difficult! *Chuckles*
Also it wasn't JUT the Paladins the Castle needs work too, but after 10,000 years I can understand this, the systems haven't been properly used and need work, like the Paladins. But these things can be dealt with in time...which no doubt Haggar is doing for Zarkon I'll bet.
Marcus' behaviour was very odd indeed towards the END of this chapter, and I wouldn't put it past Zarkon if Haggar had something to do with it, she IS a witch after all. Anyway...all will be revealed next chapter right? See you then whenever you can manage it! Later!
4/19/2019 c6 Thomas Drovin
Welcome back! Why is it that Heroes ALWAYS leave things so dammed close when it comes to fighting bad guys? Our Voltron Paladins are EXTREMELY lucky they managed to pull off forming Voltron at the last minute. Of course Voltron saved the day but NOW...Zarkon is NOT going to be happy about this new development and he'll be hell bent on DESTROYING Voltron before he becomes a too bigger problem!
I'm happy to hear that after this chapter things will start being different, I look forward to what you have in mind. If you have any problems or in need of characters or ideas I'll be around. Have a Happy Easter and see you next update in May! Cheers!
Welcome back! Why is it that Heroes ALWAYS leave things so dammed close when it comes to fighting bad guys? Our Voltron Paladins are EXTREMELY lucky they managed to pull off forming Voltron at the last minute. Of course Voltron saved the day but NOW...Zarkon is NOT going to be happy about this new development and he'll be hell bent on DESTROYING Voltron before he becomes a too bigger problem!
I'm happy to hear that after this chapter things will start being different, I look forward to what you have in mind. If you have any problems or in need of characters or ideas I'll be around. Have a Happy Easter and see you next update in May! Cheers!
4/14/2019 c5 Serpentdragon
To those reading and noticing how similar these last few chapters are to the show: don’t worry, as the story progresses, Spirit and I begin to do more of our own thing with it. We followed more closely the first few episodes just to get everything set up
To those reading and noticing how similar these last few chapters are to the show: don’t worry, as the story progresses, Spirit and I begin to do more of our own thing with it. We followed more closely the first few episodes just to get everything set up
4/13/2019 c5 Thomas Drovin
Well its a good strategy our friends have got going so far. Tony and Kevin are battling Sendak and his fleet...but if he produces a Robeast they are in REAL trouble. Felecia and Marcus are searching for the Galaran Prisoners...good luck trying to get THEM away without getting caught. And Sasuke FOUND the Red Lion but, surprise, surprise, it's being DIFFICULT! It's all due to that bonding thing between the Lion and its Pilot. HOPEFULLY things can be cleared up before time runs out...the suspense is KILLING me! See you next update whenever you can manage it so I can see the results! Later!
Well its a good strategy our friends have got going so far. Tony and Kevin are battling Sendak and his fleet...but if he produces a Robeast they are in REAL trouble. Felecia and Marcus are searching for the Galaran Prisoners...good luck trying to get THEM away without getting caught. And Sasuke FOUND the Red Lion but, surprise, surprise, it's being DIFFICULT! It's all due to that bonding thing between the Lion and its Pilot. HOPEFULLY things can be cleared up before time runs out...the suspense is KILLING me! See you next update whenever you can manage it so I can see the results! Later!
4/13/2019 c4 Thomas Drovin
Welcome back! I see that our Paladins of Voltron had to act and think FAST to find the lions of Voltron as the Galra Fleet closed in on them. However Sendak and his followers are now at Arus and they don't have ALL the lions yet, I feel that SOMEONE is going to get a nasty shock REAL soon...perhaps both sides. I'll read on and find out onwards!
Welcome back! I see that our Paladins of Voltron had to act and think FAST to find the lions of Voltron as the Galra Fleet closed in on them. However Sendak and his followers are now at Arus and they don't have ALL the lions yet, I feel that SOMEONE is going to get a nasty shock REAL soon...perhaps both sides. I'll read on and find out onwards!
4/5/2019 c1 Shiranai Atsune
What's this? A series rewrite with other characters?
What's this? A series rewrite with other characters?
3/31/2019 c1 desmond bot
I forgot to ask in other review will the altea mices from Voltron Legendary Defender be in the stroy as well just ask
I forgot to ask in other review will the altea mices from Voltron Legendary Defender be in the stroy as well just ask
3/29/2019 c3 Thomas Drovin
Hey there welcome back! I see in THIS Universe that the princess of Arus is called Erina and her vizier is named Dardarian. Like a certain OTHER vizier he's a bit 'out there' but means well. Still our friends have been awoken and now they have to find the other Lions that make Voltron before Zarkon's Fleet find them as he's put the word out to guys like Sendak. IS Arus STILL in existence in this Universe? I mean if Sendak is going there to look for Erina it seems like it, but is it HABITABLE? Questions and few answers! See you next update whenever you can manage it so I can see what happens next! Later!
Hey there welcome back! I see in THIS Universe that the princess of Arus is called Erina and her vizier is named Dardarian. Like a certain OTHER vizier he's a bit 'out there' but means well. Still our friends have been awoken and now they have to find the other Lions that make Voltron before Zarkon's Fleet find them as he's put the word out to guys like Sendak. IS Arus STILL in existence in this Universe? I mean if Sendak is going there to look for Erina it seems like it, but is it HABITABLE? Questions and few answers! See you next update whenever you can manage it so I can see what happens next! Later!
3/29/2019 c3 desmond bot
I got to say I real like is story it got full potenial hope to see more soon and to ask will it have the same humour as in the show
I got to say I real like is story it got full potenial hope to see more soon and to ask will it have the same humour as in the show
3/15/2019 c2 Thomas Drovin
Well, well, well! Marcus has returned and its OBVIOUS that whoever took him is obviously NOT friendly judging by his urgency to find 'Voltron.' Marcus' pals Kevin, Felecia, Tony and Sasuke are in for quite a surprise and adventure now! That is IF their enemies don't catch them first as they have now made it to number one on their 'to do' list as it were. Keep up the good work and see you next update whenever you can manage it! Later!
PS: If you want ideas for future stories give me a buzz I have one or two up my sleeve. Cheers!
Well, well, well! Marcus has returned and its OBVIOUS that whoever took him is obviously NOT friendly judging by his urgency to find 'Voltron.' Marcus' pals Kevin, Felecia, Tony and Sasuke are in for quite a surprise and adventure now! That is IF their enemies don't catch them first as they have now made it to number one on their 'to do' list as it were. Keep up the good work and see you next update whenever you can manage it! Later!
PS: If you want ideas for future stories give me a buzz I have one or two up my sleeve. Cheers!