for The Adventures of Zuko and Katara2/9/2021 c1 
13IsSarcasmIronic
aghhh their friendship is so wholesome and I love their connection and relationship! well done!
13IsSarcasmIronicaghhh their friendship is so wholesome and I love their connection and relationship! well done!
3/28/2019 c1 Suellen
Hi. I really liked you're style of writing. Zuko is my favorite character from Avatar and I hope to see a beautiful Zutara love story.
Hi. I really liked you're style of writing. Zuko is my favorite character from Avatar and I hope to see a beautiful Zutara love story.
3/25/2019 c1 3Leonais Greyhelm
I liked the concept that you've presented in this story. There is great potential for this to be a gripping multi-chapter piece if you feel so inclined. Both Zuko and Katara still seemed in character and realistic, and I think you did a good job showing just how traumatised from the events of "The Puppetmaster" Katara must have been after learning about bloodbending.
I eagerly await to see where you go with this story.
Happy Writing,
Leo
3Leonais GreyhelmI liked the concept that you've presented in this story. There is great potential for this to be a gripping multi-chapter piece if you feel so inclined. Both Zuko and Katara still seemed in character and realistic, and I think you did a good job showing just how traumatised from the events of "The Puppetmaster" Katara must have been after learning about bloodbending.
I eagerly await to see where you go with this story.
Happy Writing,
Leo
3/25/2019 c1 38The Samurai Prince
A nice little insight story(is it just one chapter?) on the positive aspects of bending! This was a cool little short! Although, it does need some work on the pacing as well as the transitioning of some dialogue(I hope that made sense. Xo ), but other than that it's all really good! :D Great job! :)
38The Samurai PrinceA nice little insight story(is it just one chapter?) on the positive aspects of bending! This was a cool little short! Although, it does need some work on the pacing as well as the transitioning of some dialogue(I hope that made sense. Xo ), but other than that it's all really good! :D Great job! :)