
2/17 c54 Gemini-Spark
Okay this story now sucks it started good but then you made Motohama the Red Dragon Emperor taking the spotlight away from Issei should have used Aika,Murayama or Katase as the Red Dragon Emperor the other Harem MC then you stuck too close to canon as if Issei being as strong as he is didn't cause ripples and now the massive crossovers this story is a mess how can a being like Renekton exist without anyone being the wiser you made a Heavenly Dragon class being appear out of nowhere.
Okay this story now sucks it started good but then you made Motohama the Red Dragon Emperor taking the spotlight away from Issei should have used Aika,Murayama or Katase as the Red Dragon Emperor the other Harem MC then you stuck too close to canon as if Issei being as strong as he is didn't cause ripples and now the massive crossovers this story is a mess how can a being like Renekton exist without anyone being the wiser you made a Heavenly Dragon class being appear out of nowhere.
2/17 c55 anwarkhalil119
Yeah all this cross overs are killing my mood to read the story
It was very good at the start but now it feels like you are making up character and buffing them just to give issei a challange
I honestly get it as it is hard to write and op character right without it becoming boring but thats the reason I read this in the first place cause he is suppose to be op being the son of the 2 strongest beings in the draconic deus
Now I really hope you kill that extra dragon and stop adding character to an already crowded world filled with tons of supernaturals
But its your story and good luck with it I just stated my opinion on your story because I really like it and hope to continue reading it
Yeah all this cross overs are killing my mood to read the story
It was very good at the start but now it feels like you are making up character and buffing them just to give issei a challange
I honestly get it as it is hard to write and op character right without it becoming boring but thats the reason I read this in the first place cause he is suppose to be op being the son of the 2 strongest beings in the draconic deus
Now I really hope you kill that extra dragon and stop adding character to an already crowded world filled with tons of supernaturals
But its your story and good luck with it I just stated my opinion on your story because I really like it and hope to continue reading it
2/17 c55
3RonaldM40196867
You learn something new everyday.
Now that was enlightening.
Happy Presidents’ Day!

You learn something new everyday.
Now that was enlightening.
Happy Presidents’ Day!
2/8 c54
3OechsnerC
Awesome update. Really looking forward to seeing more of the fight. Wonder what move issei will do.

Awesome update. Really looking forward to seeing more of the fight. Wonder what move issei will do.
2/7 c54
2Kitsuneforlife0
i love the story but i feel like its. well just all over the place now im personally losing the will to read this and ive reread tbis multiple times because i really enjoyed it but this latest chaper took all that energy out of me. hope your successful in you endeavors ill provide a better review at some later point unless i forget

i love the story but i feel like its. well just all over the place now im personally losing the will to read this and ive reread tbis multiple times because i really enjoyed it but this latest chaper took all that energy out of me. hope your successful in you endeavors ill provide a better review at some later point unless i forget
1/18 c8 danlocke7
My guess for who you used as inspiration/influence for Issei’s dragon form is Alduin
My guess for who you used as inspiration/influence for Issei’s dragon form is Alduin
12/30/2024 c41 ItzJoe
now i remember why i dropped this, i cant stand that you just replaced issei with matsuda, so cheap!
now i remember why i dropped this, i cant stand that you just replaced issei with matsuda, so cheap!
12/22/2024 c53 Dakota
Idk y u made issei seem weak in these last chapters all he has to do is go full power like u said in earlier chapters that he can use it for an hour then make him use his fire or lightning to obliterate that crock guy then deal with the others! Oh and he could have gave a roar to call his parents to help it would have been easy to solve all of this!
Idk y u made issei seem weak in these last chapters all he has to do is go full power like u said in earlier chapters that he can use it for an hour then make him use his fire or lightning to obliterate that crock guy then deal with the others! Oh and he could have gave a roar to call his parents to help it would have been easy to solve all of this!
12/19/2024 c53 Church21
So many great story ideas ruined by having Issei as the MC. Really its a great idea and i like your writing but no matter how OC you make him Issei will always be the idiotic boob dragon to me. Really wish you’d have gone with an OC MC not named Issei
So many great story ideas ruined by having Issei as the MC. Really its a great idea and i like your writing but no matter how OC you make him Issei will always be the idiotic boob dragon to me. Really wish you’d have gone with an OC MC not named Issei