12/23/2020 c12 khTomoe
this was definetly a copy-paste book, I felt that the author really didn't take creative liberty with any of this. It was just the movie script, with hiccup and toothless kinda there. This has potential but having them there didn't change anything about the storyline. There was no culture shock, or hardly any reaction for toothless. The author should try to get creative with the story, this can be really good!

6/9/2020 c12 Anonymous Noob the 2nd
Curious to know more about the creature that toothless is descended from. The last living descendent of a paper beyond this world. Can’t wait to find out what that means:)

4/4/2020 c10 6Jebest4781
well this was quite good

4/4/2020 c8 Jebest4781
pretty decent on what's done here

4/4/2020 c6 Jebest4781
this was quite good

4/4/2020 c4 Jebest4781
looked well here so far

4/4/2020 c2 Jebest4781
okay so pulling the opening raid scene from Hidden World, sounds fine here