for College Spring Break8/2/2019 c22 nikiharper
HOLY CRAP! Chris, you have a devilish way of mixing fun porn stories with real drama and suspense. I had a feeling Lacy might be bad but when I read these last 2 chapters - WOW!
Lacy (Acid Mouse) isn't just bad she's devious! Her reasons for being a bookie are so real too. What college student hasn't had at least one illegal thought cross there minds to make money to pay for college? College is very expensive! I love it when a villains motivation is NOT to "rule the world." Her motivation is perfect!
And then...the ending with Shego! HOLY CRAP!
You really nailed this ending out of the park. I can't wait for Cheer Fight: Shego's Revenge!
HOLY CRAP! Chris, you have a devilish way of mixing fun porn stories with real drama and suspense. I had a feeling Lacy might be bad but when I read these last 2 chapters - WOW!
Lacy (Acid Mouse) isn't just bad she's devious! Her reasons for being a bookie are so real too. What college student hasn't had at least one illegal thought cross there minds to make money to pay for college? College is very expensive! I love it when a villains motivation is NOT to "rule the world." Her motivation is perfect!
And then...the ending with Shego! HOLY CRAP!
You really nailed this ending out of the park. I can't wait for Cheer Fight: Shego's Revenge!
7/28/2019 c21 Smiling Lemon
Oh the irony and how much fun is still to come.
Oh the irony and how much fun is still to come.
7/27/2019 c21 Crimson Candlelight
Acid Mouse is Kim's college roommate? Something tells me this turn of events is no coincidence. I mean, what are the odds that Kim's college roommate is the one with her hooks in Bonnie, forcing Bonnie to do all kinds of things in order to either make money or pay off debts? For that matter, what are the odds that Lacy would know Bonnie at all, let alone that Bonnie would happen upon Kim and Ron during their Spring Break? I get the feeling that Lacy is up to something, and it's more than just manipulating and using Bonnie for shits and giggles. In fact, I wouldn't be surprised if Lacy and Bonnie are working together. At the very least, I think Lacy might be using Bonnie to get to Kim. I'm not sure what Lacy would want with Kim, but perhaps Lacy is out for revenge? Or maybe Lacy knows about Kim's reputation as a hero and wants to see just how far she'll go to help someone she considers an enemy? Or, maybe Lacy has more sinister motives, like humiliating Kim or destroying her reputation and is using Bonnie to gather intel on Kim to use against her? I've even considered the possibility that Lacy might be after Ron and is using Bonnie to try to break Kim and Ron up. In any case, I'm curious to find out who Lacy truly is and what she's after. Could she be just a bored genius who has no qualms about using others for her own entertainment? Or might she be a villain in the making?
By the way, what's with Kim basically warning Bonnie that Ron is off limits, that he more or less belongs to Kim and no one else? From what I've seen, Bonnie hasn't exactly been putting the moves on Ron. In fact, I'd say Bonnie is more interested in Kim than in Ron. Hell, Kim seems more interested in Bonnie than in Ron. And if Kim is so in love with Ron and so possessive of him and determined to keep him all to herself, then why has she been so eager to be with people other than Ron, namely Michelle and Bonnie? Kim's actions really make me question her sexuality and her true feelings for Ron. I'm wondering if Kim is just so used to thinking of Ron as hers that she can't stand the thought of anyone else having him, even though she's not entirely sure she wants him. Basically, I'm getting mixed signals from Kim, and Ron's nonchalant attitude about who Kim has sex with isn't making things any clearer. It just feels like Ron is a doormat and Kim's bitch, going along with whatever she says or wants regardless of how he feels about it or what HE wants, and I get the feeling that he's repressing a lot of emotions which might bubble to the surface one day and erupt into an explosion of badness. But, maybe I'm reading too much into it. I guess I'd just like to see Ron be more assertive and not let Kim just lead him around by the balls all the time.
Acid Mouse is Kim's college roommate? Something tells me this turn of events is no coincidence. I mean, what are the odds that Kim's college roommate is the one with her hooks in Bonnie, forcing Bonnie to do all kinds of things in order to either make money or pay off debts? For that matter, what are the odds that Lacy would know Bonnie at all, let alone that Bonnie would happen upon Kim and Ron during their Spring Break? I get the feeling that Lacy is up to something, and it's more than just manipulating and using Bonnie for shits and giggles. In fact, I wouldn't be surprised if Lacy and Bonnie are working together. At the very least, I think Lacy might be using Bonnie to get to Kim. I'm not sure what Lacy would want with Kim, but perhaps Lacy is out for revenge? Or maybe Lacy knows about Kim's reputation as a hero and wants to see just how far she'll go to help someone she considers an enemy? Or, maybe Lacy has more sinister motives, like humiliating Kim or destroying her reputation and is using Bonnie to gather intel on Kim to use against her? I've even considered the possibility that Lacy might be after Ron and is using Bonnie to try to break Kim and Ron up. In any case, I'm curious to find out who Lacy truly is and what she's after. Could she be just a bored genius who has no qualms about using others for her own entertainment? Or might she be a villain in the making?
By the way, what's with Kim basically warning Bonnie that Ron is off limits, that he more or less belongs to Kim and no one else? From what I've seen, Bonnie hasn't exactly been putting the moves on Ron. In fact, I'd say Bonnie is more interested in Kim than in Ron. Hell, Kim seems more interested in Bonnie than in Ron. And if Kim is so in love with Ron and so possessive of him and determined to keep him all to herself, then why has she been so eager to be with people other than Ron, namely Michelle and Bonnie? Kim's actions really make me question her sexuality and her true feelings for Ron. I'm wondering if Kim is just so used to thinking of Ron as hers that she can't stand the thought of anyone else having him, even though she's not entirely sure she wants him. Basically, I'm getting mixed signals from Kim, and Ron's nonchalant attitude about who Kim has sex with isn't making things any clearer. It just feels like Ron is a doormat and Kim's bitch, going along with whatever she says or wants regardless of how he feels about it or what HE wants, and I get the feeling that he's repressing a lot of emotions which might bubble to the surface one day and erupt into an explosion of badness. But, maybe I'm reading too much into it. I guess I'd just like to see Ron be more assertive and not let Kim just lead him around by the balls all the time.
7/26/2019 c21 Guest
I love today’s update! I want you to write that Ron have threesome with Kim, Bonnie, and Acid Mouse(Lacy) without any protection and impregnated them and have an an illegitimate child. Also, Ron married with them!
I love today’s update! I want you to write that Ron have threesome with Kim, Bonnie, and Acid Mouse(Lacy) without any protection and impregnated them and have an an illegitimate child. Also, Ron married with them!
7/22/2019 c20 tru dat
I wish Kim would just face up to the fact that she's a lesbian. She obviously prefers having sex with women to having sex with Ron. And while she may love Ron, I don't think it's in the romantic sense. Also, if she truly loved him, Kim would break up with Ron and just get with Bonnie. It would be so much kinder than stringing Ron along. And speaking of Ron, the guy needs to grow a pair. His woman cheated on him, and instead of making up for what she did, she manipulated him into letting her cheat on him again, and she also got him to pay off Bonnie's debt, and in return he got one lousy blowjob. Dude is pathetic.
I wish Kim would just face up to the fact that she's a lesbian. She obviously prefers having sex with women to having sex with Ron. And while she may love Ron, I don't think it's in the romantic sense. Also, if she truly loved him, Kim would break up with Ron and just get with Bonnie. It would be so much kinder than stringing Ron along. And speaking of Ron, the guy needs to grow a pair. His woman cheated on him, and instead of making up for what she did, she manipulated him into letting her cheat on him again, and she also got him to pay off Bonnie's debt, and in return he got one lousy blowjob. Dude is pathetic.
7/22/2019 c20 Crimson Candlelight
I don't know how to feel about this chapter. Sure, the sex was hot, but that's never been an issue. I think my problem comes from the lack of focus on Ron, how this entire story seems to be about Kim exploring her sexuality, specifically indulging in lesbian sex. That wouldn't be a problem but for the fact that during the course of Kim exploring her sexuality, she cheated on Ron, and then Ron left her alone with Bonnie so the two girls could have sex. Call me crazy, but regardless of the fact that Ron forgave Kim for cheating on him, I don't think he'd be okay with leaving her alone with Bonnie while the two of them had sex. I mean, just because Kim said she wouldn't cross any lines doesn't mean she won't. Hell, she already crossed a huge line when she cheated on him, so what's to stop her from crossing another and falling for Bonnie? I guess I would've liked Ron to at least be in the room while Kim and Bonnie were fooling around, just as a reminder to Kim to be careful. Plus, as much as Ron enjoyed getting his dick sucked by Bonnie, I don't think it was worth $50,000. I mean, it was ONE blowjob. For 50K, he should've gotten at least a dozen blowjobs and some anal. lol Also, I think Ron could've gotten hard again from watching Kim and Bonnie going at it. The guy is only in his 20s AND he's got Mystical Monkey Power.
I know I come across as a buzzkill with all my talk of Kim cheating on Ron, but I don't take something like that lightly, especially given the way it happened. Also, the way it was so quickly dismissed didn't make it any easier to swallow, no pun intended. And then there's the fact that Kim got more out of this situation than Ron, and Ron is the one who's paying for what Kim and Bonnie have done. Seems a bit unfair, if you ask me. Hmm, maybe there will be a future story in which Ron snaps and takes revenge on Kim for everything she's done to wrong him. Having Ron become Zorpox and go off on some sexual revenge tilt would be interesting.
Anyway, it was nice to know that Kim does love Ron and doesn't want to share him with or lose him to someone else. I just wish she'd open her eyes and realize that her behavior doesn't exactly scream love and that she's lucky Ron is who he is, because she could've easily lost him over the things she's done during Spring Break.
I don't know how to feel about this chapter. Sure, the sex was hot, but that's never been an issue. I think my problem comes from the lack of focus on Ron, how this entire story seems to be about Kim exploring her sexuality, specifically indulging in lesbian sex. That wouldn't be a problem but for the fact that during the course of Kim exploring her sexuality, she cheated on Ron, and then Ron left her alone with Bonnie so the two girls could have sex. Call me crazy, but regardless of the fact that Ron forgave Kim for cheating on him, I don't think he'd be okay with leaving her alone with Bonnie while the two of them had sex. I mean, just because Kim said she wouldn't cross any lines doesn't mean she won't. Hell, she already crossed a huge line when she cheated on him, so what's to stop her from crossing another and falling for Bonnie? I guess I would've liked Ron to at least be in the room while Kim and Bonnie were fooling around, just as a reminder to Kim to be careful. Plus, as much as Ron enjoyed getting his dick sucked by Bonnie, I don't think it was worth $50,000. I mean, it was ONE blowjob. For 50K, he should've gotten at least a dozen blowjobs and some anal. lol Also, I think Ron could've gotten hard again from watching Kim and Bonnie going at it. The guy is only in his 20s AND he's got Mystical Monkey Power.
I know I come across as a buzzkill with all my talk of Kim cheating on Ron, but I don't take something like that lightly, especially given the way it happened. Also, the way it was so quickly dismissed didn't make it any easier to swallow, no pun intended. And then there's the fact that Kim got more out of this situation than Ron, and Ron is the one who's paying for what Kim and Bonnie have done. Seems a bit unfair, if you ask me. Hmm, maybe there will be a future story in which Ron snaps and takes revenge on Kim for everything she's done to wrong him. Having Ron become Zorpox and go off on some sexual revenge tilt would be interesting.
Anyway, it was nice to know that Kim does love Ron and doesn't want to share him with or lose him to someone else. I just wish she'd open her eyes and realize that her behavior doesn't exactly scream love and that she's lucky Ron is who he is, because she could've easily lost him over the things she's done during Spring Break.
7/22/2019 c20 nikiharper
Thank you...thank you...THANK YOU!
I was hoping for a chapter like this. To relive the pussy eating between Kim and Bonnie from the first and 3rd story.
First this story - college spring break - is great! The conversation between Kim and Ron let us know - hey, we've done this before (which they HAVE. It's like they can just shove there past sex under the rug.) And Ron says, "Go on, have fun!"
Then when Kim tells Bonnie...Hey, HE'S MINE. Don't forget it. Bonnie realizes that she will NEVER have what Kim has with Ron. Still...if Ron says it's OK for them to have fun...then have fun!
The detail you put in your stories makes me believe I was eating Bonnie's pussy my self. You describe everything so well. From the oil wrestling to the sex to this chapter. You don't just say, "They have sex." No...you go into detail and let your reader experience it!
I know your in the process of writing a NEW story called Shego's Revenge with some light bondage. I just wanted to let you know...I can't wait!
I look forward to seeing how this story ends too.
Keep up the great work!
Thank you...thank you...THANK YOU!
I was hoping for a chapter like this. To relive the pussy eating between Kim and Bonnie from the first and 3rd story.
First this story - college spring break - is great! The conversation between Kim and Ron let us know - hey, we've done this before (which they HAVE. It's like they can just shove there past sex under the rug.) And Ron says, "Go on, have fun!"
Then when Kim tells Bonnie...Hey, HE'S MINE. Don't forget it. Bonnie realizes that she will NEVER have what Kim has with Ron. Still...if Ron says it's OK for them to have fun...then have fun!
The detail you put in your stories makes me believe I was eating Bonnie's pussy my self. You describe everything so well. From the oil wrestling to the sex to this chapter. You don't just say, "They have sex." No...you go into detail and let your reader experience it!
I know your in the process of writing a NEW story called Shego's Revenge with some light bondage. I just wanted to let you know...I can't wait!
I look forward to seeing how this story ends too.
Keep up the great work!
7/21/2019 c20 Smiling Lemon
Short chapter but still sexy!
Short chapter but still sexy!
7/20/2019 c20 Guest
That’s was great! If you read this letter, I want you to write a new chapter that a Ron impregnate both Kim and Bonnie and married them both!
That’s was great! If you read this letter, I want you to write a new chapter that a Ron impregnate both Kim and Bonnie and married them both!
7/13/2019 c19 Smiling Lemon
Crazy and short bust still very sexy!
Crazy and short bust still very sexy!
7/11/2019 c19 Guest
I’m saying that writer must write that Ron impregnate both Kim and Bonnie and married them both!
I’m saying that writer must write that Ron impregnate both Kim and Bonnie and married them both!
7/12/2019 c19 Crimson Candlelight
As always, the detailed description of the action painted a really vivid picture. Speaking of painting, I rather enjoyed the visual of Bonnie's face being covered in Ron's jizz. It was very reminiscent of when Bonnie forced Kim to suck cock at the gloryhole. Funny thing is, I thought Kim had already gotten her revenge on Bonnie, but this seemed like a continuation of that revenge, what with the sexual torture of making Bonnie horny and then leaving her hanging and forcing her to not only suck Ron's cock but swallow his huge load of jizz. Kinda makes me wonder if Kim will ever truly be over what Bonnie and Shego did to her all those years ago. Either way, Kim was much kinder to Bonnie this time around and certainly kinder than Bonnie was to her during the gloryhole incident.
Not sure why, but I think my favorite part of this chapter was when Kim got a little jealous of Ron's reaction to Bonnie sucking his cock. It felt like the first time Kim truly knew what it was like to be betrayed/cheated on, even if it was fleeting and was a result of Kim agreeing to let Bonnie suck Ron's cock. I still think Kim got off light for cheating on Ron, but it was nice to see her get a taste of her own medicine, so to speak.
I'm not sure how things are gonna wrap up. I mean, Ron got his "payment" from Bonnie for agreeing to pay off her debts, and I'm not sure he's gonna get any kinda "evening of the score" with Kim as far as her cheating on him. I guess you could say he already did, since someone other than Kim sucked his dick and got him off, but I don't count what just happened in that regard, because Kim agreed to it and seemed enthusiastic about it. Plus, Kim absolutely enjoyed this as much as Ron did, maybe even more. Personally, I kinda wish Kim and Ron would leave Bonnie hanging, maybe even remove her handcuffs and force Bonnie to get herself off. I mean, it just doesn't seem right that Bonnie would get to have Kim go down on her and get her off. After all, Bonnie is the one who owes Ron and to a lesser extent Kim. Ron and Kim don't owe Bonnie anything. Plus, if Kim goes down on Bonnie, it would feel like she's cheating on Ron again. Man, I really wish Kim hadn't cheated on Ron. It's really tainted the rest of the story for me. Anyway, if Kim does go down on Bonnie, I hope Ron gets a second wind and boner and fucks Kim again. I really wanna see Ron cum inside Kim before this is over.
As always, the detailed description of the action painted a really vivid picture. Speaking of painting, I rather enjoyed the visual of Bonnie's face being covered in Ron's jizz. It was very reminiscent of when Bonnie forced Kim to suck cock at the gloryhole. Funny thing is, I thought Kim had already gotten her revenge on Bonnie, but this seemed like a continuation of that revenge, what with the sexual torture of making Bonnie horny and then leaving her hanging and forcing her to not only suck Ron's cock but swallow his huge load of jizz. Kinda makes me wonder if Kim will ever truly be over what Bonnie and Shego did to her all those years ago. Either way, Kim was much kinder to Bonnie this time around and certainly kinder than Bonnie was to her during the gloryhole incident.
Not sure why, but I think my favorite part of this chapter was when Kim got a little jealous of Ron's reaction to Bonnie sucking his cock. It felt like the first time Kim truly knew what it was like to be betrayed/cheated on, even if it was fleeting and was a result of Kim agreeing to let Bonnie suck Ron's cock. I still think Kim got off light for cheating on Ron, but it was nice to see her get a taste of her own medicine, so to speak.
I'm not sure how things are gonna wrap up. I mean, Ron got his "payment" from Bonnie for agreeing to pay off her debts, and I'm not sure he's gonna get any kinda "evening of the score" with Kim as far as her cheating on him. I guess you could say he already did, since someone other than Kim sucked his dick and got him off, but I don't count what just happened in that regard, because Kim agreed to it and seemed enthusiastic about it. Plus, Kim absolutely enjoyed this as much as Ron did, maybe even more. Personally, I kinda wish Kim and Ron would leave Bonnie hanging, maybe even remove her handcuffs and force Bonnie to get herself off. I mean, it just doesn't seem right that Bonnie would get to have Kim go down on her and get her off. After all, Bonnie is the one who owes Ron and to a lesser extent Kim. Ron and Kim don't owe Bonnie anything. Plus, if Kim goes down on Bonnie, it would feel like she's cheating on Ron again. Man, I really wish Kim hadn't cheated on Ron. It's really tainted the rest of the story for me. Anyway, if Kim does go down on Bonnie, I hope Ron gets a second wind and boner and fucks Kim again. I really wanna see Ron cum inside Kim before this is over.
7/10/2019 c18 Smiling Lemon
Short but oh man was is still exciting to see Bonnie go a little nuts wanting her turn.
Short but oh man was is still exciting to see Bonnie go a little nuts wanting her turn.
7/6/2019 c18 Guest
You should write that Ron impregnate both Kim and Bonnie and married them both!
You should write that Ron impregnate both Kim and Bonnie and married them both!