
1/19/2021 c4 kelly
this is really good.
this is really good.
12/4/2020 c2
1MysticRising
You know it would be a really cool idea if Tsuna helps facilitate Link getting the champion's abilities due to his harmony and legacy aspects. This way he fits the compaion motif of helping the hero in his power ups.
In addition he helps Link directionally, like he says they should go this direction because disaster is imminent like hateno being attacked or the divine beasts problem reaching it's apex.
Plus I think it is oddly fitting that his flames allow him to be in cold environments and maybe his affinity for fire gives him some heat resistance (or a thin layer of flames protects him from the environment) allowing him to traverse any of the environmental conditions.

You know it would be a really cool idea if Tsuna helps facilitate Link getting the champion's abilities due to his harmony and legacy aspects. This way he fits the compaion motif of helping the hero in his power ups.
In addition he helps Link directionally, like he says they should go this direction because disaster is imminent like hateno being attacked or the divine beasts problem reaching it's apex.
Plus I think it is oddly fitting that his flames allow him to be in cold environments and maybe his affinity for fire gives him some heat resistance (or a thin layer of flames protects him from the environment) allowing him to traverse any of the environmental conditions.
12/4/2020 c1 MysticRising
You know this is actually really fitting. Botw Link lacks a companion which is in the majority of the Zelda series. Having tsuna still a child and thus unable to truely fight prevents him from taking a more offensive nature except the most dire situations. However he can fly to avoid danger, and thus travel basically anywhere, his flames can offer mental reprieve, and he can even offer link advice the keystone to every companion in the series in the form of awareness of danger and potential solutions/weaknesses. Honestly the PERFECT companion.
And after this adventure he can either stay with his new found brother/father or go back to his world but more complete and healed from the trauma he was forced to live in. Either direction will fit Tsuna's fate.
You know this is actually really fitting. Botw Link lacks a companion which is in the majority of the Zelda series. Having tsuna still a child and thus unable to truely fight prevents him from taking a more offensive nature except the most dire situations. However he can fly to avoid danger, and thus travel basically anywhere, his flames can offer mental reprieve, and he can even offer link advice the keystone to every companion in the series in the form of awareness of danger and potential solutions/weaknesses. Honestly the PERFECT companion.
And after this adventure he can either stay with his new found brother/father or go back to his world but more complete and healed from the trauma he was forced to live in. Either direction will fit Tsuna's fate.
6/20/2019 c4
19storyreader21
Nice story. Is it bad that I hope that Tsuna travels with Link for his entire journey, and that when they get to Gerudo Town that Tsuna's stronger flames and intuition allows him to mimic the mist flames and actually change their gender so they can get into Gerudo Town. Hope not, though it probably is bad that if it does(which I hope) that I also hope that either Tsuna, Link, or both of them willfind that they prefer being a girl(It's probably bad, but the game involves crossdressing, and I really like stories where boys become girls especially if they prefer being girls though I like stories without it as well) Looking forward to the next chapter.

Nice story. Is it bad that I hope that Tsuna travels with Link for his entire journey, and that when they get to Gerudo Town that Tsuna's stronger flames and intuition allows him to mimic the mist flames and actually change their gender so they can get into Gerudo Town. Hope not, though it probably is bad that if it does(which I hope) that I also hope that either Tsuna, Link, or both of them willfind that they prefer being a girl(It's probably bad, but the game involves crossdressing, and I really like stories where boys become girls especially if they prefer being girls though I like stories without it as well) Looking forward to the next chapter.
3/9/2019 c2 Novirp13
Besides a problem of u sometimes forgot to add a comma (,) after finishing some sentences, this chapter is good
A bit of my opinion, rather than underline, maybe u can use Parenthesis "()" instead. Well, underline is good too tho' so it's up to u :D
Besides a problem of u sometimes forgot to add a comma (,) after finishing some sentences, this chapter is good
A bit of my opinion, rather than underline, maybe u can use Parenthesis "()" instead. Well, underline is good too tho' so it's up to u :D
2/26/2019 c1 Novirp13
Wait. This is Botw Link right? Why did he remember Aryll? Or is ur Link retain the previous Link memories?
Wait. This is Botw Link right? Why did he remember Aryll? Or is ur Link retain the previous Link memories?