for Trip Down a Hill8/11/2021 c100 
6Carvaiine
Amazing. That's about all I have to say for this. It got kind of long in my opinion, but the characters were great and the story did fine. Amazing story,and you are an amazing author.
6CarvaiineAmazing. That's about all I have to say for this. It got kind of long in my opinion, but the characters were great and the story did fine. Amazing story,and you are an amazing author.
8/2/2021 c100 3ChimamireNoBara22
I love the whole butterfly effect plot point of this story. All of the twists and turns for the different characters, the growth (both internal and external) between each of them, it was simply brilliant! I wish you luck on your future stories! I'm sure they'll be just as wonderful and thought out as this one :D
3ChimamireNoBara22I love the whole butterfly effect plot point of this story. All of the twists and turns for the different characters, the growth (both internal and external) between each of them, it was simply brilliant! I wish you luck on your future stories! I'm sure they'll be just as wonderful and thought out as this one :D
7/19/2021 c100 Whatever
I love this fanfic.
I love this fanfic.
7/15/2021 c56 Guest
I absolutely love the kakashi and obito conversation
I absolutely love the kakashi and obito conversation
7/11/2021 c100 Guest
This is probably the best example of a fanfiction i’ve had in a long time. Its incredibly different from the original material while still holding what made the original so good, you changed and improved characters and their characterization. Probably most importantly is that you actually saw it through to the end and finished it, not many good fics actually do that, and seeing one so good do it makes me so happy, i hope your future projects turn out even better.
This is probably the best example of a fanfiction i’ve had in a long time. Its incredibly different from the original material while still holding what made the original so good, you changed and improved characters and their characterization. Probably most importantly is that you actually saw it through to the end and finished it, not many good fics actually do that, and seeing one so good do it makes me so happy, i hope your future projects turn out even better.
7/13/2021 c2 4MoizzHussain
Loved this shit. Although I am a bit late reading this fix. It sure is enjoyable seeing Sasuke as not a bitch and closer to human mentality. I always hated Sasuke for being a bitch. He dared to commit serious crimes and had the audacity to say he will become Hokage.
There is no other character I hate as much as I hate Sasuke. The dude's brother sacrificed himself so this bitch can become the guardian of Konoha and he tried to destroy it.
Anyway. Seeing Sasuke being a little more human-like has me glad. Good start. Can't wait to see what you can do in future chapters.
(Even though for you those are past chapters)
4MoizzHussainLoved this shit. Although I am a bit late reading this fix. It sure is enjoyable seeing Sasuke as not a bitch and closer to human mentality. I always hated Sasuke for being a bitch. He dared to commit serious crimes and had the audacity to say he will become Hokage.
There is no other character I hate as much as I hate Sasuke. The dude's brother sacrificed himself so this bitch can become the guardian of Konoha and he tried to destroy it.
Anyway. Seeing Sasuke being a little more human-like has me glad. Good start. Can't wait to see what you can do in future chapters.
(Even though for you those are past chapters)
7/12/2021 c8 cl9763
I thought kakashi's dogs are raised by him and is the type of summon to stay with him all the time
I thought kakashi's dogs are raised by him and is the type of summon to stay with him all the time
7/5/2021 c100 Guest
I very rarely leave reviews nowadays. But this was one of the best I’ve read in a long time. Keep up the amazing work.
I very rarely leave reviews nowadays. But this was one of the best I’ve read in a long time. Keep up the amazing work.
7/5/2021 c1 Mardi
Good job
Wait for next chapter and stay healthy
Good job
Wait for next chapter and stay healthy
7/6/2021 c100 10skorpina18
I have been following this story for almost a year now and it has quickly become one of my all time favourite stories that's Team7-centric. Your writing definitely improved throughout the whole process and so did the characters. I love how the couples weren't the main thing of every character's personality. They had friends and loved ones and family to interact with, and help them.
I would go into a very detailed review of every individual character but I've spent the whole night reading the story over again!
Every individual character had an arch/story to give them time to grow and develop their personalities. And everything tied together really well.
All in all, it was an amazing story and an even greater trip.
Thank you for it. 3
10skorpina18I have been following this story for almost a year now and it has quickly become one of my all time favourite stories that's Team7-centric. Your writing definitely improved throughout the whole process and so did the characters. I love how the couples weren't the main thing of every character's personality. They had friends and loved ones and family to interact with, and help them.
I would go into a very detailed review of every individual character but I've spent the whole night reading the story over again!
Every individual character had an arch/story to give them time to grow and develop their personalities. And everything tied together really well.
All in all, it was an amazing story and an even greater trip.
Thank you for it. 3