5/5/2022 c3 6triscythe59
Have you seen Yu-Gi-Oh! ARC-V Remake Part 1: Standard by mpena23 Fanfiction? It’s a real good fic.
Have you seen Yu-Gi-Oh! ARC-V Remake Part 1: Standard by mpena23 Fanfiction? It’s a real good fic.
2/3/2022 c3 SecondaryShade
This crossover has been pulled well.
I think it holds interest well, you are putting in some level of mystery. With Jaune's Ace monster seemingly out of nowhere getting Rank in its text without Jaune noticing being the primary example.
However I must admit, the archetype rule confuses. I mean you would have to go to specifics as to how it works. Since I am not sure how the rule would work with Evotile/Evolsaur/Evolzar deck. Or if you could still play "Hole" traps?
(Feeling like it would have been easier to pretend certain cards/decks don't exist within the context of the story.)
You have me so far intrigued. And I hope that you do well with College and graduate successfully.
This crossover has been pulled well.
I think it holds interest well, you are putting in some level of mystery. With Jaune's Ace monster seemingly out of nowhere getting Rank in its text without Jaune noticing being the primary example.
However I must admit, the archetype rule confuses. I mean you would have to go to specifics as to how it works. Since I am not sure how the rule would work with Evotile/Evolsaur/Evolzar deck. Or if you could still play "Hole" traps?
(Feeling like it would have been easier to pretend certain cards/decks don't exist within the context of the story.)
You have me so far intrigued. And I hope that you do well with College and graduate successfully.
12/29/2021 c3 6Spartastic 4
Damn… I’m sad that I’m caught up and that this is only a secondary fic. This is good and I can’t wait for more.
Best of luck in your endeavors.
Damn… I’m sad that I’m caught up and that this is only a secondary fic. This is good and I can’t wait for more.
Best of luck in your endeavors.
12/28/2021 c1 Spartastic 4
Reading this reminds me of when I got back into Yugioh. I stopped after gx and thought synchro’s were stupid for a long time but I’ve come around to them and the ones after… BUT! It really is crazy how this game has come to full text box full of paragraphs and newcrazy rules.
I think that’s why I’m enjoying this so much. The wat you have Jaune is like is canon counterpart but also like so many other people who dropped yugioh like I did. The setting is good and the characters are enjoyable so far and it’s interesting to see that you have Salem be a normal person so far, not many fics in the RWBY sections do this. Ot’s also well written and I honestly couldn’t find anything wrong with how you write at all.
All in all, I shall enjoy the next couple of chapters and hope that more comes soon.
Best if luck in your endeavor.
Reading this reminds me of when I got back into Yugioh. I stopped after gx and thought synchro’s were stupid for a long time but I’ve come around to them and the ones after… BUT! It really is crazy how this game has come to full text box full of paragraphs and newcrazy rules.
I think that’s why I’m enjoying this so much. The wat you have Jaune is like is canon counterpart but also like so many other people who dropped yugioh like I did. The setting is good and the characters are enjoyable so far and it’s interesting to see that you have Salem be a normal person so far, not many fics in the RWBY sections do this. Ot’s also well written and I honestly couldn’t find anything wrong with how you write at all.
All in all, I shall enjoy the next couple of chapters and hope that more comes soon.
Best if luck in your endeavor.
12/10/2021 c1 1W8W
This story looked so good. Player with outdated knowledge and deck. Well written as well but introduction of made up cards killed my interest. Biggest fun from such stories no matter the quality is to see characters deck and how they fit them.
This story looked so good. Player with outdated knowledge and deck. Well written as well but introduction of made up cards killed my interest. Biggest fun from such stories no matter the quality is to see characters deck and how they fit them.
11/14/2021 c3 2JamesClockwork
An amazing story and I can't wait to see more. You've really been able to flesh out the world in a way to keep the reader hooked. As a side note while I understand the concept of rituals being past their prime (as someone who played relinquished I know the pain) I can't help but find it funny that one of the best decks in 2021 is Drytron, which can arguably be considered a ritual deck. I have to wonder if any more modern cards and archetypes will make it into the story.
An amazing story and I can't wait to see more. You've really been able to flesh out the world in a way to keep the reader hooked. As a side note while I understand the concept of rituals being past their prime (as someone who played relinquished I know the pain) I can't help but find it funny that one of the best decks in 2021 is Drytron, which can arguably be considered a ritual deck. I have to wonder if any more modern cards and archetypes will make it into the story.
10/11/2021 c3 Alternative Ice
Really glad to see this update. Can't wait to see where it goes from here.
Really glad to see this update. Can't wait to see where it goes from here.
10/1/2021 c3 1PersonaNinja Lux
Jaunw is definitely going to become a XYZ user or atleast connect with Raven
Jaunw is definitely going to become a XYZ user or atleast connect with Raven
9/16/2021 c3 3ValkyrionTheMagna
I think Winter should use Cyber Dragons, not only do they have a more militaristic feel, but they're also from GX era where fusion was the main thing.
I think Winter should use Cyber Dragons, not only do they have a more militaristic feel, but they're also from GX era where fusion was the main thing.
9/3/2021 c2 Guest
You should retcon that one archetype rule since it means decks such as pkfire can't be explored
You should retcon that one archetype rule since it means decks such as pkfire can't be explored
9/4/2021 c3 1Nepcalibur
im probs the only one who would join the xyz course in a heart beat.
Love xyz.
im probs the only one who would join the xyz course in a heart beat.
Love xyz.