for Brand New World7/30/2022 c53 Guest
I love this story...and I love your comment "I won't stop writing because fuck you". If they don't like it they don't have to read it.
I love this story...and I love your comment "I won't stop writing because fuck you". If they don't like it they don't have to read it.
7/28/2022 c53 Emily Sutton
There’s always going to be trolls where ever you write, always one unsatisfied asshole to rain on your parade. I’m so sorry for their awful attitudes. But, I recently have found this story and I cannot stop reading it, despite my burn out of books it’s all I can think about at the end of the day. Thank you for the wonderful story love <3
There’s always going to be trolls where ever you write, always one unsatisfied asshole to rain on your parade. I’m so sorry for their awful attitudes. But, I recently have found this story and I cannot stop reading it, despite my burn out of books it’s all I can think about at the end of the day. Thank you for the wonderful story love <3
7/27/2022 c72 Em
Thank you for this story! Loved it and I can't wait to read the companion pieces. Has anyone asked for a Charlie/ Blaise fic companion piece? If not let me be the first to beg for a Charlie/Blaise companion piece!
Thank you for this story! Loved it and I can't wait to read the companion pieces. Has anyone asked for a Charlie/ Blaise fic companion piece? If not let me be the first to beg for a Charlie/Blaise companion piece!
7/27/2022 c72 KatamariJ
This was an amazing read. I stayed up FAR too late reading "just one more chapter".
Your plot, your characterisations, your writinghonestly blew me away. Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us<3
This was an amazing read. I stayed up FAR too late reading "just one more chapter".
Your plot, your characterisations, your writinghonestly blew me away. Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us<3
7/26/2022 c29 
5Ronsboggart
I can’t continue this. I already hated almost every character, Hermione is totally off in this one, everyone is off character. And the plot points seem to be forgotten often. Nothing was consistent. I’m not even halfway and I can’t keep going. Total waste of time.
5RonsboggartI can’t continue this. I already hated almost every character, Hermione is totally off in this one, everyone is off character. And the plot points seem to be forgotten often. Nothing was consistent. I’m not even halfway and I can’t keep going. Total waste of time.
7/14/2022 c72 doreapotter85
This story was everything. Thank you so much for your brilliance and for sharing it with us.
This story was everything. Thank you so much for your brilliance and for sharing it with us.
7/13/2022 c72 greeneyewitch
I just want to say I love love loved this story so much! when I started reading it I wasn't aware it wasn't complete a few months back...it was wonderful rereading and catching up to speed when it was. you are an amazing creative and writer and I can't wait to read ALL of these story ideas you have listed! thank you so much for taking the time and doing this for us! your character development, story development and arcs were lovely to follow along...they r what made coming back for more so intriguing...loved your layers of everyone and their connections...bravo!
I just want to say I love love loved this story so much! when I started reading it I wasn't aware it wasn't complete a few months back...it was wonderful rereading and catching up to speed when it was. you are an amazing creative and writer and I can't wait to read ALL of these story ideas you have listed! thank you so much for taking the time and doing this for us! your character development, story development and arcs were lovely to follow along...they r what made coming back for more so intriguing...loved your layers of everyone and their connections...bravo!
7/13/2022 c69 2Mina Oakwood
Point of curiosity: Did Dramione experience two separate types of the Anima Vinculum soul bond?
In this chapter, there’s mention that the Kaisers had an alternate version of the spell (with verb tense changes I believe you wrote) that differentiate it from the more traditional marriage/subservience bond spells that typically require attraction, etc. This is of course why Rosewood needed that Grimoire specifically, and not just any older pureblood family’s.
We know that H’s knowledge of the spell came from her Kaiser family Grimoire, so the first and second time she uses the spell on D, it is the ‘modified’ no-romance-necessary bond that her ancestors used. However, these both get broken.
When their bond is reinstated for the duration of the story, it is D’s doing. However he has not read or is even aware of the Kaiser Grimoire at the time of the revel when it is performed, and would therefore presumably use the Malfoy (or Black) ancestral knowledge of the spell which would be more romance-focused, as is typical amongst old families.
Thought it was a cool observation that I hope was intentional, but if it was incidental that’s still kinda cool to think about. Cheers :)
2Mina OakwoodPoint of curiosity: Did Dramione experience two separate types of the Anima Vinculum soul bond?
In this chapter, there’s mention that the Kaisers had an alternate version of the spell (with verb tense changes I believe you wrote) that differentiate it from the more traditional marriage/subservience bond spells that typically require attraction, etc. This is of course why Rosewood needed that Grimoire specifically, and not just any older pureblood family’s.
We know that H’s knowledge of the spell came from her Kaiser family Grimoire, so the first and second time she uses the spell on D, it is the ‘modified’ no-romance-necessary bond that her ancestors used. However, these both get broken.
When their bond is reinstated for the duration of the story, it is D’s doing. However he has not read or is even aware of the Kaiser Grimoire at the time of the revel when it is performed, and would therefore presumably use the Malfoy (or Black) ancestral knowledge of the spell which would be more romance-focused, as is typical amongst old families.
Thought it was a cool observation that I hope was intentional, but if it was incidental that’s still kinda cool to think about. Cheers :)
7/12/2022 c65 Mina Oakwood
Hey there! LOVING this story!
Just a couple of little discrepancies I noticed in this chapter I thought you may want to take care of when you have the time:
When explaining about the soul bond between Stefan and Kaspar, it reads that Stefan performed it but it seems like this should be Kaspar;
You mention Draco being under the cloak when he’s in the library right before he gets found out, but obviously Hermione has it;
Lastly, one of the mentions of Montague calls him Adrian (as in Pucey).
Just thought you’d like a heads up as these are small points but can be confusing story-wise :)
Super excited to keep reading your work!
Hey there! LOVING this story!
Just a couple of little discrepancies I noticed in this chapter I thought you may want to take care of when you have the time:
When explaining about the soul bond between Stefan and Kaspar, it reads that Stefan performed it but it seems like this should be Kaspar;
You mention Draco being under the cloak when he’s in the library right before he gets found out, but obviously Hermione has it;
Lastly, one of the mentions of Montague calls him Adrian (as in Pucey).
Just thought you’d like a heads up as these are small points but can be confusing story-wise :)
Super excited to keep reading your work!
7/11/2022 c72 Vorena7
Wow…I haven’t cried on a story since I read manacled. Just outstanding I don’t even have the words my goodness bravo. You’re incredible and I love your work!
Wow…I haven’t cried on a story since I read manacled. Just outstanding I don’t even have the words my goodness bravo. You’re incredible and I love your work!
7/11/2022 c72 melissa.munro.58
This is a masterpiece. Your world creation, character arcs and relationships were top notch. I do however think that in your author notes you apologize a little too much though. You are sharing a gift with any that read it and we as readers should be grateful and patient. Thank you for this wonderful fic!
This is a masterpiece. Your world creation, character arcs and relationships were top notch. I do however think that in your author notes you apologize a little too much though. You are sharing a gift with any that read it and we as readers should be grateful and patient. Thank you for this wonderful fic!
7/10/2022 c51 hancan67
I just don’t see Hermione’s logic in running away from Draco. She knows he didn’t marry Astoria, she know he loves her and his child. Of course she wants to protect Scorp from Lucious but I don’t see why she wouldn’t let Draco be involved in that. I’m just not connecting the dots. Maybe her reasoning will be explained in the next chapter.
I just don’t see Hermione’s logic in running away from Draco. She knows he didn’t marry Astoria, she know he loves her and his child. Of course she wants to protect Scorp from Lucious but I don’t see why she wouldn’t let Draco be involved in that. I’m just not connecting the dots. Maybe her reasoning will be explained in the next chapter.