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12/4/2021 c3 reboot23
wow
12/5/2021 c9 Calm Dragons
Never bet against Naruto
12/5/2021 c3 Calm Dragons
Can't wait for future Naruto to hear about that
12/3/2021 c10 KingConner
add anko
12/3/2021 c6 KingConner
fuck that bitch Kurenai
12/3/2021 c5 KingConner
Thanks 4 the chapter!
12/2/2021 c3 KingConner
Thanks 4 the chapter!
12/2/2021 c2 KingConner
Thanks
12/1/2021 c14 Martin-di-Arcov
I imagine you adding Gaara
Naruto revealing to him what he learned dealing with Kurama: Sex is the best way to pacify a biju
shenanigans ensue
11/28/2021 c42 Guest
Still my favourite fiction so well written
11/30/2021 c42 4Gunato the Great
Just a suggestion , scrap Tenten and put in Kurotsuchi good lil Romeo and Juliet dynamic. Otherwise great chapter. Look forward to the next one
11/28/2021 c42 Dime
It would be weird if Tenten wasn't included at this point. She's been built up enough in the story it would seem odd if she wasn't, like the Haku stuff was pointless. If you want to include other girls in the harem then go for it, make a massive harem if you want, I legitimately thing the writing is good enough it would be done well, but to do so at the expense of another character who's already been setup would make the story weaker. Adding someone else in her place would feel cheap and forced, and seem like the writer clearly dropped a story line, which makes the author seem worse.
11/28/2021 c42 sisanitor
I remind you that Krishna has 16 108 wife's.
11/28/2021 c42 2zachosg7
great chapter, glad to see this continue, sorry for the late review I had to reread to refamiliarize myself with this fic
11/28/2021 c42 2The Alpha 100
the nicknames are so tacky kinda annoying. great story though
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