for The Time Traveller7/23/2024 c1 Guest
I really like this. A Sequel would be awesome, or even expanding this story from a 1-shot to a multi-chapter fic.
I really like this. A Sequel would be awesome, or even expanding this story from a 1-shot to a multi-chapter fic.
7/23/2024 c1 Millie072
Very nice. Why didn't you pursue the story? As for finding out on Molly's death, I've never read a story (HP fic since 2001) where she kept notes which were found after her death. That may be original. thanks
Very nice. Why didn't you pursue the story? As for finding out on Molly's death, I've never read a story (HP fic since 2001) where she kept notes which were found after her death. That may be original. thanks
6/26/2024 c1 knttr
This is an awesome beginning that has so many possibilities were to take it. Would you mind if I used this one-shot as a starting point for an idea that flashed into my mind? If it turns out well I woud give you full credit if I post it here or on Ao3.
This is an awesome beginning that has so many possibilities were to take it. Would you mind if I used this one-shot as a starting point for an idea that flashed into my mind? If it turns out well I woud give you full credit if I post it here or on Ao3.
5/28/2024 c1 ErstwhileS
Enjoyed reading this again. Thanks!
Enjoyed reading this again. Thanks!
4/6/2024 c1 
2Specky Clarke
I know its 5 years but this is the start of a probably marvellous story. Please start writing again.
2Specky ClarkeI know its 5 years but this is the start of a probably marvellous story. Please start writing again.
3/31/2024 c1 bluemax1965
You really have to expand this story. It's too good to just have a chapter with a cliffhanger.
You really have to expand this story. It's too good to just have a chapter with a cliffhanger.
3/13/2024 c1 32Jake Crepeau
Actually, it's been done many, many times by numerous writers, but I'm sure you've found that out by now. ;D This does make a very good one-shot, with quite a few possibilities as to how it could go forward if you wanted to. After reading "A Marauder's Plan," I'm sure you would do a bang-up job of it, too.
32Jake CrepeauActually, it's been done many, many times by numerous writers, but I'm sure you've found that out by now. ;D This does make a very good one-shot, with quite a few possibilities as to how it could go forward if you wanted to. After reading "A Marauder's Plan," I'm sure you would do a bang-up job of it, too.
12/9/2023 c1 betsy62258
This does not feel like a proper one shot. You opened up too many questions, things I've never seen addressed in other tales. I feel like I should go to the next chapter.
This does not feel like a proper one shot. You opened up too many questions, things I've never seen addressed in other tales. I feel like I should go to the next chapter.
11/22/2023 c1 Marie
I really like this, and would love to see it continued. But thanks for this excellent tale.
I really like this, and would love to see it continued. But thanks for this excellent tale.
6/17/2023 c1 DanYHKim
Your writing here very efficiently and succinctly set the stage without a lot of excess. I really appreciate it.
Your writing here very efficiently and succinctly set the stage without a lot of excess. I really appreciate it.
4/26/2023 c1 Guest
Annnnnnnnnnnd?
Annnnnnnnnnnd?
2/27/2023 c1 Critical reader
This has got serious potential, even though time travel stories are not rare, and neither are the ones where people are potioned. But there is always a way of combining known ingredients to make something new. I hope your health will improve so that you can continue writing.
This has got serious potential, even though time travel stories are not rare, and neither are the ones where people are potioned. But there is always a way of combining known ingredients to make something new. I hope your health will improve so that you can continue writing.