
2/9/2019 c1
4Didact Brainiac 99
Well, I've watched a few of the DBZ Abridged videos am I almost dropped dead from laughing! I love the concept of this story and your grammar is on point. Plus, I think you got the characters right! Good first try man!

Well, I've watched a few of the DBZ Abridged videos am I almost dropped dead from laughing! I love the concept of this story and your grammar is on point. Plus, I think you got the characters right! Good first try man!
2/9/2019 c1
6goodyfresh
You do know that Bulma didn't just get TICKETS on a cruise for 17 and his family, right? SHE GAVE THEM AN ENTIRE CRUISE SHIP all for their own use. At the beginning of the story, you say she got them tickets, but yeah, the richest woman in the world wouldn't be that cheap when getting a congratulatory gift for a friend's brother who saved the multiverse. She literally gave him an entire top of the line luxury cruise ship, so when he is on that cruise with his family, there is no one else on t4he ship besides them and presumably the crew who maintain and operate the ship.

You do know that Bulma didn't just get TICKETS on a cruise for 17 and his family, right? SHE GAVE THEM AN ENTIRE CRUISE SHIP all for their own use. At the beginning of the story, you say she got them tickets, but yeah, the richest woman in the world wouldn't be that cheap when getting a congratulatory gift for a friend's brother who saved the multiverse. She literally gave him an entire top of the line luxury cruise ship, so when he is on that cruise with his family, there is no one else on t4he ship besides them and presumably the crew who maintain and operate the ship.
2/9/2019 c1 Guest
Hey why don't you make the gods and angels watch dbs series from episode 1 to 131
Hey why don't you make the gods and angels watch dbs series from episode 1 to 131