
11/23 c88 GabrielTheMagnificent
Damn, this is just an amazing story. I read through it all in three days, keep up the great writing!
Damn, this is just an amazing story. I read through it all in three days, keep up the great writing!
11/20 c88 chibinh514e
Dakota, Dakota please, why are you leaving your Commander alone with an enemy Destroyer that has good reason to harm him? What kind of a shield are you?
Dakota, Dakota please, why are you leaving your Commander alone with an enemy Destroyer that has good reason to harm him? What kind of a shield are you?
11/20 c88 chibinh514e
I’m surprised it took this long for Thorson to be forced to fight dirty.
I get that he’s feeling bad l, but i hope he tell his dissenters to put a sock in it. You know you’re an idiot when the traditional Japanese warrior has more sense than you
I’m surprised it took this long for Thorson to be forced to fight dirty.
I get that he’s feeling bad l, but i hope he tell his dissenters to put a sock in it. You know you’re an idiot when the traditional Japanese warrior has more sense than you
11/18 c88
3KaijuKnight
Oof! That was equally epic and heartrending! I definitely understand Andrews need to keep his fleet safe, but I get the feeling that making a decision that puts him closer to Akagi in any way will take a toll on him. To say nothing of Massachusetts fury towards him and Akagi.
i also hope this doesn't put him on the outs with any of his other Kansen. Great chapter! Hope Jean Bart lives to be pissed at him.

Oof! That was equally epic and heartrending! I definitely understand Andrews need to keep his fleet safe, but I get the feeling that making a decision that puts him closer to Akagi in any way will take a toll on him. To say nothing of Massachusetts fury towards him and Akagi.
i also hope this doesn't put him on the outs with any of his other Kansen. Great chapter! Hope Jean Bart lives to be pissed at him.
11/17 c88
1skycomv2
I admit this chapter has me torn. My first oathed ship was Jean and my 2nd was Minnie. So while I am happy that Jean was the star of the show here, it seems you gave Jean several Iris event artifacts, and the holy annihilation cannon which I can't remember. She keeps pulling miracles out of a hat. Still it was fun, keep op the good work.

I admit this chapter has me torn. My first oathed ship was Jean and my 2nd was Minnie. So while I am happy that Jean was the star of the show here, it seems you gave Jean several Iris event artifacts, and the holy annihilation cannon which I can't remember. She keeps pulling miracles out of a hat. Still it was fun, keep op the good work.
11/17 c88 TehDIGI
Glad to see this get updated, and damn that cliffy, gonna have to wait to see what happens next, frankly after everything that has happened, i would have just bombarded Jean Bart and did that whole 1 on 1 crap. Wonder how this will cause drama now, will Massa and some of her sisters switch sides all because of this? After everything Thorson has done to them?
Glad to see this get updated, and damn that cliffy, gonna have to wait to see what happens next, frankly after everything that has happened, i would have just bombarded Jean Bart and did that whole 1 on 1 crap. Wonder how this will cause drama now, will Massa and some of her sisters switch sides all because of this? After everything Thorson has done to them?
9/19 c87
1Cemalidor
Poor Jean. ;_;
Nice touch with certain three destroyers working effectively as guerilla commando. :XD Minor thing bugging me is that Thorson has/had a "french" kansen in his command. Why didn't he ask for communication frequencies?

Poor Jean. ;_;
Nice touch with certain three destroyers working effectively as guerilla commando. :XD Minor thing bugging me is that Thorson has/had a "french" kansen in his command. Why didn't he ask for communication frequencies?
9/11 c20
2Timewatch
It's been a very long time since this chapter was written, and this is the point where I almost dropped because I like Nachi (and as of chapter 50 remain disgruntled she's the only one who's been killed off, it's anti-Nachi discrimination). But her retrofit comes out in a few days, and I wonder if you're going to work that into the story? Like I said, I'm only on chapter 50, but I had to come back here and make this comment.

It's been a very long time since this chapter was written, and this is the point where I almost dropped because I like Nachi (and as of chapter 50 remain disgruntled she's the only one who's been killed off, it's anti-Nachi discrimination). But her retrofit comes out in a few days, and I wonder if you're going to work that into the story? Like I said, I'm only on chapter 50, but I had to come back here and make this comment.
8/23 c86 Anon
This is the best Azur Lane FF bar none, it's better than the actual game story imo.
This is the best Azur Lane FF bar none, it's better than the actual game story imo.
8/21 c86 MarauderPrime12
Thorson isn’t the only one who did a spit take on the news
Excellent chapter
Thorson isn’t the only one who did a spit take on the news
Excellent chapter