for The Time Traveller2/27/2023 c1 Critical reader
This has got serious potential, even though time travel stories are not rare, and neither are the ones where people are potioned. But there is always a way of combining known ingredients to make something new. I hope your health will improve so that you can continue writing.
This has got serious potential, even though time travel stories are not rare, and neither are the ones where people are potioned. But there is always a way of combining known ingredients to make something new. I hope your health will improve so that you can continue writing.
1/17/2023 c1 Wheezy52
Very well written! I about to search your writings for more (crossing my fingers).
Very well written! I about to search your writings for more (crossing my fingers).
8/4/2022 c1 K
Great introduction to what should have been a brilliant story.
Great introduction to what should have been a brilliant story.
6/4/2022 c1 andjelija.nenic
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$
Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$
2/2/2022 c1 mjw
Excellent beginning to a story. As is it is, it's quite a teaser... I would like to read the rest of it!
Excellent beginning to a story. As is it is, it's quite a teaser... I would like to read the rest of it!
12/30/2021 c1 
2furface294
WTF! You cannot leave it there, how can you possibly leave it there, edit this and remove that crazy "The End" comment and finish writing this story PLEASE! I have not been grabbed by the throat like this by the first chapter of a story in a many moons, please continue it.
2furface294WTF! You cannot leave it there, how can you possibly leave it there, edit this and remove that crazy "The End" comment and finish writing this story PLEASE! I have not been grabbed by the throat like this by the first chapter of a story in a many moons, please continue it.
10/15/2021 c1 8TinkStar87
Soooo Good, and short. I wish there was more. Take care, stay safe. Read ya Later ;)
8TinkStar87Soooo Good, and short. I wish there was more. Take care, stay safe. Read ya Later ;)