for Trip Down a Hill3/13 c19 AyAyRon420
i hate yhe fact that you get positive comments so ive daid hate twice to multiple it
i hate yhe fact that you get positive comments so ive daid hate twice to multiple it
12/30/2024 c100 Noodle478
Despite this story's many flaws, it's still one of the best fics I've ever read. For anyone considering starting this, I would highly recommend giving it a shot.
Despite this story's many flaws, it's still one of the best fics I've ever read. For anyone considering starting this, I would highly recommend giving it a shot.
7/26/2024 c1 melikereading
The character building of this story is wonderful, with everyone being part of the story rather than being a part of Naruto’s story. The gripe that I have though is the names; its very small part but it breaks the immersion with Western Names in a Ninja themed story.
The character building of this story is wonderful, with everyone being part of the story rather than being a part of Naruto’s story. The gripe that I have though is the names; its very small part but it breaks the immersion with Western Names in a Ninja themed story.
4/14/2024 c1 
3Shikamaru's babygirl
GREAT first chapter. I'm loving their friendship already! Considering how nice Naruto felt about being acknowledged after answering Iruka's question, maybe he'll try to study theory a bit more now hahah. Sasuke could be of great help.
3Shikamaru's babygirlGREAT first chapter. I'm loving their friendship already! Considering how nice Naruto felt about being acknowledged after answering Iruka's question, maybe he'll try to study theory a bit more now hahah. Sasuke could be of great help.
1/1/2024 c17 Guest
666’th review, also, this shit is fucking fire, rereading it rn
666’th review, also, this shit is fucking fire, rereading it rn
2/17/2023 c100 Srw
Thank you for the original story. I very much enjoyed it.
Thank you for the original story. I very much enjoyed it.
1/30/2023 c100 mrjordanriver
Hi, I just consumed your fanfiction in a week and I must say that it is skilled writing. I agree with a lot of the critiques you said but that didn't stop me from finishing. I would also add that style at writing relationships is and genuine and how every relationship ideally should be. and that might be a weakness you have. Even the bad ones ended well. Oh calms down and dropped their problems in a natural ways. But I admit that such things are welcome occurrences in fantasy genre. How there was a cost to the friendship and that everyone was willing to pay it. I love that this Naruto wasn't as strong as the Canon one and yet his friendships made everything end up okay. Like maybe you should have had an epilogue of Itachi's funeral. But everything you wrote is in essence beautiful. Admit you definitely splattered some messes throughout. that's what makes your relationships so genuine. people can love each other in real life and things still might not work out. and I love that about your writing.
Thank you for writing.
Hi, I just consumed your fanfiction in a week and I must say that it is skilled writing. I agree with a lot of the critiques you said but that didn't stop me from finishing. I would also add that style at writing relationships is and genuine and how every relationship ideally should be. and that might be a weakness you have. Even the bad ones ended well. Oh calms down and dropped their problems in a natural ways. But I admit that such things are welcome occurrences in fantasy genre. How there was a cost to the friendship and that everyone was willing to pay it. I love that this Naruto wasn't as strong as the Canon one and yet his friendships made everything end up okay. Like maybe you should have had an epilogue of Itachi's funeral. But everything you wrote is in essence beautiful. Admit you definitely splattered some messes throughout. that's what makes your relationships so genuine. people can love each other in real life and things still might not work out. and I love that about your writing.
Thank you for writing.
1/30/2023 c100 mrjordanriver
Hi, I just consumed your fanfiction in a week and I must say that it is skilled writing. I agree with a lot of the critiques you said but that didn't stop me from finishing. I would also add that style at writing relationships is and genuine and how every relationship ideally should be. and that might be a weakness you have. Even the bad ones ended well. Oh calms down and dropped their problems in a natural ways. But I admit that such things are welcome occurrences in fantasy genre. How there was a cost to the friendship and that everyone was willing to pay it. I love that this Naruto wasn't as strong as the Canon one and yet his friendships made everything end up okay. I wish you would have ended on more of a sour note because you seem like somebody who enjoys Hallmark series.
Hi, I just consumed your fanfiction in a week and I must say that it is skilled writing. I agree with a lot of the critiques you said but that didn't stop me from finishing. I would also add that style at writing relationships is and genuine and how every relationship ideally should be. and that might be a weakness you have. Even the bad ones ended well. Oh calms down and dropped their problems in a natural ways. But I admit that such things are welcome occurrences in fantasy genre. How there was a cost to the friendship and that everyone was willing to pay it. I love that this Naruto wasn't as strong as the Canon one and yet his friendships made everything end up okay. I wish you would have ended on more of a sour note because you seem like somebody who enjoys Hallmark series.
1/18/2023 c4 KyoTheSlime
the man in front of him raised him head? ya made a small mistake.
it should be
the man in front of him raised his head instead. )!
the man in front of him raised him head? ya made a small mistake.
it should be
the man in front of him raised his head instead. )!