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6/7/2019 c11 84Master Shorty 11
It feels like I haven't read one of your stories in forever. Lord, your work is improving. Just add more grammer and remember not to rush anything. Make sure there aren't a ton of timeskips and keep writing if it's your passion.
4/14/2019 c10 Guest
I know you’re a fairly young writer and everything but here’s a pro tip: please don’t use Japanese honorifics and anime tropes.

Those really take away and hinder the writing piece more than they help.
2/8/2019 c1 9Mayumi's World
All of these “Chan”s might get annoying...

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