for Close to You10/13/2021 c1 I want to read fanfic
I really enjoyed this. I also think the Natsu should've had more of a reaction to Lucy being completely alone. The only thing that was missing for me was no mentions of Aquarius. I really liked it though!
I really enjoyed this. I also think the Natsu should've had more of a reaction to Lucy being completely alone. The only thing that was missing for me was no mentions of Aquarius. I really liked it though!
3/6/2020 c1 
93Jedi Jelsa777
This was perfect, I too found Natsu's lack of feeling bad about leaving Lucy alone annoying, but this is the exactly right amount of feeling bad, comfort and promising to do better, well done!
93Jedi Jelsa777This was perfect, I too found Natsu's lack of feeling bad about leaving Lucy alone annoying, but this is the exactly right amount of feeling bad, comfort and promising to do better, well done!
2/24/2019 c1 Arisa-chan
Loved it ! a lot ! They're so perfect for each other !
It's obvious that Lucy is upset because Natsu left her. And without telling her face to face. And on top of that, the guild has disbanded.
It's kind of cute when everytime (in the manga) she reminds Natsu of the fact that he left her like that. Just with a note. And each time, Natsu is sweating and looks uncomfortable. He could tell her "I'm not your boyfriend, why do I need to announce my departure ?" But he's oddly silent, like he accepts her reprimand. As if she had the right to be angry at him.
It's like they're an old couple, hehe ! Maybe I'm exagerating, but I'd like to imagine I'm right.
Oh I forgot to say this, I don't blame Natsu for leaving, he's just lost Igneel, he needed to get away for awhile, and become stronger, and damn did he get stronger than before ?!
And he thought that Lucy was safer with the guild.
And now they're together once again ! and they confessed ! Yay! (cute scene at the end of this one-shot) "but right now she just wanted to be close to him" (so true !)
Loved it ! a lot ! They're so perfect for each other !
It's obvious that Lucy is upset because Natsu left her. And without telling her face to face. And on top of that, the guild has disbanded.
It's kind of cute when everytime (in the manga) she reminds Natsu of the fact that he left her like that. Just with a note. And each time, Natsu is sweating and looks uncomfortable. He could tell her "I'm not your boyfriend, why do I need to announce my departure ?" But he's oddly silent, like he accepts her reprimand. As if she had the right to be angry at him.
It's like they're an old couple, hehe ! Maybe I'm exagerating, but I'd like to imagine I'm right.
Oh I forgot to say this, I don't blame Natsu for leaving, he's just lost Igneel, he needed to get away for awhile, and become stronger, and damn did he get stronger than before ?!
And he thought that Lucy was safer with the guild.
And now they're together once again ! and they confessed ! Yay! (cute scene at the end of this one-shot) "but right now she just wanted to be close to him" (so true !)
2/23/2019 c1 Nanami B
I love how you write it in Natsu's pov, and i can feel his regret. The whole moment got me tear up a bit. Nice story and your writing is nice, okay and there's nothing wrong with it. It just nicely written and easy to read. I love it overall. Thank you for writing it :D
I love how you write it in Natsu's pov, and i can feel his regret. The whole moment got me tear up a bit. Nice story and your writing is nice, okay and there's nothing wrong with it. It just nicely written and easy to read. I love it overall. Thank you for writing it :D