
11/8/2020 c32 Jsb999
She absorbed the saiyan bloodline. Why isn’t she using it?
She absorbed the saiyan bloodline. Why isn’t she using it?
6/19/2020 c20 elixirmaster
Ehh, I'm kinda against losing all humanity; makes it tough to relate. At least it's okay when she's acting (as a human).
Ehh, I'm kinda against losing all humanity; makes it tough to relate. At least it's okay when she's acting (as a human).
2/19/2020 c1 x2leoj
I like the idea, however the main character acts like a brat and her morals are a bit weird. You could have paced the first chapter a bit slower and given more descriptions/feelings considering its a very drastic change in body and world.
Im also wondering what her power level is and where in the timeline she is, lets see... onto the next chapter.
I like the idea, however the main character acts like a brat and her morals are a bit weird. You could have paced the first chapter a bit slower and given more descriptions/feelings considering its a very drastic change in body and world.
Im also wondering what her power level is and where in the timeline she is, lets see... onto the next chapter.
9/11/2019 c42 ffffonix769
I am so... sad that... the story is over...
It was my favorite story... but all good things come to end...
Thanks for the best story ever.
I am so... sad that... the story is over...
It was my favorite story... but all good things come to end...
Thanks for the best story ever.
7/6/2019 c5 Guest
Not sure she should need kaioken to be strong. She should have the same strength as kid Buu who while not as strong as a ssj3 should still be very strong on top of her extreme regeneration and stamina.
Not sure she should need kaioken to be strong. She should have the same strength as kid Buu who while not as strong as a ssj3 should still be very strong on top of her extreme regeneration and stamina.
7/6/2019 c2 Guest
It funny that she does not realize that she is a demon. Majin means demon.
It funny that she does not realize that she is a demon. Majin means demon.
5/22/2019 c41 Guest
This is a pretty good story maybe in your next one make Beerus god of destruction in the bleach universe
This is a pretty good story maybe in your next one make Beerus god of destruction in the bleach universe
5/20/2019 c17 Treksh
Indeed, hulk Buu mental emotions is a bad combo. Mc really needs to get some mental immunity and calm skills.
Indeed, hulk Buu mental emotions is a bad combo. Mc really needs to get some mental immunity and calm skills.
5/20/2019 c10 Treksh
... Mc should really place down 1000s of bits of herself all over the world in hidden places to act as phylacteries.
... Mc should really place down 1000s of bits of herself all over the world in hidden places to act as phylacteries.
5/20/2019 c9 Treksh
That system girl might be touble, she might one day get a skill which blocks mental effects which would make mcs enslavement null.
That system girl might be touble, she might one day get a skill which blocks mental effects which would make mcs enslavement null.