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12/27/2020 c76 Guest
This story is good.
Though
Im still a bit miffed that you did not let sakura learn under tsunade. You made it so that she is already using a healing chakra and that she has the strengh to blow up boulders with ger fist. So you should have let tsunade fine tune those that she already have.
I do love sakura with mokuton though totally awesome because naruto get to have the kyuubi as a batery also the sage mode. And sasuke is from a clan with awesome eyes and prodogious talents and skills. So why not let sakura have the mokuton and the ... whatchamacallit diamond seal in the forehead and the prodigious healing skills and the earth shaterring strength. Hell let her be the female not so godlike version of hashirama.
And just a question will sakura still be able to use mokuton and that earth shatering strengh if or when the curse seal is removed because it would totally suck if she cant use mokuton; the instant healing and the super streath when her curse is removed.
Can you not kill itachi. Let the pacifst weasil have a happy ending man.
Also shikamaru; niji and the other konoha 12 is not really present here no?
Anyways great job. Looking forward to your next update.
12/26/2020 c6 The Zelos Wilder
Yes, yes! This is good. Easily Favorited this story
12/25/2020 c13 FanFictionman43
Realistically Sakura would die from the curse mark, but just have to see where this goes.
12/21/2020 c76 Lord Batman
Feels a bit Deus Ex Machina for Akatsuki, because Nagato in canon need to stay relatively close to his paths. He cant just yolo all his Pains across the world globe.
12/23/2020 c3 FanFictionman43
These 3 beginning chapters were amazing. You really captured team 7's personalities.
12/23/2020 c2 FanFictionman43
This is quality.
12/17/2020 c32 glosty ben
...oh shit.
12/16/2020 c1 dragonfox123
Interesting chapter and plot and idea
12/16/2020 c76 mulabitchesmula
I love this story
12/4/2020 c55 Mr. Smittie
...bruh
12/3/2020 c75 mulabitchesmula
Love it
12/3/2020 c73 1yeaaaahhhh I read
I may have spoke to soon
12/3/2020 c72 yeaaaahhhh I read
ah dang its naruten damn
11/30/2020 c74 mulabitchesmula
Fucking lvoe it
11/26/2020 c74 4G3r1k
Ahh no. Bad tobi. Things were starting to look good.
Naruto is really combat smart. And he would make an excellent teacher.
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