for College Spring Break7/6/2019 c18 Crimson Candlelight
The description of the sexual activity and the detailed scenario is excellent. However, I go back to what I said about the last chapter, that this whole situation seems more about Kim and Bonnie than about Ron. I mean, obviously, Kim is in control, but I maintain that this should be about Ron, because both girls essential owe him, Kim for cheating on him and Bonnie for him paying off her debt. And yet, we don't ever see Kim focusing on Ron. Sure, she's having sex with Ron, but she keeps checking on Bonnie, making sure Bonnie is engaged, that Bonnie is getting hot and bothered, that Bonnie is enjoying the show. Personally, I think Kim should be making sure that Ron is enjoying everything. Like when Kim had Bonnie suck on her tits, I don't think Ron even saw anything, except Kim's back. I know it would've been a bit of a hassle, but I think Kim should've either moved the chair Bonnie was sitting in so that Ron could see Bonnie sucking on her tits, or Kim should've had Ron come over and watch, get a close up view of the action, and at the same time, Kim could've been kissing Ron, maybe even stroking his cock, something to keep him involved. Also, if Ron came over by Bonnie, Kim could've rubbed Ron's sex-juice covered cock on Bonnie's tits, adding to the teasing and again keeping Ron at the center of the action. As it is, it still feels like both girls would much rather being having sex with each other than with Ron, and that just doesn't sit well with me. I want Ron to be rewarded for his generous and forgiving nature.
On a slightly different note, I'm wondering if Kim got off while fucking Ron in this chapter. It kinda seemed like she might have had an orgasm, but I'm not sure. My gut tells me she didn't, and that's a bit bothersome. I mean, I'd hate to think that Kim's gonna get off because of Bonnie and not Ron. It would only cement my belief that Kim would rather be with Bonnie than with Ron. I'd really like to see the focus of this sexcapade shift to Ron, because it kinda feels like he's just there, that it could be any guy in the room with Kim and Bonnie and it wouldn't matter, because it's all about Kim and Bonnie.
The description of the sexual activity and the detailed scenario is excellent. However, I go back to what I said about the last chapter, that this whole situation seems more about Kim and Bonnie than about Ron. I mean, obviously, Kim is in control, but I maintain that this should be about Ron, because both girls essential owe him, Kim for cheating on him and Bonnie for him paying off her debt. And yet, we don't ever see Kim focusing on Ron. Sure, she's having sex with Ron, but she keeps checking on Bonnie, making sure Bonnie is engaged, that Bonnie is getting hot and bothered, that Bonnie is enjoying the show. Personally, I think Kim should be making sure that Ron is enjoying everything. Like when Kim had Bonnie suck on her tits, I don't think Ron even saw anything, except Kim's back. I know it would've been a bit of a hassle, but I think Kim should've either moved the chair Bonnie was sitting in so that Ron could see Bonnie sucking on her tits, or Kim should've had Ron come over and watch, get a close up view of the action, and at the same time, Kim could've been kissing Ron, maybe even stroking his cock, something to keep him involved. Also, if Ron came over by Bonnie, Kim could've rubbed Ron's sex-juice covered cock on Bonnie's tits, adding to the teasing and again keeping Ron at the center of the action. As it is, it still feels like both girls would much rather being having sex with each other than with Ron, and that just doesn't sit well with me. I want Ron to be rewarded for his generous and forgiving nature.
On a slightly different note, I'm wondering if Kim got off while fucking Ron in this chapter. It kinda seemed like she might have had an orgasm, but I'm not sure. My gut tells me she didn't, and that's a bit bothersome. I mean, I'd hate to think that Kim's gonna get off because of Bonnie and not Ron. It would only cement my belief that Kim would rather be with Bonnie than with Ron. I'd really like to see the focus of this sexcapade shift to Ron, because it kinda feels like he's just there, that it could be any guy in the room with Kim and Bonnie and it wouldn't matter, because it's all about Kim and Bonnie.
7/2/2019 c17 Smiling Lemon
Damn Kim's teasing two people at once and damn is it sexy!
Damn Kim's teasing two people at once and damn is it sexy!
6/30/2019 c17 Guest
Ron should impregnate both Kim and Bonnie!
Ron should impregnate both Kim and Bonnie!
6/30/2019 c17 Crimson Candlelight
I feel bad for Ron. I know watching Kim kiss another woman is supposed to be hot, and it is, but considering that Kim cheated on him only a few hours ago, I gotta believe that it's also a bit painful to watch Kim kiss another woman. Sorry to keep harping on Kim's infidelity, but it's a big deal, at least to me, and it happened so recently that it colors everything she does, even going so far as tainting certain things. If she'd cheated on him years ago, it wouldn't be as big a deal. Anyway, Kim's infidelity isn't the only reason I feel bad for Ron. Maybe it's just me, but it seemed like Kim enjoyed kissing Bonnie more than she enjoyed kissing Ron. I suppose Kim could've just been exaggerating how much she enjoyed kissing Bonnie as a way to stimulate Ron, like putting on a show and going over the top to sell the sexiness/hotness of the moment. However, it really felt like Kim's enthusiasm for kissing Bonnie was real, and when she kissed Ron, that enthusiasm just didn't seem to be there. And then there's Kim sucking Ron's cock. I honestly don't know if Kim enjoys doing that, or if she does it because Ron likes it. And I definitely got the feeling that Kim was doing it for Bonnie's benefit instead of Ron's. In fact, everything Kim did with Ron seemed like it was focused on Bonnie and not Ron. Sure, Ron was the one getting his dick sucked, and he was fucking Kim, but Kim's attention seemed focused on Bonnie and not Ron. I understand that Kim is trying to get Bonnie hot and bothered by teasing/taunting her by having sex with Ron right in front of her. However, I thought the main purpose of this little threesome was to pay Ron back for Kim cheating on him and for him paying off Bonnie's debt. If that's the case, then Kim's attention should be on pleasing Ron, focusing her energy on Ron as if Bonnie isn't even there. I have no problem with Kim taking shots at Bonnie while she and Ron are having sex, nor do I have a problem with Kim trying to get Ron ultra worked up so that he has a super explosive orgasm when Bonnie sucks his cock. I just wish it felt like Kim was in the moment with Ron, because it feels like Ron is more of an afterthought as Kim focuses on Bonnie.
Along similar lines, I'm a little surprised that Kim is the one running this show. Again, I thought this was supposed to be about Ron, but it certainly seems like it's all about Kim, kinda like when Kim got her revenge on Bonnie and Shego. I don't have a problem with Kim being in charge, but I have to wonder if she even discussed any of this with Ron beforehand, or if he's just along for the ride like Bonnie. Seems to me, Kim and Ron should've planned this together and set out some sort of guidelines for what would and wouldn't happen during the course of the evening. Maybe they did, but it kinda seems like Kim is just winging it.
Anyway, the description of the sex is wonderfully vivid, and I do like that neither Kim nor Ron seem bashful about having sex in front of Bonnie. I also like that Kim is territorial when it comes to Ron's cock, not wanting Bonnie to have the pleasure of its use. I just wish Kim had been just as territorial about her own pussy when Michelle came onto her, declaring that it was for Ron and Ron alone. Sorry about that. I just can't seem to let go of Kim's infidelity. Regardless, I'm curious to see just what Kim intends to do to get Ron even more worked up than he already is. I mean, the guy is to the point of bursting after having fucked Kim, and yet Kim wants to extend his pleasure and make him wait to get off. I have a feeling that Kim's gonna start doing stuff with Bonnie, but I don't see how that really does anything for Ron. Sure, it'd be hot to watch, but shouldn't Ron be getting the physical action and not Bonnie? Again, isn't this supposed to be about paying back Ron for his generous and forgiving nature? If Bonnie is supposed to earn Ron's money, then getting any kind of pleasure from anyone other than Ron doesn't really seem like she'd be earning anything. Likewise, some might say that Kim owes Ron, so her getting something from Bonnie doesn't seem like it's doing anything for Ron but rather for Kim herself. Of course, I could be jumping the gun and be totally wrong about what's gonna happen next, and I hope I am. At the end of the day, I want this to be about Ron, because everything up to this point has either been about Kim or Bonnie. Personally, I think Ron has earned a reward, and I just wanna see that he gets a good one and not some half-assed reward that's really a reward for Kim and/or Bonnie.
I feel bad for Ron. I know watching Kim kiss another woman is supposed to be hot, and it is, but considering that Kim cheated on him only a few hours ago, I gotta believe that it's also a bit painful to watch Kim kiss another woman. Sorry to keep harping on Kim's infidelity, but it's a big deal, at least to me, and it happened so recently that it colors everything she does, even going so far as tainting certain things. If she'd cheated on him years ago, it wouldn't be as big a deal. Anyway, Kim's infidelity isn't the only reason I feel bad for Ron. Maybe it's just me, but it seemed like Kim enjoyed kissing Bonnie more than she enjoyed kissing Ron. I suppose Kim could've just been exaggerating how much she enjoyed kissing Bonnie as a way to stimulate Ron, like putting on a show and going over the top to sell the sexiness/hotness of the moment. However, it really felt like Kim's enthusiasm for kissing Bonnie was real, and when she kissed Ron, that enthusiasm just didn't seem to be there. And then there's Kim sucking Ron's cock. I honestly don't know if Kim enjoys doing that, or if she does it because Ron likes it. And I definitely got the feeling that Kim was doing it for Bonnie's benefit instead of Ron's. In fact, everything Kim did with Ron seemed like it was focused on Bonnie and not Ron. Sure, Ron was the one getting his dick sucked, and he was fucking Kim, but Kim's attention seemed focused on Bonnie and not Ron. I understand that Kim is trying to get Bonnie hot and bothered by teasing/taunting her by having sex with Ron right in front of her. However, I thought the main purpose of this little threesome was to pay Ron back for Kim cheating on him and for him paying off Bonnie's debt. If that's the case, then Kim's attention should be on pleasing Ron, focusing her energy on Ron as if Bonnie isn't even there. I have no problem with Kim taking shots at Bonnie while she and Ron are having sex, nor do I have a problem with Kim trying to get Ron ultra worked up so that he has a super explosive orgasm when Bonnie sucks his cock. I just wish it felt like Kim was in the moment with Ron, because it feels like Ron is more of an afterthought as Kim focuses on Bonnie.
Along similar lines, I'm a little surprised that Kim is the one running this show. Again, I thought this was supposed to be about Ron, but it certainly seems like it's all about Kim, kinda like when Kim got her revenge on Bonnie and Shego. I don't have a problem with Kim being in charge, but I have to wonder if she even discussed any of this with Ron beforehand, or if he's just along for the ride like Bonnie. Seems to me, Kim and Ron should've planned this together and set out some sort of guidelines for what would and wouldn't happen during the course of the evening. Maybe they did, but it kinda seems like Kim is just winging it.
Anyway, the description of the sex is wonderfully vivid, and I do like that neither Kim nor Ron seem bashful about having sex in front of Bonnie. I also like that Kim is territorial when it comes to Ron's cock, not wanting Bonnie to have the pleasure of its use. I just wish Kim had been just as territorial about her own pussy when Michelle came onto her, declaring that it was for Ron and Ron alone. Sorry about that. I just can't seem to let go of Kim's infidelity. Regardless, I'm curious to see just what Kim intends to do to get Ron even more worked up than he already is. I mean, the guy is to the point of bursting after having fucked Kim, and yet Kim wants to extend his pleasure and make him wait to get off. I have a feeling that Kim's gonna start doing stuff with Bonnie, but I don't see how that really does anything for Ron. Sure, it'd be hot to watch, but shouldn't Ron be getting the physical action and not Bonnie? Again, isn't this supposed to be about paying back Ron for his generous and forgiving nature? If Bonnie is supposed to earn Ron's money, then getting any kind of pleasure from anyone other than Ron doesn't really seem like she'd be earning anything. Likewise, some might say that Kim owes Ron, so her getting something from Bonnie doesn't seem like it's doing anything for Ron but rather for Kim herself. Of course, I could be jumping the gun and be totally wrong about what's gonna happen next, and I hope I am. At the end of the day, I want this to be about Ron, because everything up to this point has either been about Kim or Bonnie. Personally, I think Ron has earned a reward, and I just wanna see that he gets a good one and not some half-assed reward that's really a reward for Kim and/or Bonnie.
6/30/2019 c17 BradPhilips
It's been a little while since I read this story. I left off when Kim lost the oil wrestling to Michelle. I thought that was a good ending. I guess not.
The chapters leading up to this newest chapter (Kim's in control pt. 1) we're kind of dull. I like your writing fior the teasing, the erotic and of course the porn. You are a very good adult porn story writer.
That being said, this chapter is fantastic! I really felt like Kim was laying it on thick to Bonnie. "Are you enjoying the show so far Bonnie?" Cute...and really sticking it to her!
The end of this chapter was gross but fits in perfect! Bonnie licking Kim's gooey wet fingers after she had sex with Ron was FRICKING HOT!
And to think...this is just part 1. Poor Ron. His balls are going to be so blue when Bonnie finally sucks him off.
Keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next chapter.
It's been a little while since I read this story. I left off when Kim lost the oil wrestling to Michelle. I thought that was a good ending. I guess not.
The chapters leading up to this newest chapter (Kim's in control pt. 1) we're kind of dull. I like your writing fior the teasing, the erotic and of course the porn. You are a very good adult porn story writer.
That being said, this chapter is fantastic! I really felt like Kim was laying it on thick to Bonnie. "Are you enjoying the show so far Bonnie?" Cute...and really sticking it to her!
The end of this chapter was gross but fits in perfect! Bonnie licking Kim's gooey wet fingers after she had sex with Ron was FRICKING HOT!
And to think...this is just part 1. Poor Ron. His balls are going to be so blue when Bonnie finally sucks him off.
Keep up the great work. I can't wait for the next chapter.
6/30/2019 c17 KevinKoop
The sex in this chapter is frickin HOT! I almost feel like I was tied up watching Kim & Ron have sex.
Great chapter!
The sex in this chapter is frickin HOT! I almost feel like I was tied up watching Kim & Ron have sex.
Great chapter!
6/26/2019 c16 Smiling Lemon
Damn that was such a teasing start but still want to see more!
Damn that was such a teasing start but still want to see more!
6/25/2019 c16 nikiharper
Y...some sexy fun.
To all the people complaining about Kim being out of character by essentially "buying" Bonnie for $50,000 to blow Ron and Ron being totally OK with this...lighting up! It's porn fun! I don't read these stories for the great story telling. (although, Chris has made a very good story here.) I come here for the sex and porn.
This chapter was a great teasing start to all the stuff that's coming! It was perfect. Just enough to make me want to read the next chapter later. Kim can make me her sex slave any day. If she forced me to lick her pussy...I would!
Bonnie is playing along and she seems like she's enjoying this too much.
Keep up the great work Chris.
Y...some sexy fun.
To all the people complaining about Kim being out of character by essentially "buying" Bonnie for $50,000 to blow Ron and Ron being totally OK with this...lighting up! It's porn fun! I don't read these stories for the great story telling. (although, Chris has made a very good story here.) I come here for the sex and porn.
This chapter was a great teasing start to all the stuff that's coming! It was perfect. Just enough to make me want to read the next chapter later. Kim can make me her sex slave any day. If she forced me to lick her pussy...I would!
Bonnie is playing along and she seems like she's enjoying this too much.
Keep up the great work Chris.
6/23/2019 c16 Kim fan 2
Have Bonnie worship and lick Kim's feet and suck her toes while handcuffed as punishment for interrupting her. And then have her suck her breasts for interrupting her a second time.
Have Bonnie worship and lick Kim's feet and suck her toes while handcuffed as punishment for interrupting her. And then have her suck her breasts for interrupting her a second time.
6/23/2019 c16 kimfan1
So hot! You should also make Bonnie lick and worship Kim's feet. A good foot fetish while handcuffed would make this a lot more HOTTER!
Even have Bonnie worship her breast and nipples!
So hot! You should also make Bonnie lick and worship Kim's feet. A good foot fetish while handcuffed would make this a lot more HOTTER!
Even have Bonnie worship her breast and nipples!
6/23/2019 c16 Crimson Candlelight
Given the Kim cheated on Ron with Michelle, I'm surprised she's so comfortable being in a position that's very similar, being naked with and equally naked Bonnie, who's on her knees and in position to go down on Kim if given the opportunity. I would've thought that Kim would try to avoid any reminder of her infidelity, especially so soon after it happened. I realize Kim is playing up the situation, taking every opportunity to remind Bonnie of the gloryhole incident and how Bonnie treated Kim back then. However, Kim's gotta be careful, because the situation could go from playful to something serious in short order, and I'd hate for Kim to risk her relationship with Ron over some sexual payback or game with Bonnie.
Speaking of this game Kim is playing, I didn't care for the fact that Kim and Bonnie were alone and naked and 'starting the fun' without Ron. Again, it reminded me of Kim's infidelity. I think the better choice would've been for Ron to be present and for the two girls to have been fully clothed and for them to strip in front of Ron. It would've added a little more fun to the proceedings. Plus, with Ron present for everything, Kim would've had a reminder to not take things too far. Also, I hope Kim discussed everything she planned/wanted to do with Ron beforehand and got his approval, because Kim's infidelity puts her on somewhat shaky ground, even though Ron forgave her. Handcuffing Bonnie was a good start, and strapping her to a chair was even better. The one thing I wish Kim had done that she didn't was put a gag in Bonnie's mouth to make sure she couldn't talk.
One thing that kinda bothered me was how much both Kim and Bonnie seemed to enjoy the girl-on-girl stuff. If I didn't know better, I'd say they were both gay. I mean, I get the excitement of something new/different and kinda naughty, but both of them seemed more excited about the prospect of sex with each other than sex with Ron. Hell, even Bonnie admitted that she'd rather lick pussy than suck cock. To me, that kinda sounds like Bonnie is gay or at least bi with a heavy leaning towards preferring women. Not that I have a problem with lesbians or women who enjoy other women more than men, but I worry that if things keep going this way, Kim is gonna rather be with Bonnie when all is said and done, and Ron is gonna end up all alone. Worse yet, he'll have put up with being cheated on AND have paid Bonnie's debt and gotten nothing but a blowjob out of the deal. Personally, I want to see Ron be the center of attention, because he's the one Kim cheated on, and he's the one paying Bonnie's debt. Everything that happens during the mini-orgy should be about Ron. Some may disagree with that, but it's my opinion, and frankly, I think the guy deserves a win.
Given the Kim cheated on Ron with Michelle, I'm surprised she's so comfortable being in a position that's very similar, being naked with and equally naked Bonnie, who's on her knees and in position to go down on Kim if given the opportunity. I would've thought that Kim would try to avoid any reminder of her infidelity, especially so soon after it happened. I realize Kim is playing up the situation, taking every opportunity to remind Bonnie of the gloryhole incident and how Bonnie treated Kim back then. However, Kim's gotta be careful, because the situation could go from playful to something serious in short order, and I'd hate for Kim to risk her relationship with Ron over some sexual payback or game with Bonnie.
Speaking of this game Kim is playing, I didn't care for the fact that Kim and Bonnie were alone and naked and 'starting the fun' without Ron. Again, it reminded me of Kim's infidelity. I think the better choice would've been for Ron to be present and for the two girls to have been fully clothed and for them to strip in front of Ron. It would've added a little more fun to the proceedings. Plus, with Ron present for everything, Kim would've had a reminder to not take things too far. Also, I hope Kim discussed everything she planned/wanted to do with Ron beforehand and got his approval, because Kim's infidelity puts her on somewhat shaky ground, even though Ron forgave her. Handcuffing Bonnie was a good start, and strapping her to a chair was even better. The one thing I wish Kim had done that she didn't was put a gag in Bonnie's mouth to make sure she couldn't talk.
One thing that kinda bothered me was how much both Kim and Bonnie seemed to enjoy the girl-on-girl stuff. If I didn't know better, I'd say they were both gay. I mean, I get the excitement of something new/different and kinda naughty, but both of them seemed more excited about the prospect of sex with each other than sex with Ron. Hell, even Bonnie admitted that she'd rather lick pussy than suck cock. To me, that kinda sounds like Bonnie is gay or at least bi with a heavy leaning towards preferring women. Not that I have a problem with lesbians or women who enjoy other women more than men, but I worry that if things keep going this way, Kim is gonna rather be with Bonnie when all is said and done, and Ron is gonna end up all alone. Worse yet, he'll have put up with being cheated on AND have paid Bonnie's debt and gotten nothing but a blowjob out of the deal. Personally, I want to see Ron be the center of attention, because he's the one Kim cheated on, and he's the one paying Bonnie's debt. Everything that happens during the mini-orgy should be about Ron. Some may disagree with that, but it's my opinion, and frankly, I think the guy deserves a win.
6/22/2019 c16 
2Mindless Violence Fan
Kim is putting the smackdown on Bonnie. Good for using the hinged handcuffs.
Maybe Bonnie will enjoy her being submissive to Ron and Kim that whe'll offered to be their personal sex servant. Maybe Hell will freeze over first.
Anyway, Bonnie will be hard to humiliate but I think Kim has the fire of desire to get a little more personal vengeance - not for the glory hole incident but for all the years of verbal abuse Bonnie has inflicted on both Kim and Ron.
2Mindless Violence FanKim is putting the smackdown on Bonnie. Good for using the hinged handcuffs.
Maybe Bonnie will enjoy her being submissive to Ron and Kim that whe'll offered to be their personal sex servant. Maybe Hell will freeze over first.
Anyway, Bonnie will be hard to humiliate but I think Kim has the fire of desire to get a little more personal vengeance - not for the glory hole incident but for all the years of verbal abuse Bonnie has inflicted on both Kim and Ron.
6/20/2019 c15 Smiling Lemon
Kinky but such a wait for the good stuff plus chapters are kind of short.
Kinky but such a wait for the good stuff plus chapters are kind of short.
6/20/2019 c15 KevinKoop
I love your stories but this one should have ended at the end of the oil wrestling chapter. That would have been the PERFECT ending. Now we have Kim cheating on Ron, Kim letting Bonnie suck Ron's dick to even things out and Kim giving Bonnie $50,000 to suck Ron's cock. Very weird. DIFFERENT...but also weird.
I love your stories but this one should have ended at the end of the oil wrestling chapter. That would have been the PERFECT ending. Now we have Kim cheating on Ron, Kim letting Bonnie suck Ron's dick to even things out and Kim giving Bonnie $50,000 to suck Ron's cock. Very weird. DIFFERENT...but also weird.