
6/17/2019 c2 Zx
A good work i like how you wrote ash! Looking forward to what will happen next! Hope we see this story updated!
A good work i like how you wrote ash! Looking forward to what will happen next! Hope we see this story updated!
5/6/2019 c2 Guest
Hope you update soon. This story’s great
Hope you update soon. This story’s great
4/30/2019 c2 Tnk
Can you rank ash's pokemon so we know how powerfull they are.
Can you rank ash's pokemon so we know how powerfull they are.
4/27/2019 c2 Khangshadow
Is so good . This story is so good please made more chap and more longer please
Is so good . This story is so good please made more chap and more longer please
4/1/2019 c1 Nothing matters anymore
Great story, so far I'd like to see where it goes, and keep up the good work.
Great story, so far I'd like to see where it goes, and keep up the good work.
3/31/2019 c1
17duskrider
Nice start to the story it will be interesting to see how it works out. Wonder if Ash will end up going under cover for his vacation as a student or a assistant teacher. I can see him doing the later to be honest after his experiences to try something new.

Nice start to the story it will be interesting to see how it works out. Wonder if Ash will end up going under cover for his vacation as a student or a assistant teacher. I can see him doing the later to be honest after his experiences to try something new.
3/30/2019 c1 Khangshadow
Im like is . Is so good plesea made more because im love is and can ya ship ash with a male guy plese im dont of see ash x female and plese get ash some new pokemon please
Im like is . Is so good plesea made more because im love is and can ya ship ash with a male guy plese im dont of see ash x female and plese get ash some new pokemon please
3/30/2019 c1 Dustier7
Huh...when you think about all of Ash's activities and events he's either participated in been the center of or the reason for them occuring it's actually surprising that the league hasn't chased him down to work for them. Considering all the world class catlyclistic events he's directly stopped and the amount of times he's assisted what can be classified as gods in the poke verse and the times he's actually helped out THE GODS of the poke verse...putting it like that him not being constantly hounded by the multitude of world governments is more surprising then him being hounded by one. Also great idea hope you follow through with this cause, I ain't gonna lie this actually sounds very cool!
Huh...when you think about all of Ash's activities and events he's either participated in been the center of or the reason for them occuring it's actually surprising that the league hasn't chased him down to work for them. Considering all the world class catlyclistic events he's directly stopped and the amount of times he's assisted what can be classified as gods in the poke verse and the times he's actually helped out THE GODS of the poke verse...putting it like that him not being constantly hounded by the multitude of world governments is more surprising then him being hounded by one. Also great idea hope you follow through with this cause, I ain't gonna lie this actually sounds very cool!
3/30/2019 c1
1SunMoon6798
Hey, welcome. So look a warning given you are writing a Pokemon story. Farla, St Elmo's Fire, Talarc, Spencer841, Handle Criticism Maturely and a few others are known bullies on this site who review only to destroy stories and promote drama.
They will push their believes down your throat, demand you redo your story to fit their wants and no, they are the super minority and hated by the fandom. They also tend to post pms publicly so responding to them is ill advised.
They start off with a disclaimer about honestly thinking it would help. It doesn't they want you to be screwed over as they complain about trival nonsense that got their panties in a twist.
They think Pokemon is slavery. That you should capitalize the way they want, fyi Pokemon names are not species names and that's been officially recongized in modern English. So yes it's correct yo capitalize Pikachu for instance. Oh, and they give out false dialogue formatting. Don't get me started on Arceus.
Oh and if they say that they are being bullied. Know that they are lying as they been doing it too this fandom for years now and are just pissed that a group are working to stop it. The admins told them to knock it off.
If that's not enough on my profile is proof its utter nonsense. oh and if there is a guest reviewer titled "Take Down Hybrid" know that is's actually Handle Criticism Maturely the biggest of all of Farla's supporters and an utter troll who only doing this shit because Hybrid gave her criticism. The girls gone off the deep end and into complete insanity.
Best to remove it.
Speaking of them they had twice agreed to stop but don't. Even after being told to stop by the admins, their friends, and even random strangers. Right now they are somehow convinced that Hybrid, a woman, is a man.
If they claim they have proof don't. Its all utter nonsense land they been told by the admins to take it down

Hey, welcome. So look a warning given you are writing a Pokemon story. Farla, St Elmo's Fire, Talarc, Spencer841, Handle Criticism Maturely and a few others are known bullies on this site who review only to destroy stories and promote drama.
They will push their believes down your throat, demand you redo your story to fit their wants and no, they are the super minority and hated by the fandom. They also tend to post pms publicly so responding to them is ill advised.
They start off with a disclaimer about honestly thinking it would help. It doesn't they want you to be screwed over as they complain about trival nonsense that got their panties in a twist.
They think Pokemon is slavery. That you should capitalize the way they want, fyi Pokemon names are not species names and that's been officially recongized in modern English. So yes it's correct yo capitalize Pikachu for instance. Oh, and they give out false dialogue formatting. Don't get me started on Arceus.
Oh and if they say that they are being bullied. Know that they are lying as they been doing it too this fandom for years now and are just pissed that a group are working to stop it. The admins told them to knock it off.
If that's not enough on my profile is proof its utter nonsense. oh and if there is a guest reviewer titled "Take Down Hybrid" know that is's actually Handle Criticism Maturely the biggest of all of Farla's supporters and an utter troll who only doing this shit because Hybrid gave her criticism. The girls gone off the deep end and into complete insanity.
Best to remove it.
Speaking of them they had twice agreed to stop but don't. Even after being told to stop by the admins, their friends, and even random strangers. Right now they are somehow convinced that Hybrid, a woman, is a man.
If they claim they have proof don't. Its all utter nonsense land they been told by the admins to take it down