for The Dragon of Domination
14/23/2022 c1 kevinthegoat0304
So tell me if the problem is his weak body, then why don’t I know turn it into a fucking dragon body? I find that way more realistic rather than a dragon giving up his pride. Dragons are the strongest race for a reason. He can still be affiliated with the 3 factions. To turn him into a devil and for him to fake start as a devil is basically just canon issei but hornier and more perverted.
So tell me if the problem is his weak body, then why don’t I know turn it into a fucking dragon body? I find that way more realistic rather than a dragon giving up his pride. Dragons are the strongest race for a reason. He can still be affiliated with the 3 factions. To turn him into a devil and for him to fake start as a devil is basically just canon issei but hornier and more perverted.
3/14/2022 c8 Blue Amateur
This is by far the best story you have written so far.
I don't know whether it's because your character is being more gentle or if the victims are usually sexualized in the source material, or even if it is much more psychological in nature but this is the first story where I am eager to see what comes next.
I wasn't able to read your Harry Potter stories and dropped them after only a few chapters, but this is the finest work I have seen from you.
Thank you for the chapters.
This is by far the best story you have written so far.
I don't know whether it's because your character is being more gentle or if the victims are usually sexualized in the source material, or even if it is much more psychological in nature but this is the first story where I am eager to see what comes next.
I wasn't able to read your Harry Potter stories and dropped them after only a few chapters, but this is the finest work I have seen from you.
Thank you for the chapters.
3/14/2022 c3 Blue Amateur
Another Chapter, and again, I find myself not enjoying the fucked up things he does but really liking the interactions, especially the veiled digs and using his knowledge for laughs.
You are really good at writing stories, with extensive trains of thoughts and dialogue.
I wish you would consider writing a wholesome story with smut like Graefoxx's "The Last Prayer" or "The Name of the Game" by literalsin, instead of always going for the creep characters you always do.
Another Chapter, and again, I find myself not enjoying the fucked up things he does but really liking the interactions, especially the veiled digs and using his knowledge for laughs.
You are really good at writing stories, with extensive trains of thoughts and dialogue.
I wish you would consider writing a wholesome story with smut like Graefoxx's "The Last Prayer" or "The Name of the Game" by literalsin, instead of always going for the creep characters you always do.
3/14/2022 c3 Blue Amateur
I generally dislike stories where the MC objectifies everyone around him and uses them as goals to be conquered rather than fellow peers.
You did a fantastic job with the characterization of Rias and her psychology.
I generally dislike stories where the MC objectifies everyone around him and uses them as goals to be conquered rather than fellow peers.
You did a fantastic job with the characterization of Rias and her psychology.
3/14/2022 c2 Blue Amateur
The Jaleousy part was so brillant.
I had a hearty laugh throughout that scene. It's such a smart idea and obvious enough for anyone to find it, but the execution was hilarious.
The Jaleousy part was so brillant.
I had a hearty laugh throughout that scene. It's such a smart idea and obvious enough for anyone to find it, but the execution was hilarious.
2/24/2022 c8 Zack Lynch
This was amazing. Loved it. Especially when Rias moved her hips on her own and then kissed him.
This was amazing. Loved it. Especially when Rias moved her hips on her own and then kissed him.
2/11/2022 c15 Dink
*Horny Bonk*
*Horny Bonk*
1/2/2022 c6 AlphaKenny1
Wait what? You mention that Issei changed his plan when he discover Asia healing powers, leading to him purposely getting stab, Yet in the same chapter you said that he didn't want to be heal because he thought she was using holy magic. Then what the fuck was the purpose of him getting stab?
Wait what? You mention that Issei changed his plan when he discover Asia healing powers, leading to him purposely getting stab, Yet in the same chapter you said that he didn't want to be heal because he thought she was using holy magic. Then what the fuck was the purpose of him getting stab?