
10/22/2019 c9 ZonZus
I can accept Rías not being in the Harem, I only ask that no bashing of the gremory takes place, it's really annoying. Still it's a shame really Rías and Issei are my OTP, but like I said I can live with it. I also like that the Harem is kept small, since I despise large harems, they just make no sense and devalue every character to the point of being one note.
I'd also appreciate it if Tiamat was not part of the Harem, or Gabriel, or anyone over a thousand.
When it comes to the Harem itself I'm hoping it's
Akeno, for obvious reasons as well as she's already established.
Raynare, because she can be OOC allowing you creative freedom to depict her anyway you want, and there was so much wasted potential with her.
Irina, because as opposed to Xenovia who is in just as many harems as Rías, rarely does anyone ever explore her character enough, especially when it comes to her love for Issei.
Finally Kuroka, because not only do I think she can relate to this Issei, what with being powerless to protect her sister, but I've always enjoyed the stories that involve healing Kuroka. Besides who better to have kids with than the Son of the 2 strongest beings in existence.
For whoever you make the new Red Dragon Emperor I only ask that they are either
A, an already established character in the series, preferably Human.
B, Not an OC character, Rías deserves better than that, I've got nothing against OC characters, but I hate the idea of a Main Female lead going to an OC. It just irks me ok.
C, If you must than make it a character from another series, whose circumstances can benefit the story as a whole. Mostly because I'd honestly prefer an already established character than an OC, even if they're from another series, because I can at least put a face to the name.
I can accept Rías not being in the Harem, I only ask that no bashing of the gremory takes place, it's really annoying. Still it's a shame really Rías and Issei are my OTP, but like I said I can live with it. I also like that the Harem is kept small, since I despise large harems, they just make no sense and devalue every character to the point of being one note.
I'd also appreciate it if Tiamat was not part of the Harem, or Gabriel, or anyone over a thousand.
When it comes to the Harem itself I'm hoping it's
Akeno, for obvious reasons as well as she's already established.
Raynare, because she can be OOC allowing you creative freedom to depict her anyway you want, and there was so much wasted potential with her.
Irina, because as opposed to Xenovia who is in just as many harems as Rías, rarely does anyone ever explore her character enough, especially when it comes to her love for Issei.
Finally Kuroka, because not only do I think she can relate to this Issei, what with being powerless to protect her sister, but I've always enjoyed the stories that involve healing Kuroka. Besides who better to have kids with than the Son of the 2 strongest beings in existence.
For whoever you make the new Red Dragon Emperor I only ask that they are either
A, an already established character in the series, preferably Human.
B, Not an OC character, Rías deserves better than that, I've got nothing against OC characters, but I hate the idea of a Main Female lead going to an OC. It just irks me ok.
C, If you must than make it a character from another series, whose circumstances can benefit the story as a whole. Mostly because I'd honestly prefer an already established character than an OC, even if they're from another series, because I can at least put a face to the name.
10/15/2019 c9 Guest
Love the story also I think someone already said this but I do think that you should make the character have a trait that’s somewhat similar to a trait you would see in an evil dragon. Nothing serious like him being homicidal towards all devils but something like an apathy for them due to his past and all seeing akeno “die” or like something you might see in crom crauch, being reasonable,honorable,and relatively relaxed but in battle is completely serious and brutal borderlining on being ruthless and cut throat. Just a suggestion still love the story
Love the story also I think someone already said this but I do think that you should make the character have a trait that’s somewhat similar to a trait you would see in an evil dragon. Nothing serious like him being homicidal towards all devils but something like an apathy for them due to his past and all seeing akeno “die” or like something you might see in crom crauch, being reasonable,honorable,and relatively relaxed but in battle is completely serious and brutal borderlining on being ruthless and cut throat. Just a suggestion still love the story
10/5/2019 c9 Khoashex
loving this though if i may suggest a intrtesting idea as a situation for ophis and red to solve as parents maybe have issei start intering a really dark place mentally and start edging towards evil dragon status be it from a growing hate towards the world due to akeno and shurmis deaths or a growing sense of apathy not something gull blown but something disturbing him mentally that ophis and great red as parents would have to solve
loving this though if i may suggest a intrtesting idea as a situation for ophis and red to solve as parents maybe have issei start intering a really dark place mentally and start edging towards evil dragon status be it from a growing hate towards the world due to akeno and shurmis deaths or a growing sense of apathy not something gull blown but something disturbing him mentally that ophis and great red as parents would have to solve
9/27/2019 c9
1AnimeWatcher1014
Please don’t make the OC that’s going to be the red dragon emperor a pervert. Make Vali and the OC great rivals to Issei.

Please don’t make the OC that’s going to be the red dragon emperor a pervert. Make Vali and the OC great rivals to Issei.
9/25/2019 c1 PikaMew1288
I wonder what a Daughter of the Dragon Gods would be like? Would she strike fear into the hearts of Ddraig and Albion? Seeing as Ddraig pissed off Tiamat, I could see him pissing off a stronger Female Dragon.
I wonder what a Daughter of the Dragon Gods would be like? Would she strike fear into the hearts of Ddraig and Albion? Seeing as Ddraig pissed off Tiamat, I could see him pissing off a stronger Female Dragon.
9/22/2019 c9 vanhellsing9000
I love this story i was upset about akeno (she is my fav dxd character) but i understand why you did wat u did so will akeno be rias's queen and will issei have a harem is yes can u plz think about adding grayfia, gabreiel, penmune, yasaka, tiamat, kalawana, xenovia, atumatsu, isabella, yubelluna and rosswisse i know its a long list but issei is a dragon (big appetite lol) anyhoo I really can't wait for the next chapter to come out keep up the fantastic work
I love this story i was upset about akeno (she is my fav dxd character) but i understand why you did wat u did so will akeno be rias's queen and will issei have a harem is yes can u plz think about adding grayfia, gabreiel, penmune, yasaka, tiamat, kalawana, xenovia, atumatsu, isabella, yubelluna and rosswisse i know its a long list but issei is a dragon (big appetite lol) anyhoo I really can't wait for the next chapter to come out keep up the fantastic work
9/19/2019 c9 Guest
So you're not going to put Rias in the harem? That kind of sucks since she's my favorite girl. I would like to point something out though: your reason seems contradictory. You say that you're not going to put Rias in the harem because she's in every Issei/harem story. So if that is the case, why is Akeno in the harem? In every harem story where Rias is in the harem, Akeno is always in the harem as well. I've come across stories where Akeno is in the harem, but Rias isn't. Also, as far as I know, I've never come across a story where Rias is in the harem, but Akeno isn't. If you are saying that Rias is used too much, then the exact same can be said for Akeno. She is used just as much, if not more, than Rias.
So you're not going to put Rias in the harem? That kind of sucks since she's my favorite girl. I would like to point something out though: your reason seems contradictory. You say that you're not going to put Rias in the harem because she's in every Issei/harem story. So if that is the case, why is Akeno in the harem? In every harem story where Rias is in the harem, Akeno is always in the harem as well. I've come across stories where Akeno is in the harem, but Rias isn't. Also, as far as I know, I've never come across a story where Rias is in the harem, but Akeno isn't. If you are saying that Rias is used too much, then the exact same can be said for Akeno. She is used just as much, if not more, than Rias.
9/18/2019 c9 Guest
So Rias won't be with Issei. Well then I'm done with this story.
So Rias won't be with Issei. Well then I'm done with this story.
9/18/2019 c9 Dragonsayianblue
It sad what happened. And as for the harem Akeno, Ingvild leviathan, Kounu. Those are my choice. Also since ophis and great red are together the khaos brigade going to need something else. Also I have a feeling issei going to be discriminating the devils when finding out akeno is a slave.
It sad what happened. And as for the harem Akeno, Ingvild leviathan, Kounu. Those are my choice. Also since ophis and great red are together the khaos brigade going to need something else. Also I have a feeling issei going to be discriminating the devils when finding out akeno is a slave.
9/20/2019 c9 Dragonborn2704
this has been amazing so far and i can't wait for more
to be compleatly honest i expected you to make it "the read dragon Empress" instead and have her be a part of the harem. i agree with you in the regard that that the red Emperor belongs with Rias and i can't wait for Isseis and Akenos reunion.
this has been amazing so far and i can't wait for more
to be compleatly honest i expected you to make it "the read dragon Empress" instead and have her be a part of the harem. i agree with you in the regard that that the red Emperor belongs with Rias and i can't wait for Isseis and Akenos reunion.
9/19/2019 c9 Djberneman
If great red is the dragon god of dreams, doesn’t that mean that he could turn dreams into reality and bring back Shuri and Akeno from death?
If great red is the dragon god of dreams, doesn’t that mean that he could turn dreams into reality and bring back Shuri and Akeno from death?
9/19/2019 c4 Dragonborn2704
i agree with you on the fact that it really dosen't make sence, but if that is what the people want-
honestly the the first time i eve have herd anybody be described as to overpowerd
really fun so far
i agree with you on the fact that it really dosen't make sence, but if that is what the people want-
honestly the the first time i eve have herd anybody be described as to overpowerd
really fun so far