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3/8/2019 c1 bargavl
I think the molly potioning coming out with her death is unique, the damage stuff has been done a couple of times, but could be nicely explored in a fresh way. I love time travel fics and this has real potential. I think a step to the right is also very good and was pleased to see another chapter. I think you're on to some winners here.
3/8/2019 c1 181Quatermass
Molly-bashing...but with both Ginny and Ron not bashed and horrified about it. Great. Nice one-shot. A shame it isn't a longer story. Maybe it's because I've been playing too much of said game, but this reminds me quite a bit of "Fate/Grand Order".
3/8/2019 c1 LadyArianaDevareux
I'm riveted...What happens next...what is this plan...is it going to work, will it save Harry and Sirius and ... Write MORE
3/8/2019 c1 littleelfmom
Ok I am now hooked. Love the idea and hope you continue on. How will the Hermione from the future pass herself off? Doesn’t the seeing yourself thing come into play? Will Hermione disguise herself so she isn’t recognized? So many questions. Awaiting next chapter eagerly,
3/8/2019 c1 suebt
Love it! I do hope you decide to do a sequel.
3/8/2019 c1 DarkRavie
Ok, status complete. Will there be more? I need more. I need a full story here!
3/8/2019 c1 mday
Very enjoyable read and I'd love a follow-up.
3/8/2019 c1 suziq968
Oh crap! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write the sequel. So many questions! Organ failure, Merlin, potions aaaaauuuugh! Love this start, really, but more would be divine.
3/8/2019 c1 minerdude
I know it’s meant as a one shot, but if you wanted you have the beginning of a good someone decides to pick on it let me/us know
3/8/2019 c1 20joker to the thief
Nooooo...why is this a one-shot? You do realize you’ve cursed me to think about what-happens-next for the rest of time, right?!

Sorry to be over dramatic but this is begging to be continued. Ok...maybe I’m the one doing the begging...
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