for The Last Prayer11/10/2024 c12 a.vago
Like Your story - at some point it feels like kick to the gut… The one can easily “forget” how cruel, how devastating a human can be without norms, ethics and enough resolve to do , to really do harm…
I like the way You balance on the line of readable fun story and world of professional spies and assassins…
Your AN about balance and future plans are promising- hope that the rest of the writing is up to it, that you return from hiatus…
Like Your story - at some point it feels like kick to the gut… The one can easily “forget” how cruel, how devastating a human can be without norms, ethics and enough resolve to do , to really do harm…
I like the way You balance on the line of readable fun story and world of professional spies and assassins…
Your AN about balance and future plans are promising- hope that the rest of the writing is up to it, that you return from hiatus…
110/30/2024 c43 k.rancelotti
Your story was stolen… it’s on Webnovel.
Story name: Naruto: The Prince of Lust
Plagiarist: William777
HE IS MAKING MONEY OFF YOU
Your story was stolen… it’s on Webnovel.
Story name: Naruto: The Prince of Lust
Plagiarist: William777
HE IS MAKING MONEY OFF YOU
10/22/2024 c8 Yeovale
There’s absolutely no reason or sense as to why the older Naruto is stopping him training with any more than 20 clones! He’d already have the Jutsu and nature transformation down if he wasn’t purposely restricting himself.
There’s absolutely no reason or sense as to why the older Naruto is stopping him training with any more than 20 clones! He’d already have the Jutsu and nature transformation down if he wasn’t purposely restricting himself.
9/16/2024 c19 Zero4590
He isn't too depressed for me. Hell given what happened his entire life i wouldn't be surprised if he was homi/suicial
He isn't too depressed for me. Hell given what happened his entire life i wouldn't be surprised if he was homi/suicial
9/9/2024 c43 Guest
This one is pretty great. I love it. Hope you are doing good with your book writing!
This one is pretty great. I love it. Hope you are doing good with your book writing!
7/22/2024 c29 Sahamosveb
The fanfic has gotten much worse since the addition of girls from other villages. Kurenai, Ino, Sakura and Hinata were perfectly intertwined with each other and Naruto. Their relationships both with each other and with Naruto were interesting to watch. Everyone else is just superfluous and uninteresting.
Temari is boring. Mabui is superficial. Tenten is completely uninteresting.
The fanfic has gotten much worse since the addition of girls from other villages. Kurenai, Ino, Sakura and Hinata were perfectly intertwined with each other and Naruto. Their relationships both with each other and with Naruto were interesting to watch. Everyone else is just superfluous and uninteresting.
Temari is boring. Mabui is superficial. Tenten is completely uninteresting.
7/21/2024 c11 Sahamosveb
I can feel how unrealistic and dumb Ino is to be added to the harem. The Ino the author describes is just disgusting, shallow, stupid and narcissistic. Such despicable people don't change.
I can feel how unrealistic and dumb Ino is to be added to the harem. The Ino the author describes is just disgusting, shallow, stupid and narcissistic. Such despicable people don't change.
7/19/2024 c21 TacysToess
Okay wtf is this? I like this story, i really do, but is Ino ever actually ever going to face some serious consequences? I hate that she gets away with LITERAL rape and blackmail towards a girl whose biggest offence was literally just name calling. And then Ino has the audacity to not even feel any remorse over what she did? Its already a hard sell, tryna redeem a fucking rapist, but a non repentant rapist who tells their victim it was for their own good? Bruh
Your story and all but IMO you need to address this in the future and have Ino seriously regret her actions, and face some hefty consequences like everyone finds out shes a rapist (unlikely) or they find out she’s sleeping with Naruto and she’s publicly humiliated. Perfect opportunity for some naruto angst that leads to further development towards everyones relationship with him. (And she apologies)
Sorry for long review, its only because as I said I really enjoy this story. But it really niffes me the wrong way that Ino fucking raped someone and she gets away with it “BeCAuSe IT WaS For ThE ViCtims BenIfiT”
Okay wtf is this? I like this story, i really do, but is Ino ever actually ever going to face some serious consequences? I hate that she gets away with LITERAL rape and blackmail towards a girl whose biggest offence was literally just name calling. And then Ino has the audacity to not even feel any remorse over what she did? Its already a hard sell, tryna redeem a fucking rapist, but a non repentant rapist who tells their victim it was for their own good? Bruh
Your story and all but IMO you need to address this in the future and have Ino seriously regret her actions, and face some hefty consequences like everyone finds out shes a rapist (unlikely) or they find out she’s sleeping with Naruto and she’s publicly humiliated. Perfect opportunity for some naruto angst that leads to further development towards everyones relationship with him. (And she apologies)
Sorry for long review, its only because as I said I really enjoy this story. But it really niffes me the wrong way that Ino fucking raped someone and she gets away with it “BeCAuSe IT WaS For ThE ViCtims BenIfiT”
7/15/2024 c1 Guest
Useless fic
Useless fic