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4/21/2019 c5 Crimson Candlelight
Not to be a buzzkill, but I feel I should point out that it's not cool for Kim or Ron to be drinking and driving. I know they're college-age kids, and they're on Spring Break, but that's doesn't give them license to put their own lives or the lives of others in danger by driving while intoxicated. Granted, neither of them seemed tipsy after leaving that first bar, but personally, I don't think anyone should be driving if they've had even one drink.
Okay, enough preaching.
I agree with Kim that The Blue Coconut sounded like it might be a gay bar. Not that there's anything wrong with a gay bar, but I don't think Ron would've enjoyed himself if it had been a gay bar, unless it was a lesbian gay bar. From the clientele, I'd say that The Blue Coconut probably caters to tourists, which is why it had so much neon. However, just because it caters to tourists, especially Spring Breakers, that didn't explain the apparent popularity, showcased by the full parking lot. Of course, the wet t-shirt contest DID explain things. Can't say I appreciated the bouncer inquiring about Kim entering the wet t-shirt contest, but I can understand why he would. I mean, Kim is beautiful, and she's obviously a college girl. Gotta say, I rather enjoyed Ron getting his hackles up about the bouncer suggesting that Kim participate in the wet t-shirt contest, and I especially like that he made it clear that Kim wouldn't be participating. I know he kinda overstepped, since it's not really up to him, but he knows Kim, and he knows that Kim isn't the type to participate in something like a wet t-shirt contest, especially not after the whole gloryhole incident a few years back. I'm kinda curious, though, about what other contest will be happening at The Blue Coconut. It could be something PG-rated, like a dance contest, which Kim could enter and probably win. However, since this is Spring Break, and this story is supposed to feature smut, my cesspool of a mind is thinking that the other contest will be something related to sex, like a blowjob contest. If that's the case, I'm not sure I like that idea. Of course, if it's something simple like each contestant choosing a man and giving him a blowjob, and that's the end of it, then I could see Kim participating, because she could give Ron a blowjob. However, if it involves giving multiple guys blowjobs, there's no way I could see Kim participating, both because of her past experience with the gloryhole and because she's in a relationship with Ron, and I don't believe she'd do anything to jeopardize that. Guess we'll just have to wait and see.
I'm glad Kim commented to Ron about him not needing to stand up for her, that she can fight her own battles, and she can say no to things without his help or input. At least she was being playful about it instead of indignant. Let's hope she continues to be of sound judgement as the night progresses. I'd hate for her to say yes to something she'll regret when she sobers up.
Kim is definitely a cool girlfriend. I mean, she knew Ron kinda wanted to watch the wet t-shirt contest, but he wouldn't say that out of respect for her. She certainly could've told him that there was no way he was gonna watch it, but instead she gave Ron permission to watch it by suggesting that she wanted to watch it. I don't know how much she actually wanted to see other women in wet t-shirts, I do think she was okay with that sort of thing, maybe even found it entertaining on some level. Of course, the reminder that Kim has had sexual contact with at least one woman, Bonnie, not to mention gave blowjobs to 16 guys other than Ron, was kinda sobering. Granted, Kim didn't exactly do that stuff of her own free will. She didn't really have a choice, or so she thought. But still, it's a harsh reminder that Kim and Ron's relationship hasn't always been rock solid. After all, Ron has only ever been with Kim, but Kim has been with 17 people, not counting Ron. Sure, it was just oral sex, but that's still sex.
Anyway, I'm not surprised that Bonnie is participating in a wet t-shirt contest, or that she seems right at home showing off her body for a crowd of strangers. In fact, I wouldn't be surprised if Bonnie does porn for a living. lol And while I'm sure Bonnie is a sight to see in a wet t-shirt, Kim and Ron have already seen her naked, so I don't know that they'd particularly care that Bonnie is showing off her goods in a bar. I'd be interested to see if Bonnie is embarrassed when she realizes that Kim and Ron are in the crowd. I kinda doubt it. In fact, if Bonnie hasn't changed much, she might challenge Kim to participate in the wet t-shirt contest, and with Kim having a few drinks in her, I could see Kim doing something impulsive and joining in. Not sure how Kim would do in a wet t-shirt contest, though, especially one that includes Bonnie. Sure, I think Kim has great boobs, but if the contest is being judged by a bunch of drunk college kids, then you'd think they'd vote for the girl with the biggest boobs, and Bonnie's boobs are much bigger than Kim's. The point is, if Kim does join the contest, I could see her losing to Bonnie, and that might make Kim want to participate in the other contest of the night, which I still think is a blowjob contest, to prove to Bonnie that she's better than her at something.
Like I said, I just hope Kim doesn't do something she'll end up regretting.
Not to be a buzzkill, but I feel I should point out that it's not cool for Kim or Ron to be drinking and driving. I know they're college-age kids, and they're on Spring Break, but that's doesn't give them license to put their own lives or the lives of others in danger by driving while intoxicated. Granted, neither of them seemed tipsy after leaving that first bar, but personally, I don't think anyone should be driving if they've had even one drink.
Okay, enough preaching.
I agree with Kim that The Blue Coconut sounded like it might be a gay bar. Not that there's anything wrong with a gay bar, but I don't think Ron would've enjoyed himself if it had been a gay bar, unless it was a lesbian gay bar. From the clientele, I'd say that The Blue Coconut probably caters to tourists, which is why it had so much neon. However, just because it caters to tourists, especially Spring Breakers, that didn't explain the apparent popularity, showcased by the full parking lot. Of course, the wet t-shirt contest DID explain things. Can't say I appreciated the bouncer inquiring about Kim entering the wet t-shirt contest, but I can understand why he would. I mean, Kim is beautiful, and she's obviously a college girl. Gotta say, I rather enjoyed Ron getting his hackles up about the bouncer suggesting that Kim participate in the wet t-shirt contest, and I especially like that he made it clear that Kim wouldn't be participating. I know he kinda overstepped, since it's not really up to him, but he knows Kim, and he knows that Kim isn't the type to participate in something like a wet t-shirt contest, especially not after the whole gloryhole incident a few years back. I'm kinda curious, though, about what other contest will be happening at The Blue Coconut. It could be something PG-rated, like a dance contest, which Kim could enter and probably win. However, since this is Spring Break, and this story is supposed to feature smut, my cesspool of a mind is thinking that the other contest will be something related to sex, like a blowjob contest. If that's the case, I'm not sure I like that idea. Of course, if it's something simple like each contestant choosing a man and giving him a blowjob, and that's the end of it, then I could see Kim participating, because she could give Ron a blowjob. However, if it involves giving multiple guys blowjobs, there's no way I could see Kim participating, both because of her past experience with the gloryhole and because she's in a relationship with Ron, and I don't believe she'd do anything to jeopardize that. Guess we'll just have to wait and see.
I'm glad Kim commented to Ron about him not needing to stand up for her, that she can fight her own battles, and she can say no to things without his help or input. At least she was being playful about it instead of indignant. Let's hope she continues to be of sound judgement as the night progresses. I'd hate for her to say yes to something she'll regret when she sobers up.
Kim is definitely a cool girlfriend. I mean, she knew Ron kinda wanted to watch the wet t-shirt contest, but he wouldn't say that out of respect for her. She certainly could've told him that there was no way he was gonna watch it, but instead she gave Ron permission to watch it by suggesting that she wanted to watch it. I don't know how much she actually wanted to see other women in wet t-shirts, I do think she was okay with that sort of thing, maybe even found it entertaining on some level. Of course, the reminder that Kim has had sexual contact with at least one woman, Bonnie, not to mention gave blowjobs to 16 guys other than Ron, was kinda sobering. Granted, Kim didn't exactly do that stuff of her own free will. She didn't really have a choice, or so she thought. But still, it's a harsh reminder that Kim and Ron's relationship hasn't always been rock solid. After all, Ron has only ever been with Kim, but Kim has been with 17 people, not counting Ron. Sure, it was just oral sex, but that's still sex.
Anyway, I'm not surprised that Bonnie is participating in a wet t-shirt contest, or that she seems right at home showing off her body for a crowd of strangers. In fact, I wouldn't be surprised if Bonnie does porn for a living. lol And while I'm sure Bonnie is a sight to see in a wet t-shirt, Kim and Ron have already seen her naked, so I don't know that they'd particularly care that Bonnie is showing off her goods in a bar. I'd be interested to see if Bonnie is embarrassed when she realizes that Kim and Ron are in the crowd. I kinda doubt it. In fact, if Bonnie hasn't changed much, she might challenge Kim to participate in the wet t-shirt contest, and with Kim having a few drinks in her, I could see Kim doing something impulsive and joining in. Not sure how Kim would do in a wet t-shirt contest, though, especially one that includes Bonnie. Sure, I think Kim has great boobs, but if the contest is being judged by a bunch of drunk college kids, then you'd think they'd vote for the girl with the biggest boobs, and Bonnie's boobs are much bigger than Kim's. The point is, if Kim does join the contest, I could see her losing to Bonnie, and that might make Kim want to participate in the other contest of the night, which I still think is a blowjob contest, to prove to Bonnie that she's better than her at something.
Like I said, I just hope Kim doesn't do something she'll end up regretting.
4/18/2019 c4 Smiling Lemon
Simple relaxing chapter to be honest.
Simple relaxing chapter to be honest.
4/17/2019 c4 Guest
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4/16/2019 c3 Smiling Lemon
Oh I just can't wait to see where things go!
Oh I just can't wait to see where things go!
4/18/2019 c4 Crimson Candlelight
I'd completely forgotten about Ron's royalties from the Naco. I know his first royalty check kinda went to his head, and things ended badly, but I'm glad to see Ron's grown up and become more responsible. And while 5 million dollars isn't exactly the fortune Ron got the first time around, it's still plenty of money, enough for him and Kim to live comfortably for the rest of their lives, if Ron handle's it well. Judging by his subdued spending and attitude about the money so far, I'd say he's not going to make the same mistake twice. I also love that Kim isn't concerned about money and doesn't care if Ron is rich or not. That's a sign of true love, that Kim loves Ron for who he is and not what he has. And while I think Kim's idea that Ron donate some of the money to charity is noble, I kinda thought she might consider how they could invest it to do the most good, maybe even be a source of income for the two of them so they can follow their dreams regardless of whether or not there's any money in it.
Hmm, I wonder if Ron's gonna use any of that Naco money to buy her an engagement ring. After everything they've been through, and with how much they clearly love each other, I'd think it was inevitable that the two of them would get married at some point. Although, I bet Kim would be happy with a plastic ring, as long as it came from Ron. :)
Anyway, I'm a little concerned about what Kim has planned once they start their Spring Break in earnest. I mean, going to a bar for drinks may sound harmless enough, but if Kim and/or Ron go overboard with the drinking, as college kids on Spring Break tend to do, things could get dicey. I just hope neither of them does anything they'll end up regretting. Then again, I would think that Kim would avoid any situation that could come back to haunt her, since she's already lived through the humiliation of being recorded while sucking cock at a gloryhole. I don't think Kim could stomach ending up on some Girls Gone Wild video. lol
I'd completely forgotten about Ron's royalties from the Naco. I know his first royalty check kinda went to his head, and things ended badly, but I'm glad to see Ron's grown up and become more responsible. And while 5 million dollars isn't exactly the fortune Ron got the first time around, it's still plenty of money, enough for him and Kim to live comfortably for the rest of their lives, if Ron handle's it well. Judging by his subdued spending and attitude about the money so far, I'd say he's not going to make the same mistake twice. I also love that Kim isn't concerned about money and doesn't care if Ron is rich or not. That's a sign of true love, that Kim loves Ron for who he is and not what he has. And while I think Kim's idea that Ron donate some of the money to charity is noble, I kinda thought she might consider how they could invest it to do the most good, maybe even be a source of income for the two of them so they can follow their dreams regardless of whether or not there's any money in it.
Hmm, I wonder if Ron's gonna use any of that Naco money to buy her an engagement ring. After everything they've been through, and with how much they clearly love each other, I'd think it was inevitable that the two of them would get married at some point. Although, I bet Kim would be happy with a plastic ring, as long as it came from Ron. :)
Anyway, I'm a little concerned about what Kim has planned once they start their Spring Break in earnest. I mean, going to a bar for drinks may sound harmless enough, but if Kim and/or Ron go overboard with the drinking, as college kids on Spring Break tend to do, things could get dicey. I just hope neither of them does anything they'll end up regretting. Then again, I would think that Kim would avoid any situation that could come back to haunt her, since she's already lived through the humiliation of being recorded while sucking cock at a gloryhole. I don't think Kim could stomach ending up on some Girls Gone Wild video. lol
4/18/2019 c4 
9ChrisPalmer
In case some of you would like to know, I usually only post one chapter a week. A new chapter every Monday. The biggest reason is I'm also working with Ironwolf over on TeaseComix to bring my first Kim Possible fanfic to life via a comic - Cheer Fight. They also only post 1 page a week. For the most part my NEW story is promoted on Monday and there comic is promoted on Thursday.
However, THIS WEEK (4/15 - 4/19) I posted 2 chapters because I wanted to hurry up and get to the good stuff soon. LOL
So if you think chapters 3 and 4 are dull, don't worry. The good stuff is coming. It's all part of the set up.
But from now on expect only 1 chapter a week. A new chapter every Monday! It's too confusing promoting 2 different stories twice in the same week. LOL
9ChrisPalmerIn case some of you would like to know, I usually only post one chapter a week. A new chapter every Monday. The biggest reason is I'm also working with Ironwolf over on TeaseComix to bring my first Kim Possible fanfic to life via a comic - Cheer Fight. They also only post 1 page a week. For the most part my NEW story is promoted on Monday and there comic is promoted on Thursday.
However, THIS WEEK (4/15 - 4/19) I posted 2 chapters because I wanted to hurry up and get to the good stuff soon. LOL
So if you think chapters 3 and 4 are dull, don't worry. The good stuff is coming. It's all part of the set up.
But from now on expect only 1 chapter a week. A new chapter every Monday! It's too confusing promoting 2 different stories twice in the same week. LOL
4/14/2019 c3 Crimson Candlelight
So, this IS a continuation, of sorts, of the Cheer Fight universe. Good to know.
I kinda like that we get a little glimpse into what's going on with some of the more important people in the Kim Possible realm, at least those close to Kim and Ron. Gotta say, I'm surprised that Ron is an internet star, sort of. I can't imagine what he does on the internet that makes him so popular. Obviously, it has something to do with videos, but what kind of videos? Could he do cooking videos? That would seem fitting for him. Other than that, the only thing I can think of would be some sort of funny videos, but the only thing Ron ever did that was truly funny was have mishaps, which were complete accidents and didn't exactly make him look good. Oh well, as long as he doesn't make porn videos. lol Then again, if he and Kim did porn for the internet, they'd both make a ton of cash. :P However, after Kim's experience with Shego and Bonnie and porn, I think it's safe to say that Kim would never let herself be recorded performing sex acts again, even if she and Ron were the only people to see the videos.
Speaking of Kim's experience with Shego and Bonnie, I see that Kim is still harboring some resentment toward Shego and Bonnie and probably hasn't fully recovered from her humiliating ordeal. I know Kim says that she's forgiven everyone and has moved on, but her reaction to Ron bringing it up tells me otherwise. I have no doubt that Kim has forgiven everyone and done her best to move on from it, but it's clear that she hasn't forgotten and that thinking about what happened to her still hurts. Can't say I'm surprised. I mean, you don't just get over trauma like that. Even after five years and her best efforts to forget and heal, there's bound to still be a scar there that could easily start to bleed if picked at. Also, based on Kim's reaction to the mention of Bonnie and Shego, I have to believe that Kim won't react well to meeting either of them again. And that leads us to Kim and Ron going on Spring Break. I have a feeling that Kim and Ron are gonna have a run-in with Bonnie and that it won't be a pleasant experience for any of them. The question is, though, will everyone remain civil, or will there be some sort of confrontation? And if there is a confrontation, how will it play out? Will it be as simple as harsh words exchanged in the heat of the moment? Or might there be a physical altercation, an actual fight with fists flying? Or, perhaps there will be some sort of sexual component to the confrontation?
In any event, I'm glad to see that Kim and Ron's relationship is strong and that they're as in love as ever. I have a feeling that no matter what happens to them on Spring Break, they'll be able to handle it as long as they stick together. I just hope neither of them does anything stupid, like get drunk and have sex with some random stranger. I also hope that none of the people they encounter at Spring Break have seen the video of Kim sucking cock at the gloryhole. That would ruin Spring Break and possibly cause major problems in Kim and Ron's relationship. Anyway, I'm kinda looking forward to seeing what's become of Bonnie. Here's hoping she's a stripper or porn star. After all, she is a huge slut. lol
So, this IS a continuation, of sorts, of the Cheer Fight universe. Good to know.
I kinda like that we get a little glimpse into what's going on with some of the more important people in the Kim Possible realm, at least those close to Kim and Ron. Gotta say, I'm surprised that Ron is an internet star, sort of. I can't imagine what he does on the internet that makes him so popular. Obviously, it has something to do with videos, but what kind of videos? Could he do cooking videos? That would seem fitting for him. Other than that, the only thing I can think of would be some sort of funny videos, but the only thing Ron ever did that was truly funny was have mishaps, which were complete accidents and didn't exactly make him look good. Oh well, as long as he doesn't make porn videos. lol Then again, if he and Kim did porn for the internet, they'd both make a ton of cash. :P However, after Kim's experience with Shego and Bonnie and porn, I think it's safe to say that Kim would never let herself be recorded performing sex acts again, even if she and Ron were the only people to see the videos.
Speaking of Kim's experience with Shego and Bonnie, I see that Kim is still harboring some resentment toward Shego and Bonnie and probably hasn't fully recovered from her humiliating ordeal. I know Kim says that she's forgiven everyone and has moved on, but her reaction to Ron bringing it up tells me otherwise. I have no doubt that Kim has forgiven everyone and done her best to move on from it, but it's clear that she hasn't forgotten and that thinking about what happened to her still hurts. Can't say I'm surprised. I mean, you don't just get over trauma like that. Even after five years and her best efforts to forget and heal, there's bound to still be a scar there that could easily start to bleed if picked at. Also, based on Kim's reaction to the mention of Bonnie and Shego, I have to believe that Kim won't react well to meeting either of them again. And that leads us to Kim and Ron going on Spring Break. I have a feeling that Kim and Ron are gonna have a run-in with Bonnie and that it won't be a pleasant experience for any of them. The question is, though, will everyone remain civil, or will there be some sort of confrontation? And if there is a confrontation, how will it play out? Will it be as simple as harsh words exchanged in the heat of the moment? Or might there be a physical altercation, an actual fight with fists flying? Or, perhaps there will be some sort of sexual component to the confrontation?
In any event, I'm glad to see that Kim and Ron's relationship is strong and that they're as in love as ever. I have a feeling that no matter what happens to them on Spring Break, they'll be able to handle it as long as they stick together. I just hope neither of them does anything stupid, like get drunk and have sex with some random stranger. I also hope that none of the people they encounter at Spring Break have seen the video of Kim sucking cock at the gloryhole. That would ruin Spring Break and possibly cause major problems in Kim and Ron's relationship. Anyway, I'm kinda looking forward to seeing what's become of Bonnie. Here's hoping she's a stripper or porn star. After all, she is a huge slut. lol
4/8/2019 c2 Smiling Lemon
Hot damn a short but sexy chapter and I can't wait for more!
Hot damn a short but sexy chapter and I can't wait for more!
4/8/2019 c2 Crimson Candlelight
I'm glad that Ron is living on his own instead of with his parents. That's quite an achievement for a guy who barely survived high school. Although, I'm sure he had something to prove to a lot of people, so it's not that hard to believe that he'd be doing well enough to have his own apartment. Plus, I'm sure it helped that Kim is his girlfriend, because he'd want to show her that he's not the same screw-up he was in high school, that he's matured. I'm curious about why Ron was editing a video on his computer. I mean, does he do that for a living? Or does he just do that for fun? If it's for a living, then it makes sense that he ignored Kim when she first arrived at his apartment. However, if he does it just for fun, then he's kind of a dumbass for ignoring his smokin' hot girlfriend in favor of editing a video.
Gotta say, the shower scene with Kim was HOT. I love how it started out completely innocent, just Kim trying to relax and de-stress, but the longer she was in the shower, the less innocent and more erotic it became. I especially love how Kim started touching herself but quickly stopped, because she'd rather have Ron touch her and get her off than do it herself. I also love that Kim got out of the shower and skipped drying off or putting on clothes and walked right out to where Ron was sitting in front of his computer. The image of Kim, naked and dripping wet is just...DAMN. But the best part was Ron's reaction when he saw Kim, how he instantly forgot what he was doing and was instantly hard. And let's not forget how awesome it was to see Kim's boldness of dropping to her knees, pulling Ron's pants down and deep-throating him a few times to prepare him for the fucking she was really after. I like this bold and aggressive Kim. She knows what she wants and isn't afraid to go for it.
The sex was pretty hot, too. Kim must really have needed to get off if she was willing to just bend over the side of the bed and let Ron fuck her from behind. Not that they make love every time they have sex, but I don't really picture them just going at it like that very often. I'm a big fan of realism when it comes to smut, so while I wish Ron was more of the typical stud that most people tend to write when doing smut, I kinda like that he struggled to last once he started fucking Kim. It's a testament to how much he desires Kim, how being inside her, fucking her, having sex with her, making love to her is so exciting to Ron that he can barely contain himself and last long enough to get Kim off. It's a good thing that Kim took matters into her own hand, literally, otherwise she probably would've been pretty disappointed. lol Also, I totally get the appeal of Ron blowing his load on Kim's ass, but it has me wondering why he did that. I mean, I KNOW he'd rather blow his load inside her pussy than on her ass, so I have to believe that she's not on any form of birth control, and since he wasn't wearing a condom, he had no choice but to pull out and finish on her ass, unless he was ready to be a father.
Anyway, this chapter was very hot and entertaining, and I love the mix of emotion, sexual heat and even humor. I especially enjoyed Kim telling Ron to get a towel to clean his jizz off of her ass. At least she didn't demand that he clean it up with his tongue. lol Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
I'm glad that Ron is living on his own instead of with his parents. That's quite an achievement for a guy who barely survived high school. Although, I'm sure he had something to prove to a lot of people, so it's not that hard to believe that he'd be doing well enough to have his own apartment. Plus, I'm sure it helped that Kim is his girlfriend, because he'd want to show her that he's not the same screw-up he was in high school, that he's matured. I'm curious about why Ron was editing a video on his computer. I mean, does he do that for a living? Or does he just do that for fun? If it's for a living, then it makes sense that he ignored Kim when she first arrived at his apartment. However, if he does it just for fun, then he's kind of a dumbass for ignoring his smokin' hot girlfriend in favor of editing a video.
Gotta say, the shower scene with Kim was HOT. I love how it started out completely innocent, just Kim trying to relax and de-stress, but the longer she was in the shower, the less innocent and more erotic it became. I especially love how Kim started touching herself but quickly stopped, because she'd rather have Ron touch her and get her off than do it herself. I also love that Kim got out of the shower and skipped drying off or putting on clothes and walked right out to where Ron was sitting in front of his computer. The image of Kim, naked and dripping wet is just...DAMN. But the best part was Ron's reaction when he saw Kim, how he instantly forgot what he was doing and was instantly hard. And let's not forget how awesome it was to see Kim's boldness of dropping to her knees, pulling Ron's pants down and deep-throating him a few times to prepare him for the fucking she was really after. I like this bold and aggressive Kim. She knows what she wants and isn't afraid to go for it.
The sex was pretty hot, too. Kim must really have needed to get off if she was willing to just bend over the side of the bed and let Ron fuck her from behind. Not that they make love every time they have sex, but I don't really picture them just going at it like that very often. I'm a big fan of realism when it comes to smut, so while I wish Ron was more of the typical stud that most people tend to write when doing smut, I kinda like that he struggled to last once he started fucking Kim. It's a testament to how much he desires Kim, how being inside her, fucking her, having sex with her, making love to her is so exciting to Ron that he can barely contain himself and last long enough to get Kim off. It's a good thing that Kim took matters into her own hand, literally, otherwise she probably would've been pretty disappointed. lol Also, I totally get the appeal of Ron blowing his load on Kim's ass, but it has me wondering why he did that. I mean, I KNOW he'd rather blow his load inside her pussy than on her ass, so I have to believe that she's not on any form of birth control, and since he wasn't wearing a condom, he had no choice but to pull out and finish on her ass, unless he was ready to be a father.
Anyway, this chapter was very hot and entertaining, and I love the mix of emotion, sexual heat and even humor. I especially enjoyed Kim telling Ron to get a towel to clean his jizz off of her ass. At least she didn't demand that he clean it up with his tongue. lol Looking forward to the next chapter. :)
3/31/2019 c1 Smiling Lemon
I got a good feeling about this!
I got a good feeling about this!
4/1/2019 c1 Crimson Candlelight
Kind of a slow start, but I like the way you ended the chapter. Can't tell if Lacy is on the up-and-up or if she's some devious villain. For all we know, she was chatting with her secret boyfriend, and just didn't want Kim to know. On the other hand, Lacy could be working with Shego or some other villain. Heck, maybe she's even working with Ron, planning some kind of surprise for Kim. Either way, I'm curious to see if Lacy is one of the good guys, or if she's evil.
By the way, is this a continuation of your Cheer Fight series or at least set in the same universe? I ask, because if it is set in that universe, then Kim and Ron meeting Bonnie while on Spring Break could be very interesting. Also, if this is part of the Cheer Fight universe, then Kim talking about Wade in relation to Lacy seems a little weird, to me at least. I mean, Kim sucked Wade's dick a couple of times in the Cheer Fight universe, and yet I don't think she'd wanna bring that up to Lacy, especially since it happened years ago when Wade was underage. Well, even more underage. ;)
Anyway, I'm wondering if Kim and Ron will get up to typical Spring Break hijinks, or if they'll behave themselves. Again, if this is part of the Cheer Fight universe, then I'd expect them to be pretty well behaved, because I think Kim would've had enough of humiliating situations, especially ones caught on film. However, if this is unrelated to Cheer Fight, then perhaps Kim and Ron, especially Kim, might get mixed up in some drunken college antics, like maybe a wet t-shirt contest or something even more outrageous, like some sort of public sex. In any case, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Kind of a slow start, but I like the way you ended the chapter. Can't tell if Lacy is on the up-and-up or if she's some devious villain. For all we know, she was chatting with her secret boyfriend, and just didn't want Kim to know. On the other hand, Lacy could be working with Shego or some other villain. Heck, maybe she's even working with Ron, planning some kind of surprise for Kim. Either way, I'm curious to see if Lacy is one of the good guys, or if she's evil.
By the way, is this a continuation of your Cheer Fight series or at least set in the same universe? I ask, because if it is set in that universe, then Kim and Ron meeting Bonnie while on Spring Break could be very interesting. Also, if this is part of the Cheer Fight universe, then Kim talking about Wade in relation to Lacy seems a little weird, to me at least. I mean, Kim sucked Wade's dick a couple of times in the Cheer Fight universe, and yet I don't think she'd wanna bring that up to Lacy, especially since it happened years ago when Wade was underage. Well, even more underage. ;)
Anyway, I'm wondering if Kim and Ron will get up to typical Spring Break hijinks, or if they'll behave themselves. Again, if this is part of the Cheer Fight universe, then I'd expect them to be pretty well behaved, because I think Kim would've had enough of humiliating situations, especially ones caught on film. However, if this is unrelated to Cheer Fight, then perhaps Kim and Ron, especially Kim, might get mixed up in some drunken college antics, like maybe a wet t-shirt contest or something even more outrageous, like some sort of public sex. In any case, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.