for The Last Prayer12/4/2021 c3 reboot23
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12/1/2021 c14 Martin-di-Arcov
I imagine you adding Gaara
Naruto revealing to him what he learned dealing with Kurama: Sex is the best way to pacify a biju
shenanigans ensue
I imagine you adding Gaara
Naruto revealing to him what he learned dealing with Kurama: Sex is the best way to pacify a biju
shenanigans ensue
11/28/2021 c42 Guest
Still my favourite fiction so well written
Still my favourite fiction so well written
11/30/2021 c42 
4Gunato the Great
Just a suggestion , scrap Tenten and put in Kurotsuchi good lil Romeo and Juliet dynamic. Otherwise great chapter. Look forward to the next one
4Gunato the GreatJust a suggestion , scrap Tenten and put in Kurotsuchi good lil Romeo and Juliet dynamic. Otherwise great chapter. Look forward to the next one
11/28/2021 c42 Dime
It would be weird if Tenten wasn't included at this point. She's been built up enough in the story it would seem odd if she wasn't, like the Haku stuff was pointless. If you want to include other girls in the harem then go for it, make a massive harem if you want, I legitimately thing the writing is good enough it would be done well, but to do so at the expense of another character who's already been setup would make the story weaker. Adding someone else in her place would feel cheap and forced, and seem like the writer clearly dropped a story line, which makes the author seem worse.
It would be weird if Tenten wasn't included at this point. She's been built up enough in the story it would seem odd if she wasn't, like the Haku stuff was pointless. If you want to include other girls in the harem then go for it, make a massive harem if you want, I legitimately thing the writing is good enough it would be done well, but to do so at the expense of another character who's already been setup would make the story weaker. Adding someone else in her place would feel cheap and forced, and seem like the writer clearly dropped a story line, which makes the author seem worse.