
5/11 c121 Guest
Absolutely outstanding! I really loved this fic. Makes me want to read Worm as well. Well done 1000%!
Absolutely outstanding! I really loved this fic. Makes me want to read Worm as well. Well done 1000%!
4/30 c21 BlazeStryker
They kick you and tear away all someone has, then say how they can't help because they aren't "loners".
Magic needs to die.
They kick you and tear away all someone has, then say how they can't help because they aren't "loners".
Magic needs to die.
4/29 c121 Guest
Loved it, thanks.
Loved it, thanks.
4/27 c15 Guest
"defense against the dark arts" proceeds to call humans dark arts. lol
"defense against the dark arts" proceeds to call humans dark arts. lol
4/9 c121
2forthose8675309
“The flight from death.” BEAUTIFUL. I’m moved beyond all words. This story is jaw dropping and BEAUTIFUL!

“The flight from death.” BEAUTIFUL. I’m moved beyond all words. This story is jaw dropping and BEAUTIFUL!
4/2 c121 acowles02
Great. Simply great. The storytelling is amazing, thiugh there are some few, but ignorable grammar and soelling errors.
Great. Simply great. The storytelling is amazing, thiugh there are some few, but ignorable grammar and soelling errors.
4/2 c105
3maskedkeeper
Second time reading this
In summary, Taylor is a b*tch and us hard to read since her pov is always extremely self assured... But that is pretty much canon. i Dropped worm for that reason, hard to read her pov for ao much.
Anyways the story is good and Taylor is pretty much accurate . Only negative is that half of the stuff she gets away with only works because other characters let it happen. She kills someone and just say no i didn't, then gets away with it. Made sense when defending herself from bullies but I feel when bodies start dropping it would have been nice to see some real push back . Instead everything goes back to normal for a while until the next small group she needs to kill.

Second time reading this
In summary, Taylor is a b*tch and us hard to read since her pov is always extremely self assured... But that is pretty much canon. i Dropped worm for that reason, hard to read her pov for ao much.
Anyways the story is good and Taylor is pretty much accurate . Only negative is that half of the stuff she gets away with only works because other characters let it happen. She kills someone and just say no i didn't, then gets away with it. Made sense when defending herself from bullies but I feel when bodies start dropping it would have been nice to see some real push back . Instead everything goes back to normal for a while until the next small group she needs to kill.
3/10 c72 Rogue Survivor
"A few rednecks with rifles wouldn't be able to stand up to tanks and planes." Tell that to the Vietnamese, those in the Middle East, etc.
"A few rednecks with rifles wouldn't be able to stand up to tanks and planes." Tell that to the Vietnamese, those in the Middle East, etc.
3/10 c62 Rogue Survivor
Is Taylor intentionally using an incorrect name for Millicent, or is she just callous enough to not care? Either way, it's strange after how upset she was when she thought she'd died.
Is Taylor intentionally using an incorrect name for Millicent, or is she just callous enough to not care? Either way, it's strange after how upset she was when she thought she'd died.
3/10 c55 Rogue Survivor
I'm honestly very disappointed Taylor hasn't taken up her exercise routine again. I know she explained why she didn't, but she definitely could have found a way, and it was one of my favorite parts of her as a character.
I'm honestly very disappointed Taylor hasn't taken up her exercise routine again. I know she explained why she didn't, but she definitely could have found a way, and it was one of my favorite parts of her as a character.
3/4 c42 GrimmAjin234
This book is full of grammar mistakes, that it irritates me that I can't continuously comment on your failures, like I do to authors on WebNovel. Just this chapter and the others before and I'm expecting more of this level of failure going forward.
This book is full of grammar mistakes, that it irritates me that I can't continuously comment on your failures, like I do to authors on WebNovel. Just this chapter and the others before and I'm expecting more of this level of failure going forward.