for Trip Down a Hill4/17/2019 c4 
37YumiStar
Yes you do, Hiruzen! You little shit! Great chapter and so happy to see Kakashi regret being late!
37YumiStarYes you do, Hiruzen! You little shit! Great chapter and so happy to see Kakashi regret being late!
4/15/2019 c3 Guest
Great chapter can't wait for the next one.
Great chapter can't wait for the next one.
4/10/2019 c3 Yuki
Really great chapter! Thank you! I can't wait for the next one :)
Really great chapter! Thank you! I can't wait for the next one :)
4/9/2019 c1 xSnvwyy
This is a great story that doesn't just break the canon story off with weird OOC powers and OCs. You managed to make a substantial difference in your timeline of how Naruto and Sasuke met with a misstep. There is no character bashing and the change between inner thoughts and actual speech is fluent. I was highly impressed with your writing style, Espicially that hand metaphor with Sasuke's decision between being a avenger or warming up to his potential friends. I look forward to reading more of this and seeing the gradual change of Sasuke's inner darkness compete with the warmth he feels with having friends. A hidden gem, this story is.
This is a great story that doesn't just break the canon story off with weird OOC powers and OCs. You managed to make a substantial difference in your timeline of how Naruto and Sasuke met with a misstep. There is no character bashing and the change between inner thoughts and actual speech is fluent. I was highly impressed with your writing style, Espicially that hand metaphor with Sasuke's decision between being a avenger or warming up to his potential friends. I look forward to reading more of this and seeing the gradual change of Sasuke's inner darkness compete with the warmth he feels with having friends. A hidden gem, this story is.
4/3/2019 c2 Guest
Superb! Love the hand metaphor too... Can't wait to see the next update!
Superb! Love the hand metaphor too... Can't wait to see the next update!
4/3/2019 c2 Quatorz
Great update! I'm not really a Sasuke fan so much but I liked this chapter from his perspective-and I really like how you tied that in at the end with an understanding how that chance interaction with Naruto can change his entire fate.
Definitely interested to see where you take this. Thanks for writing!
Great update! I'm not really a Sasuke fan so much but I liked this chapter from his perspective-and I really like how you tied that in at the end with an understanding how that chance interaction with Naruto can change his entire fate.
Definitely interested to see where you take this. Thanks for writing!
4/3/2019 c1 Yuki
Nice work! I like the canon divergence. Good style of writing. It's pleasant to read a story, where Sasuke chooses a different path and the starting point originates from the official plot. Thanks. :)
Nice work! I like the canon divergence. Good style of writing. It's pleasant to read a story, where Sasuke chooses a different path and the starting point originates from the official plot. Thanks. :)
4/4/2019 c2 1tmntlover2013
Great job on the story, it was great, please update as soon as you can thanks
1tmntlover2013Great job on the story, it was great, please update as soon as you can thanks
3/31/2019 c1 19Syluk
This thing: 'It seemed like some of the villagers didn't beat him as hard whenever they caught him'. I almost dropped reading right there and then (the concept enticed me to continue). Is it really necessary? Seriously. And of course, OF COURSE, ninjas join in on the fun. Urgh. It completely ruined the mood.
Also, Hinata pairing. I have nothing against it, but oh my god, seeing Naruto thinking about her at this point is such a glaring sign that the romance in this fic will be super cheezy. I just... can't. I can't continue reading this because I know how this type of romance proceeds and I can't stand the ship being crammed down my throat.
The only good thing for me in this fic is absent of Sasuke bashing. I have no idea if there will be Sakura bashing (which often comes hand in hand with Naruto/Hinata pairing), but so far I like the relationship the boys have. Even if Sasuke seems pretty OOC, it's not a bother.
Your writing is pretty good too. Quite simple, nothing stands out. A few sentences were a bit confusing, but at least you did a good job of not leaving tons of mistakes. And it's an interesting concept, the one with great potential, but jeez you just had to put that single (or couple in my case as I formed a huge dislike of Naruto/Hinata due to fanfiction) spoon of tar into your honey pot and ruin what could have been an amazing reading experience.
Maybe I'm just too tired and too bitter this evening. Either way, good luck with your writing!
19SylukThis thing: 'It seemed like some of the villagers didn't beat him as hard whenever they caught him'. I almost dropped reading right there and then (the concept enticed me to continue). Is it really necessary? Seriously. And of course, OF COURSE, ninjas join in on the fun. Urgh. It completely ruined the mood.
Also, Hinata pairing. I have nothing against it, but oh my god, seeing Naruto thinking about her at this point is such a glaring sign that the romance in this fic will be super cheezy. I just... can't. I can't continue reading this because I know how this type of romance proceeds and I can't stand the ship being crammed down my throat.
The only good thing for me in this fic is absent of Sasuke bashing. I have no idea if there will be Sakura bashing (which often comes hand in hand with Naruto/Hinata pairing), but so far I like the relationship the boys have. Even if Sasuke seems pretty OOC, it's not a bother.
Your writing is pretty good too. Quite simple, nothing stands out. A few sentences were a bit confusing, but at least you did a good job of not leaving tons of mistakes. And it's an interesting concept, the one with great potential, but jeez you just had to put that single (or couple in my case as I formed a huge dislike of Naruto/Hinata due to fanfiction) spoon of tar into your honey pot and ruin what could have been an amazing reading experience.
Maybe I'm just too tired and too bitter this evening. Either way, good luck with your writing!