
8/27/2019 c5 Guest
Give issei a little sister called Lilith
Give issei a little sister called Lilith
7/19/2019 c8 Guesty
Why?
I am confused. Issie and Akeno told them EVERYTHING, right?
So why? Why did adults not connect the dots.
Bara, was told by Azazel that there’s an organisation made by Ophis.
Ophis and Red mentioned said organisation in chapter one.
If Ise and Akeno said everything then the HUGE CLUE should be from the Devils’ own words. “Ophis owe us something.”
They should have had a clue WHO they are dealing with.
This is the only thing I am unable to get on with. Aside from this, everything is Perfect. At least for me.
Hope to see you again.
Why?
I am confused. Issie and Akeno told them EVERYTHING, right?
So why? Why did adults not connect the dots.
Bara, was told by Azazel that there’s an organisation made by Ophis.
Ophis and Red mentioned said organisation in chapter one.
If Ise and Akeno said everything then the HUGE CLUE should be from the Devils’ own words. “Ophis owe us something.”
They should have had a clue WHO they are dealing with.
This is the only thing I am unable to get on with. Aside from this, everything is Perfect. At least for me.
Hope to see you again.
7/9/2019 c8 Clown2107
I hope that one day you update.
Regarding the sacred gears, you are right Issei is already too powerful that he does not need it and that also implies that he can not become a demon besides being supposed to be a dragon god can not afford that.
and with respect to the celestial dragons you could make that Draig and Albion were never sealed and they are free traveling the world, they could even be feminine versions but that is already your decision.
I hope that one day you update.
Regarding the sacred gears, you are right Issei is already too powerful that he does not need it and that also implies that he can not become a demon besides being supposed to be a dragon god can not afford that.
and with respect to the celestial dragons you could make that Draig and Albion were never sealed and they are free traveling the world, they could even be feminine versions but that is already your decision.
7/6/2019 c8 Guest
Good work keep it up
Please send out some more
Good work keep it up
Please send out some more
6/15/2019 c8 Guest
did the next chapter will be followed the canon?
because i want see our dragon god in the academy, and see the reaction all devil's in the kuoh
and i suggest to not make issei so Over-Power and also don't make Issei involved with the riser later
just that and thank you if you read this.
plus i will waiting your update for next chapter :)
did the next chapter will be followed the canon?
because i want see our dragon god in the academy, and see the reaction all devil's in the kuoh
and i suggest to not make issei so Over-Power and also don't make Issei involved with the riser later
just that and thank you if you read this.
plus i will waiting your update for next chapter :)
6/6/2019 c8 Guest
So far good story I’m hooked. Keep up the good work author.
So far good story I’m hooked. Keep up the good work author.
5/29/2019 c8 Farkast
Ability
Domain:
It allows the total manipulation of a specific region of space-time.
With the powers of Ophis the limit is created and with those of great red it is given life. In this space everything that is created is real but can not escape from it, otherwise it would disappear.
It takes a great power, knowledge and wisdom to use, sustain and manage this ability in a versatile way.
Ability
Domain:
It allows the total manipulation of a specific region of space-time.
With the powers of Ophis the limit is created and with those of great red it is given life. In this space everything that is created is real but can not escape from it, otherwise it would disappear.
It takes a great power, knowledge and wisdom to use, sustain and manage this ability in a versatile way.
5/29/2019 c1 Matias Quinteros
Ah ... I forgot to say something to you, don't pay much attention to some specific readers, develop the story as you believe better, besides that evil peaces can not be used in greater existences of pure power like the dragons gods
Ah ... I forgot to say something to you, don't pay much attention to some specific readers, develop the story as you believe better, besides that evil peaces can not be used in greater existences of pure power like the dragons gods
5/28/2019 c8 Matias Quinteros
A great story but with a somewhat cliche title, your story far exceeded my low expectations, because they were low? Usually here in the fandom stories go up that always try the same and always have the same mistakes: They rush too much to want to develop the plot and its characters, Issei super OP without almost having any valid explanation or training, not knowing the canon correctly, having a bad grammar and not having much coherence in the events that happen in their stories ... but my friend, these errors They do not happen much in your story, there may be some inconsistencies in the plot but they are only minor potholes that do not matter much, why? because you are narrating very well the course of your story, besides that even in the canon there are inconsistencies ... you know the canon perfectly well as to give a good sense to the plot of your story and you use the concept of Issei being a dragon god In a much more interesting and less hasty than other stories with the same concept, I take my hat off to you, continue with the great approach and don't worry much about altering the canon a little or about adding some arcs or new things to the history, as long as it goes in order and makes sense it will be perfect.
A great story but with a somewhat cliche title, your story far exceeded my low expectations, because they were low? Usually here in the fandom stories go up that always try the same and always have the same mistakes: They rush too much to want to develop the plot and its characters, Issei super OP without almost having any valid explanation or training, not knowing the canon correctly, having a bad grammar and not having much coherence in the events that happen in their stories ... but my friend, these errors They do not happen much in your story, there may be some inconsistencies in the plot but they are only minor potholes that do not matter much, why? because you are narrating very well the course of your story, besides that even in the canon there are inconsistencies ... you know the canon perfectly well as to give a good sense to the plot of your story and you use the concept of Issei being a dragon god In a much more interesting and less hasty than other stories with the same concept, I take my hat off to you, continue with the great approach and don't worry much about altering the canon a little or about adding some arcs or new things to the history, as long as it goes in order and makes sense it will be perfect.