
2/24/2019 c4
3OechsnerC
I would say the only way you could even put a sacred gear in is to have ophis or great red to find one, and make issei have a part of issei human but it really is not human just a fake part that makes him look human.

I would say the only way you could even put a sacred gear in is to have ophis or great red to find one, and make issei have a part of issei human but it really is not human just a fake part that makes him look human.
2/24/2019 c4 W4rfaceWarrior
You know that moment? You see the story you like has been updated. BOOOM. its an Q/A. Well, I personally dislike the idea of Issei having a SG. But maybe you could give him some special ability GR and Ophis dont have.
Love your story and keep it up.
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You know that moment? You see the story you like has been updated. BOOOM. its an Q/A. Well, I personally dislike the idea of Issei having a SG. But maybe you could give him some special ability GR and Ophis dont have.
Love your story and keep it up.
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2/23/2019 c4 Ion del inator
I so your notice and I mast say about "Lost Gears" isn't a bad idea, but you could try when you finish this story about "Son of the dragon gods".
You could try to make a story about issei having a "Sacred Gear" and a "Lost Gear" .
But you could try in this story the "Son of the Dragon gods" to make Issei having a some tip of immunity on "Dragon slayers" and the True Longinius(spare of destiny) . That will make a different dragon god .
And continue the story with Akeno and him .
Plus :
You could try to make him to know Rias from much youthful age .
I so your notice and I mast say about "Lost Gears" isn't a bad idea, but you could try when you finish this story about "Son of the dragon gods".
You could try to make a story about issei having a "Sacred Gear" and a "Lost Gear" .
But you could try in this story the "Son of the Dragon gods" to make Issei having a some tip of immunity on "Dragon slayers" and the True Longinius(spare of destiny) . That will make a different dragon god .
And continue the story with Akeno and him .
Plus :
You could try to make him to know Rias from much youthful age .
2/23/2019 c4
2Wargame-sama
well the closest thing he can have a sacred gear which is the Incinerate Anthem

well the closest thing he can have a sacred gear which is the Incinerate Anthem
2/21/2019 c3 Ion del inator
Not to worry ?!
The conversation is good
But be careful about the story some people's will not understand they idea itself .
But a good one about Akeno I was thinking you will put Rias but it works .
Plus :
Put Issei with a sacred gear , will be a some ?!
And I read a story from wattpad wath is cooled "Apocalypse Dragon God emperor" and in that story was something wicke it my bee a good a idea, is cooled "Lost gears" how with you like to make a story about those . And don't try to make issei very weich . And went it comes the time about Shalba to come to capture him make hi 2 sacred gears active and make him beat him(Shalba) and the athers very isei but don't make them take Orphies , Great Red, iseei. And good luck with this volume ?!
Not to worry ?!
The conversation is good
But be careful about the story some people's will not understand they idea itself .
But a good one about Akeno I was thinking you will put Rias but it works .
Plus :
Put Issei with a sacred gear , will be a some ?!
And I read a story from wattpad wath is cooled "Apocalypse Dragon God emperor" and in that story was something wicke it my bee a good a idea, is cooled "Lost gears" how with you like to make a story about those . And don't try to make issei very weich . And went it comes the time about Shalba to come to capture him make hi 2 sacred gears active and make him beat him(Shalba) and the athers very isei but don't make them take Orphies , Great Red, iseei. And good luck with this volume ?!
2/18/2019 c2 Guest
I thought it was very good, I'll be waiting on the next chapter
I thought it was very good, I'll be waiting on the next chapter
2/19/2019 c2 Ion del inator
Î like wen it began and the middle bat wen it began the capture with shalba it started to feel very bad .
I'm sorry to say baut you have to make shalba lose this fight it will make the story even more interesting .
Truste me !? It will make even more good .
Plus: could you make a story about "Lost gears " it will make a great story . And one about "Transcend beains". PLLLLLLSSSSSSSS
Î like wen it began and the middle bat wen it began the capture with shalba it started to feel very bad .
I'm sorry to say baut you have to make shalba lose this fight it will make the story even more interesting .
Truste me !? It will make even more good .
Plus: could you make a story about "Lost gears " it will make a great story . And one about "Transcend beains". PLLLLLLSSSSSSSS
2/17/2019 c2 dont do it dude
dont kidnap issei dude make it a happy one
dont kidnap issei dude make it a happy one
2/17/2019 c2 Guest
This is really good so far, keep it up :)))
This is really good so far, keep it up :)))