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11/23/2021 c42 5MurderOfBael38
dios como quiero que vayamos a kumo, quiero ver como este Naruto reacciona al horrible pero agradable rap de killer B, ademas me dejastes excitado con las escenas rikolinas (excitantes) del inicio y cuando me calme, me sacas a Ino... Dios! ese naruto es bien caliente... ademas, Ino insegura de si va ser buena esposa porque apenas dura una ronda y no se compara con Temari y hinata que ellas dos tambien duran una ronda, hahaha las inseguridades de la adolescencia xD

Ufff hace tiempo que no leia este maravilloso fic, aunque lo tenia algo olvidado porque estaba leyendo Game of shadow's, ahaha increible Fic, pero es para leer un par de dias, este de aqui esta cerca de ser clase Leyenda porque es largo, tiene lemon's y su historia es encantadora hahaha
11/23/2021 c42 AdrianVnz
Oh no those evil bunnies, i knew they were out to get us all, gaze into a bunny's eyes and you will see an ocean of nihilism and ambition.

Jokes aside i loved the chapter like always and i like how you mentioned how much focus Kurenai has had and they actually plan to correct that, oh and she teaching them muahahahahahaha

I think they will agree and love Samui on the basis that she can last a whole night alone xD

Loved how Hinata is opening up and that she offered the solution, can't wait to see more.

I am surprised you are having problems with Tenten but she is at a good point to actually leave and find her own way, still surprised she is the one giving you problems and not Mei xD

But hey this means that maybe, there is like a 1% chance Sakura will also move on! Unlikely but i am fine with whatever you write, plus with 2 spots vacant i can cross my fingers for Fu and/or Kurotsuchi to join, that would be a way to unite the nations xD

Now i just need to rewatch Buffy to prepare myself lol
11/23/2021 c42 4Sivaatasi
I can't complain about the length of time for an update since I'm a bit overdue for my own but this is always a nice alert to find in my inbox.

1. Very anxious to see the trip to Kumo turn out.

2. I'm always a personal favorite of Shizuka despite the absolute pain it is to work her into the plot out left field.

3. Also, liked the way you resolved Danzo and Itachi in the last chapter.

Question: Why does the final wife have to be a well-known female from the Naruto universe? There are plenty of "normal" girls in Kishimoto's fiction that could round out the "Roster of Nine."

Just a thought...
11/23/2021 c42 6JasmineDragon22
Tsunade really knows how to stick it. I like the way that was written. Everything was logical and it’s wasn’t all happy honky dory. Well done. Looking forward to the next chapter.
11/23/2021 c42 12Harbinger Of Kaos
Well if Ten is out i hope you give her a proper exit, shame but if you feel it won't work out with her then it is for teh best.

Possible options for teh ninth spot if you decide to pursue:


Or if you plan to have all nation involved Kurotsuchi
11/23/2021 c42 WhateverPlus
I liked this chapter, continue please.
11/23/2021 c42 Blaze1992

The stories plot and it's "actual plot" too.
11/23/2021 c41 atengawchok
Excellent, though I'm wondering on the mistake Jiraiya did in the shippuden that came to light. The one where the village of kunoichy he was peeping in. Will Shizuka be entering at some point?
11/23/2021 c42 biginferno
great chapter who are the options available for the final spot are Tayuya or Shizuka options if Tayuya's an option I hope she's in and also is the plan to have Naruto marry all girls at once so they all have equal standing
11/23/2021 c42 Liquidforest
The final wife could be Kurotsuchi to have all 5 major nations tied in. There are lots of 'bad' ways they could hook up because they're not currently allies.

Kaguya would be an amazing hat trick if you could get her in the harem without making it a final mention before the story ends.

Shion is an option. only sleeping with him at first because of some vision of the future.
11/23/2021 c42 Paradoxity
Take your time, chapters are always worth the wait.
11/23/2021 c42 13Anime Enthusiast
If you are interested in keeping Tenten, I’d suggest having her as head of security for the Uzumaki Clan. She is already Haku’s tool, so she would be responsible for the clan’s safety. But if you’re looking for another wife, then perhaps either Shion or the Nadeshiko princess. Both girls have great stories and could fit in nicely with your Naruto. Great story…eager for more. I have to give you credit…it’s because of your story, that I had the drive to write about Naruto fics once more. My Nidaime story has Kurenai as a Future pairing. So, thanks a lot for your story.
11/23/2021 c42 xXwolfsterXx644
Definitely Can't wait for the next update
11/23/2021 c41 1Thatoneguy1109
I'm glad to hear from you. Excellent update. I'm most excited about the Kumo arc. Can't wait. As for TenTen, unfortunate that shes on the fence, but i agree with her incorporation being a bit off as well. I'm sure you can make it work, but if it doesn't flow as smoothly, best not to do it. I dont know what you have in store for Iwa, but maybe Kurotsuchi can be considered instead if Iwa ends up not being as murdery with Naruto as i expect them to be. Theres also Shion the Priestess of the Land of Demons, Shizuka from Nadeshiko Village, Fuu the 7 tails jinchuuriki, or Ryuuzetsu from blood prison. At this point in the story, almost any girl introduced will be difficult to incorporate so might as well go all out right? You could l get a good arc out of one of them. To be frank, i only added Ryuuzetsu so i would have a chance to possibly read your take on the Blood Prison ordeal within this universe, but I'm sure this Naruto can worm his way into practically anyones heart. If you get the chance, read "Love Through Negotiations" or "Never Use Shadow Clones To Do Paperwork." I believe they're the same story with some minor, and a couple major changes. Your story kinda reminds me of them, though they're drastically different.
11/23/2021 c1 blazes207
Welcome back love you story and thank you for the update
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