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6Carvaiine
This was inconsistent across canon, but couldn't you only use susanoo with two mangekyou? I'm fairly sure that was canon, but we see Madara using it with NO eyes at all...
Sorry to bother you, but Itachi using susanoo kinda confused me here
6CarvaiineThis was inconsistent across canon, but couldn't you only use susanoo with two mangekyou? I'm fairly sure that was canon, but we see Madara using it with NO eyes at all...
Sorry to bother you, but Itachi using susanoo kinda confused me here
3/29/2021 c69 Carvaiine
Oh konohamaru... Never thought you'd turn out like this. Well author! I enjoy the charcter devolpment you put into this story, bringing out unique bits on characters we'd never think to change that much!
Oh konohamaru... Never thought you'd turn out like this. Well author! I enjoy the charcter devolpment you put into this story, bringing out unique bits on characters we'd never think to change that much!
3/28/2021 c32 MeMeMooMoo
I'm falling out of love of this story. Damn it. It just meanders around doing nothing, and then we get action, and then it meanders around doing nothing, only to repeat. And Danzo was just given the Hokage spot easy as you please? Literally no one else wanted to do literally anything else? I feel like as the story has gone on, you've pretty much lost your care from when you started. It's changed tones, style, Naruto found out about using Shadow Clones to learn on his own and then literally one thing with it and nothing else since... Ugh..
I'm falling out of love of this story. Damn it. It just meanders around doing nothing, and then we get action, and then it meanders around doing nothing, only to repeat. And Danzo was just given the Hokage spot easy as you please? Literally no one else wanted to do literally anything else? I feel like as the story has gone on, you've pretty much lost your care from when you started. It's changed tones, style, Naruto found out about using Shadow Clones to learn on his own and then literally one thing with it and nothing else since... Ugh..
3/28/2021 c10 MeMeMooMoo
I love your story, but I hate that you fell into the trap of moronic shinobi/civilians. Naruto holding the Nine-Tails only works as it's supposed to if he's literally a ninja. Why can't FF writers just stop using this to cause drama?
I love your story, but I hate that you fell into the trap of moronic shinobi/civilians. Naruto holding the Nine-Tails only works as it's supposed to if he's literally a ninja. Why can't FF writers just stop using this to cause drama?
3/28/2021 c4 MeMeMooMoo
A well written story, an actual grasp of the English language, and humor that works without forcing it, AND the author actually cares about their story? It's actually happened. I can't believe it. A good Naruto story. Thank the gods I've been sorting by Updated or I'd have missed this incredible breath of fresh air. Amazing.
A well written story, an actual grasp of the English language, and humor that works without forcing it, AND the author actually cares about their story? It's actually happened. I can't believe it. A good Naruto story. Thank the gods I've been sorting by Updated or I'd have missed this incredible breath of fresh air. Amazing.
3/28/2021 c86 4G3r1k
Hey. I understand that reference.
Man that was a great fight. Good ending to that story.
4G3r1kHey. I understand that reference.
Man that was a great fight. Good ending to that story.
3/21/2021 c85 1CheezMan
I love this story more and more with each chapter you post. Can’t wait to see how this finishes.
1CheezManI love this story more and more with each chapter you post. Can’t wait to see how this finishes.
3/21/2021 c85 AliasTesin
Perfect timing. All of your readers and... me wanted to know what fights we would see. This rich chapter is a rather full-bodied snack full of puzzles and anxiety.
Perfect timing. All of your readers and... me wanted to know what fights we would see. This rich chapter is a rather full-bodied snack full of puzzles and anxiety.
3/21/2021 c84 AliasTesin
Wow, a race to the rescue of our brave... a swinging emotion that has lasted for many chapters! Can't wait to know what happens next!
Wow, a race to the rescue of our brave... a swinging emotion that has lasted for many chapters! Can't wait to know what happens next!