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11/28/2020 c3 CookingRice
Honestly, this story has a lot of holes. The grammer could define lyrics use some work, but the writing overall isn't too bad. Dunno how well versed you are on either Fate or Akame ga Kill, but there are some mistakes in the story. First off, I'm pretty sure Shirou exposed himself to Esdeath 1st chapter, dunno why she thinks he's just a normal swordsman. Secondly, there's 48 teigu total. So the empire having a vault of 32 doesn't make sense...
11/9/2020 c10 DBS GoKaNaKi
No era lo que esperaba pero estoy satisfecho
Ya que no hay muchas historias de Shirou en Akame ga kill, muchas fueron olvidadas
Aún que fue apresurado con leves errores
Me gustó y me hubiera gustado también leer un epílogo sobre la vida de Shirou y esdeath
4/1/2020 c10 the-lost-memories6
Intresting story
Sad that there's are no new chapters to read
2/26/2020 c1 46Hikari Nova
...i'm guessing a poor attempt at a self insert as shirou seeing as you're constantly switching back and forth between first and 3rd person when it comes to shirou as you're using first person pronouns instead of shirou's name
10/8/2019 c10 Lucas Oliveira1
it's okay he used more nerves than circuits anyway
9/22/2019 c10 Experius
Продолжение!
9/5/2019 c5 TheChoZenFive
I'm out. Peace.
7/22/2019 c1 Shlags
since you asked, I wont read it
7/21/2019 c4 WolfGodMaster
ILYA is in love with her brother or is this a diffrent timeline?
6/15/2019 c10 1Khororhoth jugment
HAHAHAHAHAHA
6/12/2019 c10 Harbinger of Mayhem
Don't read this it's not worth your time. It's so rushed that its not even funny.
6/12/2019 c2 2FerunaLutelou
First of all, install grammarly. Second, when there is more then one magus, its magi, not maguses. Third, why the fuck does everyone ignore Shirous and Illiyas names? "My name is eastern and my Sister name is western and also sound like a name of a noble" and nobody asks how it is possible. Fourth, why did they give their full names while everyone else gave only their first names? Fifth, why cant they reveal their magic? They can just say its a Teigu. Especially if they dont show everything they can do. Also, in the first chapter Esdeath knew about the strange blades and Shirous other bullshit, so why did he not call him out on that during or after the fight.

Im done. This story is a fucking mess.
6/12/2019 c1 FerunaLutelou
This is retarded. Shirou doesnt respect the law cause of his belief in it, he tries not to break it cause it may lead to conflict and unneeded human suffering. He has no reason to surrender here, especially knowing what people say about Esdeath and cause of her stinking of others blood. He already knows that the system is heavily corrupted, so even if Esdeath wasnt a corrupt cruel bitch (what are the chances), someone under her command or one of her superriors is 100% a corrupt asshole. Also, he didnt even show his strength or character and he already stole her heart? Bullshit.
6/11/2019 c10 Frozen Fire
Ending it worst than canon? That's just bull. Tatsumi still died and Shirou crippled himself for no reason. Even without his intervention, Emperor Robot would still be destroyed. But now he can't Trace anymore. That's like Harry Potter losing his magic or Naruto without Chakra.
6/7/2019 c9 TeotakuFantasia
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