
11/26 c29 journeyman3929
you people who complain about what the Author is writing... I hope you have Renal failure
you people who complain about what the Author is writing... I hope you have Renal failure
10/21 c1 guest
interesting premise
interesting premise
9/13 c18
10Marcii Winters
YESSSSSS!
SOMETIMES I REALLY HATE THE GAMER'S MIND ABILITY FOR THE SAME REASONS BABA STATED SO I'M GLAD THAT WAS ADDRESSED EARLY AND NOT MUCH LATER WHEN THINGS GOT REALLY BAD

YESSSSSS!
SOMETIMES I REALLY HATE THE GAMER'S MIND ABILITY FOR THE SAME REASONS BABA STATED SO I'M GLAD THAT WAS ADDRESSED EARLY AND NOT MUCH LATER WHEN THINGS GOT REALLY BAD
9/2 c39 letdownqqq
All cliff hangers are trash, the sign of a weak author unsure if they can have a reader come back through pure enjoyment instead of the psychological want of completion of a unknown.
All cliff hangers are trash, the sign of a weak author unsure if they can have a reader come back through pure enjoyment instead of the psychological want of completion of a unknown.
8/27 c1 theeelderman5
"do not read if you don't want to see the obvious way to become the strongest" good fic tho am fan
"do not read if you don't want to see the obvious way to become the strongest" good fic tho am fan
7/19 c6 Guest
I sometimes forget that early Dragon Ball is based to Journey to The West
I sometimes forget that early Dragon Ball is based to Journey to The West
7/9 c39
1Dr Gero
I'm really enjoying the story and looking forward to seeing how events play out. Good work.

I'm really enjoying the story and looking forward to seeing how events play out. Good work.
6/10 c39 Guest
Caught up just in time for this cliffhanger, evil bastard
Caught up just in time for this cliffhanger, evil bastard
6/9 c34 Guest
"flying through the endless blue skies"
Can't wait for him to look stupid after he discovers either magic or ki flight
"flying through the endless blue skies"
Can't wait for him to look stupid after he discovers either magic or ki flight