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7/5/2019 c1 Guest
I love Marco x hekapoo stories
4/15/2019 c2 Fake Account dammit
You need to compose these dialogue into their own Paragraphs my man. Instead of having a word wall of a conversation, hit that enter key and separate them.
4/6/2019 c1 3ShenShao
It's a nice start. I'm not one for perfect grammar, which is evident due to my current writing but I would say that you have a good grasp on where to start your story. If you keep posting more chapters then that would be great. Keep it up!

Sincerely,
ShenShao
3/4/2019 c1 Guest
Nice work m8 I’m interested in seeing how you’re story evolves
3/3/2019 c1 Guest
Cool

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