for The Last Prayer4/4/2019 c8 Yonshin
For real? To short? LOL I mean it IS shorter than you're other chaps but still great lenght, if you manage to continue updating with your frequency and with this amounts of words I will be really impressed. Nice stuff xD I'm actually relieved that Haku is still a man, much funnier this way LoL. Excited for more.
For real? To short? LOL I mean it IS shorter than you're other chaps but still great lenght, if you manage to continue updating with your frequency and with this amounts of words I will be really impressed. Nice stuff xD I'm actually relieved that Haku is still a man, much funnier this way LoL. Excited for more.
4/4/2019 c8 Spect3r
Thanks for the chapter.
Kurenai acted way better than i expected, but in the end, she still left. The thing is, Naruto was always left behind. He for sure deserves some love. Didn't he already suffer enough? Please just give him some love (other than future himself).
And please make ino and sakura suffer, more the better (they deserve it). I really hate sakura and this version of ino. I want them to beg for mercy.
And naruto, he seriously needs to stop his affection over sakura, it is infuriating. I believe he is some kind of masochist.
Anyway, looking forward to next chapter.
Thanks for the chapter.
Kurenai acted way better than i expected, but in the end, she still left. The thing is, Naruto was always left behind. He for sure deserves some love. Didn't he already suffer enough? Please just give him some love (other than future himself).
And please make ino and sakura suffer, more the better (they deserve it). I really hate sakura and this version of ino. I want them to beg for mercy.
And naruto, he seriously needs to stop his affection over sakura, it is infuriating. I believe he is some kind of masochist.
Anyway, looking forward to next chapter.
4/4/2019 c8 Fuyuriku
restoring there vigor faster
their
was how vigorous she participated in their
vigorously*?
than I'd
then
than I wouldn't be a ninja!
then
Naruto asks, yet again, "why...
quotation is in bold, even though it's Naruto, and not Naru-nii, that's talking.
to his weaksides
to his weaknesses.
I assume you're going for that, otherwise "weak sides"
_
Thank you for the read.
restoring there vigor faster
their
was how vigorous she participated in their
vigorously*?
than I'd
then
than I wouldn't be a ninja!
then
Naruto asks, yet again, "why...
quotation is in bold, even though it's Naruto, and not Naru-nii, that's talking.
to his weaksides
to his weaknesses.
I assume you're going for that, otherwise "weak sides"
_
Thank you for the read.
4/2/2019 c7 aishi
i really liked this chapter its keep getting more and more interesting . i wonder what will be like kurenai and naruto's relationship from now on , good luck
i really liked this chapter its keep getting more and more interesting . i wonder what will be like kurenai and naruto's relationship from now on , good luck
4/1/2019 c7 Guest
Can’t wait to Kurenai Wakes up
Can’t wait to Kurenai Wakes up
4/1/2019 c6 CW
I started reading this story because of the given plot description. You seem to have lost the actual plot half way through and are now just turning people criminally insane. I'm out.
I started reading this story because of the given plot description. You seem to have lost the actual plot half way through and are now just turning people criminally insane. I'm out.
14/3/2019 c6 Yonshin
Fanfiction has problems posting reviews without deleting stuff holy.
One Karin
Two Hana
Three Anko
Four -
Fanfiction has problems posting reviews without deleting stuff holy.
One Karin
Two Hana
Three Anko
Four -
4/3/2019 c7 Yonshin
About those 2 gals you will put there's really some easy options in my mind.
: She is saved by Sasuke during the second stage of the Chunin Exam, so maybe, instead of Sasuke, Naruto is the one that save her, and them you could just bring her back wayyy ahead in the history.
: Well since you are messing a bit more with Clans business(Which I'm loving), you could make, since Naruto defeats Kiba in the eliminatory stage of the Chunin Exam, if you still make that happen of course, Kiba being one of the direct heirs to the Inuzuka clan, they make plans for a potential future engagement between her and Naruto.
: This one is just because lol .
other-village-Kunoichi girl really, since from what Future Naruto said they couldn't put aside the past and work together but with Naruto bonding with almost all(Or all) Great Villages influenceable Kunoichi they could work together. Since you have Temari(Suna) and Mabui(Kumo) then maybe adding Kurotsuchi(Iwa) and Mei(Kiri) then you have him with at least 1 girl each from the Five Great Villages.
Now enough of that, great story you really portrayed both Sakura and Ino as being blind lovers really what Ino said about Sakura should go right back at her lol. Don't worry about the lemons,they are nice already as they are, I like how you build them up. And holy I read this in a entire night and we still are between episode 5 and 6 LoL I get it they kind jumped a lot a D-rank missions for us both in the Manga and in the Anime, I can't really fault them, that would have been a boreeeeeeee. xD Excited for more! xD
About those 2 gals you will put there's really some easy options in my mind.
: She is saved by Sasuke during the second stage of the Chunin Exam, so maybe, instead of Sasuke, Naruto is the one that save her, and them you could just bring her back wayyy ahead in the history.
: Well since you are messing a bit more with Clans business(Which I'm loving), you could make, since Naruto defeats Kiba in the eliminatory stage of the Chunin Exam, if you still make that happen of course, Kiba being one of the direct heirs to the Inuzuka clan, they make plans for a potential future engagement between her and Naruto.
: This one is just because lol .
other-village-Kunoichi girl really, since from what Future Naruto said they couldn't put aside the past and work together but with Naruto bonding with almost all(Or all) Great Villages influenceable Kunoichi they could work together. Since you have Temari(Suna) and Mabui(Kumo) then maybe adding Kurotsuchi(Iwa) and Mei(Kiri) then you have him with at least 1 girl each from the Five Great Villages.
Now enough of that, great story you really portrayed both Sakura and Ino as being blind lovers really what Ino said about Sakura should go right back at her lol. Don't worry about the lemons,they are nice already as they are, I like how you build them up. And holy I read this in a entire night and we still are between episode 5 and 6 LoL I get it they kind jumped a lot a D-rank missions for us both in the Manga and in the Anime, I can't really fault them, that would have been a boreeeeeeee. xD Excited for more! xD
3/31/2019 c6 Guest
The hate Naruto is getting here is way more then cannon. I understand them not liking Naruto at first but all these woman are just horrible people and Naruto just taking their abuse is off putting. Naruto was quick tempered and a fiery guy in the show and didn't take shit from anyone except Sakura. I hope Naruto starts showing backbone and we start to see some character development from everyone.
The hate Naruto is getting here is way more then cannon. I understand them not liking Naruto at first but all these woman are just horrible people and Naruto just taking their abuse is off putting. Naruto was quick tempered and a fiery guy in the show and didn't take shit from anyone except Sakura. I hope Naruto starts showing backbone and we start to see some character development from everyone.
3/31/2019 c6 Guest
Update soon
Update soon
3/31/2019 c6 Reviewer no Kage
Wow! There are some seriously unlikeable versions of Ino, Kurenai, and Sakura. Kakashi is neglectful as well. Not sure how any of them will get redeemed but I’m intrigued. At least for now.
Till next time Author-San -
Reviewer no Kage
Wow! There are some seriously unlikeable versions of Ino, Kurenai, and Sakura. Kakashi is neglectful as well. Not sure how any of them will get redeemed but I’m intrigued. At least for now.
Till next time Author-San -
Reviewer no Kage
3/31/2019 c6 Guest
I'm pretty sure naruto just developed a fear of women now with kurenai's attack! if hinata finds out what kurenai did she would go murder her own sensei! please add Shizuka!
I'm pretty sure naruto just developed a fear of women now with kurenai's attack! if hinata finds out what kurenai did she would go murder her own sensei! please add Shizuka!