for Remnants3/17/2019 c2 
1PoppyRitz
I love your writing. The vocabulary and descriptions are on point! Perhaps a little work on conventions and paragraph spacing, but that doesn’t make this story any worse. It’s amazing! The concept, the EVERYTHING! Hope Sage is okay! And Daffodil... I like her and her name! Loving it! Xoxo Poppy
1PoppyRitzI love your writing. The vocabulary and descriptions are on point! Perhaps a little work on conventions and paragraph spacing, but that doesn’t make this story any worse. It’s amazing! The concept, the EVERYTHING! Hope Sage is okay! And Daffodil... I like her and her name! Loving it! Xoxo Poppy