3/21/2019 c1 RandomReader
Bad formatting, no creativity and worst of all a STOLEN TITLE. Shame on you.
Bad formatting, no creativity and worst of all a STOLEN TITLE. Shame on you.
3/21/2019 c1 1cesarjunior233
The spaces/point between the lines are the worst, can't read the story due it
The spaces/point between the lines are the worst, can't read the story due it
3/21/2019 c1 Guest
You literally took the title of a different Authors work, and then added forward! To it, did you do this intentionally or without proper research into this subject?
You literally took the title of a different Authors work, and then added forward! To it, did you do this intentionally or without proper research into this subject?
3/21/2019 c1 cevsti2
Not bad, the way the sentence's where written and spaced was a bit weird, but otherwise, it is great so far.
Not bad, the way the sentence's where written and spaced was a bit weird, but otherwise, it is great so far.