for Trip Down a Hill1/2/2022 c17 circuitzplays
Kinda weird that you basically gave Sakura the Sharingan by allowing her to see a jutsu once or twice and copy it perfectly? I get you like Sakura but making her go from the weakest character to OP because she’s friends with Naruto and Sasuke and has slightly better motivation because of it doesn’t really make any sense and seems like lazy writing just so you can make a character you like more powerful.
Other than that my only complaints so far is that Sasuke’s dialogue especially just doesn’t seem anything like him at all but most dialogue in general seems very juvenile and as if every character is either extremely immature or so different from themselves that they’re basically OC’s especially when Zako went on that random tangent with Sakura.
Don’t think I hate the fic because I’m only writing the feedback because I love the core concept and the changes that you’ve made to the original story. Just don’t feel attached/interested in the characters at all.
Kinda weird that you basically gave Sakura the Sharingan by allowing her to see a jutsu once or twice and copy it perfectly? I get you like Sakura but making her go from the weakest character to OP because she’s friends with Naruto and Sasuke and has slightly better motivation because of it doesn’t really make any sense and seems like lazy writing just so you can make a character you like more powerful.
Other than that my only complaints so far is that Sasuke’s dialogue especially just doesn’t seem anything like him at all but most dialogue in general seems very juvenile and as if every character is either extremely immature or so different from themselves that they’re basically OC’s especially when Zako went on that random tangent with Sakura.
Don’t think I hate the fic because I’m only writing the feedback because I love the core concept and the changes that you’ve made to the original story. Just don’t feel attached/interested in the characters at all.
12/31/2021 c4 yes4
you do know that no matter how much teamwork just two genin level people even if one of them can create thousands of shadow clones would barely make kakashi break a sweat
you do know that no matter how much teamwork just two genin level people even if one of them can create thousands of shadow clones would barely make kakashi break a sweat
12/29/2021 c3 yes4
Im sorry for saying this on every chapter but this is so fucking wholesome and good
the only thing i dont like are the hints that its going to be either Naruhina, Narusaku or Sasusaku
Please dont let it be please i already know its finished but im loving this
Im sorry for saying this on every chapter but this is so fucking wholesome and good
the only thing i dont like are the hints that its going to be either Naruhina, Narusaku or Sasusaku
Please dont let it be please i already know its finished but im loving this
12/29/2021 c1 yes4
Please just dont let this be a Naruhina PLEASE and dont let there be too much sakura just let her be her normal canon self this is all im asking im loving this fic for now and it would suck if it was ruined
Please just dont let this be a Naruhina PLEASE and dont let there be too much sakura just let her be her normal canon self this is all im asking im loving this fic for now and it would suck if it was ruined
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