
6/23/2020 c1 Nalucenter
That's amazing! I like your fic. ;D
That's amazing! I like your fic. ;D
5/12/2020 c1
5Seriphia
OH MY GAWD SAV!
This so adorable! What a fantastic scene that u know we ALL were just dying for in the manga! Ty ty, this was such a pleasure to read!

OH MY GAWD SAV!
This so adorable! What a fantastic scene that u know we ALL were just dying for in the manga! Ty ty, this was such a pleasure to read!
3/3/2020 c1
1carrotcakeo5
This is cute! But if It's alright, I'd like to suggest a little bit more dialogue at the beginning so there's a bit of a conversation after she walks in. Even if they're just both saying "Hey." I just think it would tie it all together really well. Thanks for making this! It's still really cute!

This is cute! But if It's alright, I'd like to suggest a little bit more dialogue at the beginning so there's a bit of a conversation after she walks in. Even if they're just both saying "Hey." I just think it would tie it all together really well. Thanks for making this! It's still really cute!
6/23/2019 c1
1Bs.trinkets
Precious! Sweet premise, and neat writing. Do try your hand at a longer story, would love to read something like that!

Precious! Sweet premise, and neat writing. Do try your hand at a longer story, would love to read something like that!
3/9/2019 c1 Vanilla Wish
That they've gotten to that point, a natural comfort level where doing something like that it just an unconscious movement, should really tell them something. And that something is that they're both dense idiots for not seeing what's always been there. :D
That they've gotten to that point, a natural comfort level where doing something like that it just an unconscious movement, should really tell them something. And that something is that they're both dense idiots for not seeing what's always been there. :D