for Son of the dragon gods11/11/2024 c52 cobin.michael
I don't play League of Legends. I thought he was some random miscreant from the Egyptian Pantheon.
I don't play League of Legends. I thought he was some random miscreant from the Egyptian Pantheon.
11/9/2024 c28 
6Jakeros
Not sure if i mentioned this in an earlier review but could you please not switch from third person to first person pov? It's extremely jarring from a reader's standpoint. If you're going to write from either first or third person, stick to one or the otherbe consistent.
6JakerosNot sure if i mentioned this in an earlier review but could you please not switch from third person to first person pov? It's extremely jarring from a reader's standpoint. If you're going to write from either first or third person, stick to one or the otherbe consistent.
9/24/2024 c1 Einar1
I finally found this story again. I have been looking for 2 years after I found it on YouTube one day, and I loved it, but then it suddenly disappeared. and now I found the author. you are an awesome wrighter
I finally found this story again. I have been looking for 2 years after I found it on YouTube one day, and I loved it, but then it suddenly disappeared. and now I found the author. you are an awesome wrighter
8/30/2024 c51 Guest
I can't wait for the fight to start. It's looks like it will be great.
I can't wait for the fight to start. It's looks like it will be great.
8/30/2024 c1 Terracotta Tortilla
Ew, you've somehow taken unlikable characters and made them worse. Ophis is some yapping bimbo now too, because of course we can never have enough one dimensional characters.
Ew, you've somehow taken unlikable characters and made them worse. Ophis is some yapping bimbo now too, because of course we can never have enough one dimensional characters.
8/28/2024 c20 Oppai Dragon70
ok.. following your train of thought Rizevim is the first grandchild then does that then make Vali the first great-grandchild (son)?
ok.. following your train of thought Rizevim is the first grandchild then does that then make Vali the first great-grandchild (son)?
8/1/2024 c51 dbh13
I've enjoyed the story thus far. Not sure if I am correct on the dates but it looks like the last time you have written into this story is about 4-5 year ago? are you going to continue?
I've enjoyed the story thus far. Not sure if I am correct on the dates but it looks like the last time you have written into this story is about 4-5 year ago? are you going to continue?
6/26/2024 c13 Krishna04
Good that Issei did not join the peerage as I would have dropped it there and then itself if he would have and i don't think it is necessary to even try
Good that Issei did not join the peerage as I would have dropped it there and then itself if he would have and i don't think it is necessary to even try
6/20/2024 c51 Dakota
The chapter was ok but it took u this long to get that out jeez I hope u can hurry up and get a few more chapters out this is ridiculous on how long u take to just get 1 damn chapter done and I'm not following that excuse that u were to busy to write a single chapter in over 6 months that's total bullshit, it would only take a half hour to an hour to make up a chapter at most! If u don't want to be serious about writing the story let us no so we can stop wasting our time coming back to look for ur story to see if there's more to read.
The chapter was ok but it took u this long to get that out jeez I hope u can hurry up and get a few more chapters out this is ridiculous on how long u take to just get 1 damn chapter done and I'm not following that excuse that u were to busy to write a single chapter in over 6 months that's total bullshit, it would only take a half hour to an hour to make up a chapter at most! If u don't want to be serious about writing the story let us no so we can stop wasting our time coming back to look for ur story to see if there's more to read.
6/19/2024 c51 Jd
I was wondering when the next chapter is coming out.
I was wondering when the next chapter is coming out.