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4/6/2019 c1 Guest
Love it!
3/8/2019 c1 kitanaspoon
you should make a story wher zatch does come back
2/8/2019 c1 2CC-Saito
Hi there! I read the summary for this and thought, "This sounds familiar. Is it...It is!" I read your one-shot in Spanish and loved it! I didn't review it because it was posted a long time ago, so there didn't seem to be any point. I love this story. It is so simple, yet so sweet. The ending was beautiful because it makes you think the longer Zatch and Kiyomaro are apart, the more they'll have to say to each other when, one day, they get together again, and that idea is what makes the bittersweet ending of Zatch Bell so perfect and why these post-ending fics are the best way to pay tribute to the series—not those mediocre (and incomplete) rehashings of the Battle to Decide the King. I'm glad you translated this story. I will add both to my pointless C2 of top ZB fanfics.

Cheers!

CC-Saito.
2/8/2019 c1 14Fop626
Hey, this was a cute story!

I'm not a KiyoxSuzy fan, but this was still cute. I thought the story was just going to be about Kiyo missing Zatch, but it sure took a turn when you brought in Suzy and his son. It was a surprise, and nicely put in. When his son was tugging at his pant leg, I thought it was going to be him remembering Zatch doing that to him, and we get a flashback of when they were young, but I was sure surprised.

Also, if you need help with your grammar, I don't mind helping you. You actually did well translating it. There were a few mistakes you could have improved here and there, but not anything too overwhelming. It was good overall.

Can't wait to read more from you.

~Fop

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