for Son of the dragon gods2/21/2019 c3 Ion del inator
Not to worry ?!
The conversation is good
But be careful about the story some people's will not understand they idea itself .
But a good one about Akeno I was thinking you will put Rias but it works .
Plus :
Put Issei with a sacred gear , will be a some ?!
And I read a story from wattpad wath is cooled "Apocalypse Dragon God emperor" and in that story was something wicke it my bee a good a idea, is cooled "Lost gears" how with you like to make a story about those . And don't try to make issei very weich . And went it comes the time about Shalba to come to capture him make hi 2 sacred gears active and make him beat him(Shalba) and the athers very isei but don't make them take Orphies , Great Red, iseei. And good luck with this volume ?!
Not to worry ?!
The conversation is good
But be careful about the story some people's will not understand they idea itself .
But a good one about Akeno I was thinking you will put Rias but it works .
Plus :
Put Issei with a sacred gear , will be a some ?!
And I read a story from wattpad wath is cooled "Apocalypse Dragon God emperor" and in that story was something wicke it my bee a good a idea, is cooled "Lost gears" how with you like to make a story about those . And don't try to make issei very weich . And went it comes the time about Shalba to come to capture him make hi 2 sacred gears active and make him beat him(Shalba) and the athers very isei but don't make them take Orphies , Great Red, iseei. And good luck with this volume ?!
32/18/2019 c2 Guest
I thought it was very good, I'll be waiting on the next chapter
I thought it was very good, I'll be waiting on the next chapter
2/19/2019 c2 Ion del inator
Î like wen it began and the middle bat wen it began the capture with shalba it started to feel very bad .
I'm sorry to say baut you have to make shalba lose this fight it will make the story even more interesting .
Truste me !? It will make even more good .
Plus: could you make a story about "Lost gears " it will make a great story . And one about "Transcend beains". PLLLLLLSSSSSSSS
Î like wen it began and the middle bat wen it began the capture with shalba it started to feel very bad .
I'm sorry to say baut you have to make shalba lose this fight it will make the story even more interesting .
Truste me !? It will make even more good .
Plus: could you make a story about "Lost gears " it will make a great story . And one about "Transcend beains". PLLLLLLSSSSSSSS
2/17/2019 c2 dont do it dude
dont kidnap issei dude make it a happy one
dont kidnap issei dude make it a happy one
2/17/2019 c2 Guest
This is really good so far, keep it up :)))
This is really good so far, keep it up :)))
2/16/2019 c1 Guest
I love all those Storys with Issei as GR's son. Your story is also good, so I look forward to Mode. -
I love all those Storys with Issei as GR's son. Your story is also good, so I look forward to Mode. -
2/16/2019 c1 Guest
Interesting start! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Interesting start! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
2/17/2019 c2 darth56
so nice to read a new chapter to this story it has been a very good read so seals on him so that is to keep him weak so he can get in trouble? so we will see
so nice to read a new chapter to this story it has been a very good read so seals on him so that is to keep him weak so he can get in trouble? so we will see
2/17/2019 c1 Radagast1
Not bad good so far you should also post tgis at webnovel if you want a greater reach for your story
Not bad good so far you should also post tgis at webnovel if you want a greater reach for your story
2/17/2019 c2 ZarcEternal
Okay nice second chapter, always love emotional Ophis more than bland and nothing. Also I say this the Old-Satans are dead, I know they are prideful and stupid, but this idea will be their end. Had they thought of using Samael or a Dragon Slayer , maybe 1% success. Now they will piss of two Dragon Gods and mostlikely die. Cant wait for more
Okay nice second chapter, always love emotional Ophis more than bland and nothing. Also I say this the Old-Satans are dead, I know they are prideful and stupid, but this idea will be their end. Had they thought of using Samael or a Dragon Slayer , maybe 1% success. Now they will piss of two Dragon Gods and mostlikely die. Cant wait for more