for Just A Child11/7/2022 c4 Marvelous Pathetic
Nice, I always thought shinobi battle should be like this; quick and sudden death, not like DBZ. When jinchuriki were deployed, the world should fear it’s wrath. It should be like battle of Kursk, when two sides pour everything they got to kill/cripple enemy’s jinchuriki.
Nice, I always thought shinobi battle should be like this; quick and sudden death, not like DBZ. When jinchuriki were deployed, the world should fear it’s wrath. It should be like battle of Kursk, when two sides pour everything they got to kill/cripple enemy’s jinchuriki.
11/7/2022 c2 Marvelous Pathetic
Nice, I like the writing style; Shinobis coming in to report casualties and progress, it adds seriousness to the situation combined with Hiruzen grim thought.
Nice, I like the writing style; Shinobis coming in to report casualties and progress, it adds seriousness to the situation combined with Hiruzen grim thought.
9/25/2022 c4 alsdjhfgljkwebgh
So do you actually plan to finish this, or are you planning on giving us a couple thousand words a decade? What's the point?
So do you actually plan to finish this, or are you planning on giving us a couple thousand words a decade? What's the point?
7/8/2022 c4 Entity
Why did you take down Perfection, the naruto fanfic you made ? I loved it so much
Why did you take down Perfection, the naruto fanfic you made ? I loved it so much
6/28/2022 c4 Artekha
Brutal. Read revolution first, for a second story the beginning isn't too bad, and I like it even if you say you don't. This one looks interesting too.
Brutal. Read revolution first, for a second story the beginning isn't too bad, and I like it even if you say you don't. This one looks interesting too.
6/28/2022 c4 
2Dragonkeeper10
Well shit, Han just died. Poor Han. May the Shinobi who crafted this insanity burn for their sins, of turning and sacrificing others to be weapons.
2Dragonkeeper10Well shit, Han just died. Poor Han. May the Shinobi who crafted this insanity burn for their sins, of turning and sacrificing others to be weapons.
6/28/2022 c4 I. P. Frealy
these are basically just snippets, you need to put more work into making them a story
these are basically just snippets, you need to put more work into making them a story