for Kick, Push7/21/2019 c1 
1Not Your Dream Girl
Ahhh, I would love an update on this one! I like the darker vibe this fic has compared to your other one.
1Not Your Dream GirlAhhh, I would love an update on this one! I like the darker vibe this fic has compared to your other one.
5/2/2019 c1 Guest
So far, I really like your story. I do hope that you continue writing and updating it because it seems very interesting, and I want to see where you go with the whole Kim and Jared story line. One suggestion, when you change settings (like when you went from Kim to Jared), please put in a line break or some indicator that you are changing the focus from Kim to Jared because it was a bit sudden and made me have to go back and reread since I wasn't prepared for you to do that. Overall though, good story, and I can't wait to read your next update.
So far, I really like your story. I do hope that you continue writing and updating it because it seems very interesting, and I want to see where you go with the whole Kim and Jared story line. One suggestion, when you change settings (like when you went from Kim to Jared), please put in a line break or some indicator that you are changing the focus from Kim to Jared because it was a bit sudden and made me have to go back and reread since I wasn't prepared for you to do that. Overall though, good story, and I can't wait to read your next update.