for Naruto the Quirky Villain6/9 c44 carneyjarred
I think the multiple quirk thing was unnecessary and I think this should have been a slice of life story with a little plot like kurama still being number one villain after AFO downfall (basically mha plot is background).
I think the multiple quirk thing was unnecessary and I think this should have been a slice of life story with a little plot like kurama still being number one villain after AFO downfall (basically mha plot is background).
26/6 c44 gmhribrahimsoleh89
Very nice touch here. A look into Naruto psychology. I hope you will continue with this story. Starting to get interesting and fluffy. Kuddos
Very nice touch here. A look into Naruto psychology. I hope you will continue with this story. Starting to get interesting and fluffy. Kuddos
6/4 c1 yellowgoodboat
Ok Ummm, the first time I went through this fiction, I didn't really find that much trouble reading it, probably because it was new. Now that I am rereading it, I find that there were actually a lot of grammar errors, and some of the wording is really childish. I would suggest getting a beta reader/editor. Still a good story though.
Ok Ummm, the first time I went through this fiction, I didn't really find that much trouble reading it, probably because it was new. Now that I am rereading it, I find that there were actually a lot of grammar errors, and some of the wording is really childish. I would suggest getting a beta reader/editor. Still a good story though.
6/2 c29 WoodenDraconis
I just have one thing to say. HOW MANY GIRLS ARE GOING TO HAVE A CRUSH ON NARUTO?! I think that there are like 6 different girls who all have a crush on him.
I just have one thing to say. HOW MANY GIRLS ARE GOING TO HAVE A CRUSH ON NARUTO?! I think that there are like 6 different girls who all have a crush on him.
5/27 c9 Axccel
It occurred to me that with his sticking (or even with out it) and his reflexes and if he used his strength, especially leg strength and his whole body like a spring, he could probably dodge attacks even from All Might and grab All Might's limbs and hyper-extend them or dislocate them by using his own strength against him. Even without his poison. Then there's things like clapping hands over his ears to screw with his balance and orientation, nailing his solar plexus to force his body to react instinctively, attacking his kidneys (agonizing places to be hit) and the base of his spine, etc.
It occurred to me that with his sticking (or even with out it) and his reflexes and if he used his strength, especially leg strength and his whole body like a spring, he could probably dodge attacks even from All Might and grab All Might's limbs and hyper-extend them or dislocate them by using his own strength against him. Even without his poison. Then there's things like clapping hands over his ears to screw with his balance and orientation, nailing his solar plexus to force his body to react instinctively, attacking his kidneys (agonizing places to be hit) and the base of his spine, etc.