for Even If It's A Lie7/28/2022 c30 lostcomet005
I finished the story and I can say this is one of the best I read. The plot is something not very usual so that makes the story really great. I think the only downside I find in here is the ending, I wish there's an epilogue included, like showing their life after the incident, so many open questions. And just for me I guess since I'm Brittana shipper is the screen time they have, perhaps, well at first I thought I can read more story from them and how the relationship develops, and falling in love and such, but its more on David and Santana(I really didn't expect coz I usually start looking for characters at the description) here. Well that leads to the open questions. I really appreciate sharing these to us, hopefully we can still read more from you author, maybe not the continuation of these but a different story
I finished the story and I can say this is one of the best I read. The plot is something not very usual so that makes the story really great. I think the only downside I find in here is the ending, I wish there's an epilogue included, like showing their life after the incident, so many open questions. And just for me I guess since I'm Brittana shipper is the screen time they have, perhaps, well at first I thought I can read more story from them and how the relationship develops, and falling in love and such, but its more on David and Santana(I really didn't expect coz I usually start looking for characters at the description) here. Well that leads to the open questions. I really appreciate sharing these to us, hopefully we can still read more from you author, maybe not the continuation of these but a different story
7/4/2021 c20 Guest
You're a wonderful writer. I adore this story and am so impressed by how intelligently you write and your version of Santana and Brittany. It's so close to how I've always wanted them written. Found this story because I stumbled upon your new time traveling one and couldn't believe how great it was. Could have done without Santana sleeping with Dani while she was still with Britt but loved everything else. Thank you for writing this.
You're a wonderful writer. I adore this story and am so impressed by how intelligently you write and your version of Santana and Brittany. It's so close to how I've always wanted them written. Found this story because I stumbled upon your new time traveling one and couldn't believe how great it was. Could have done without Santana sleeping with Dani while she was still with Britt but loved everything else. Thank you for writing this.
6/12/2021 c25 Guest
I totally had a voice in my head for the farmers too! :)
I totally had a voice in my head for the farmers too! :)
12/10/2020 c30 Mimsd123
Really loved this story! The storytelling was amazing. Especially loved how you ended the story with her talking to Dave and him telling her she can rest easy now. Great job!
Really loved this story! The storytelling was amazing. Especially loved how you ended the story with her talking to Dave and him telling her she can rest easy now. Great job!
8/24/2020 c1 imnotcoolyet
I just found this fic, and i have to say... this has to be one of the best written fic I have ever read, but the craziest story. This plot line blew my mind, and made me feel things I didn’t know I could. I’m without words...
I just found this fic, and i have to say... this has to be one of the best written fic I have ever read, but the craziest story. This plot line blew my mind, and made me feel things I didn’t know I could. I’m without words...
3/24/2020 c30 Guest
Holy fuck I know it’s been over a year since you completed this story, but you have a fucking talent. This was fucking amazing not just as a fanfic, but as a story itself. It was like you were writing the next best HBO mini-series. You are a seriously talented writer and I haven’t read any of the comments, but from your authors notes in the chapters I know you were give a quite a bit of shit over your use of Karofsky, but I personally think you’re characterization of him was amazing. You have a serious talent in writing that to me it wasn’t even a glee fanfic it was something all on its own. I just want to thank you for giving me these past few hours of immersion into this world of complex characters with an amazing story.
Holy fuck I know it’s been over a year since you completed this story, but you have a fucking talent. This was fucking amazing not just as a fanfic, but as a story itself. It was like you were writing the next best HBO mini-series. You are a seriously talented writer and I haven’t read any of the comments, but from your authors notes in the chapters I know you were give a quite a bit of shit over your use of Karofsky, but I personally think you’re characterization of him was amazing. You have a serious talent in writing that to me it wasn’t even a glee fanfic it was something all on its own. I just want to thank you for giving me these past few hours of immersion into this world of complex characters with an amazing story.
2/6/2020 c30 
14GrrrrsRandomness
This story was unique. I like the scene in Glee that inspired this story.
This story had a strong start. While I am not a fan of universes where every character is LGBT when they aren’t in canon, I tend to over look that in stories that grab my attention. This one did, right from the start. I had not read a story where Dave an Santana were married to each other.
There were several lines I thought were hilarious. Some were downright clever. I enjoyed the bits of information and mentions of history.
I had questions as to why these two would get married but the reasons were quickly revealed. There were clear differences with how Santana did things and how Dave did things. The story had a good and strong beginning.
Dave, had several scenes where I like him and then some where I hate him. Particularly how he treated Santana and her needs as secondary to his own, but Santana eventually grew fed up with this, too. I like. That Brittany’s arrival was not the only reason Santana sought a divorce. That made this story different. I like that Brittany understood her place in Santana’s life. I was glad to see Santana being clear with her after initially refusing to let Brittany be nothing but a side piece. I liked that she refused to, or more so, didn’t want to sleep with her until she was divorced.
That said, I would have like to see her reaction after learning Santana went to Dani to have a release. Also,I would have like to see Dani and her emotions. They’d had been together for 3 years. Their break up had been pretty emotional. Dani should have felt some sort of anger or frustration or something. Instead they slept together and that was that. There were pictures sent out. I would have liked to see more people get them. If you ever rewrite this, perhaps this could be how Brittany learns about Dani and Santana’s hook up.
David’s death was unexpected. I suppose this is okay as murder is unexpected. So is death, most times. I would have like to see David’s murder. Like no names or faces just the moments leading to it, the moment he knew for sure he was going to die, and him feeling betrayed by this person. Leave the mystery as to who did it, but show us what happened.
I like that you showed Santana dealing with it but also feeling a sense of loss an how she loved a David. They did raise a family together. They were married. While both were gay, they had to feel genuine love for each other. I did feel there should have been more time in her coming to terms with it. We didn’t get to see her be emotionally all or very, very, very briefly. This brings me to my next point.
While the story had a good pace int the beginning, the ending felt incredibly rushed. There was a chapter where we saw an email thread and I felt it didn’t belong. It felt like a foreign chapter. I would try to incorporate this email to develop the Poot like maybe Brittany falls victim to a phishing email and thus explains why she got a virus. Perhaps the filling was the one that sent it and used this to get information about the company for his benefit.
I understand not getting feedback had to do with this as well as the strong dislike by some readers regarding Dave and his marriage to Santana. If you rewrite it, write the story you want to read when you’re done. Include all the details(even the smut scene that might not be everything’s cup of tea).
Overall, I enjoyed this story.
14GrrrrsRandomnessThis story was unique. I like the scene in Glee that inspired this story.
This story had a strong start. While I am not a fan of universes where every character is LGBT when they aren’t in canon, I tend to over look that in stories that grab my attention. This one did, right from the start. I had not read a story where Dave an Santana were married to each other.
There were several lines I thought were hilarious. Some were downright clever. I enjoyed the bits of information and mentions of history.
I had questions as to why these two would get married but the reasons were quickly revealed. There were clear differences with how Santana did things and how Dave did things. The story had a good and strong beginning.
Dave, had several scenes where I like him and then some where I hate him. Particularly how he treated Santana and her needs as secondary to his own, but Santana eventually grew fed up with this, too. I like. That Brittany’s arrival was not the only reason Santana sought a divorce. That made this story different. I like that Brittany understood her place in Santana’s life. I was glad to see Santana being clear with her after initially refusing to let Brittany be nothing but a side piece. I liked that she refused to, or more so, didn’t want to sleep with her until she was divorced.
That said, I would have like to see her reaction after learning Santana went to Dani to have a release. Also,I would have like to see Dani and her emotions. They’d had been together for 3 years. Their break up had been pretty emotional. Dani should have felt some sort of anger or frustration or something. Instead they slept together and that was that. There were pictures sent out. I would have liked to see more people get them. If you ever rewrite this, perhaps this could be how Brittany learns about Dani and Santana’s hook up.
David’s death was unexpected. I suppose this is okay as murder is unexpected. So is death, most times. I would have like to see David’s murder. Like no names or faces just the moments leading to it, the moment he knew for sure he was going to die, and him feeling betrayed by this person. Leave the mystery as to who did it, but show us what happened.
I like that you showed Santana dealing with it but also feeling a sense of loss an how she loved a David. They did raise a family together. They were married. While both were gay, they had to feel genuine love for each other. I did feel there should have been more time in her coming to terms with it. We didn’t get to see her be emotionally all or very, very, very briefly. This brings me to my next point.
While the story had a good pace int the beginning, the ending felt incredibly rushed. There was a chapter where we saw an email thread and I felt it didn’t belong. It felt like a foreign chapter. I would try to incorporate this email to develop the Poot like maybe Brittany falls victim to a phishing email and thus explains why she got a virus. Perhaps the filling was the one that sent it and used this to get information about the company for his benefit.
I understand not getting feedback had to do with this as well as the strong dislike by some readers regarding Dave and his marriage to Santana. If you rewrite it, write the story you want to read when you’re done. Include all the details(even the smut scene that might not be everything’s cup of tea).
Overall, I enjoyed this story.
1/14/2020 c30 Mel bennett
What an epic ending! Thank you so much! I really enjoyed this FF!
What an epic ending! Thank you so much! I really enjoyed this FF!
1/12/2020 c30 2-22
Great story!
Great story!
12/11/2019 c22 Melissa Bennett
I have just binge read this...! What a great story... obviously not a typical pairing but you have made it work. I particularly love your character development of Dave... really established a love/hate relationship here.
Keep the chapters coming! You are a great writer
I have just binge read this...! What a great story... obviously not a typical pairing but you have made it work. I particularly love your character development of Dave... really established a love/hate relationship here.
Keep the chapters coming! You are a great writer
12/10/2019 c22 Guest
I have just binge read this...! What a roller coaster!
I really love your character development, particularly if Dave. Not a character you warm to, but you actually care and want the best for him.
You are a great writer! Keep the chapters coming! I need to know who did this! And I need the happy ending. Hopefully :)
I have just binge read this...! What a roller coaster!
I really love your character development, particularly if Dave. Not a character you warm to, but you actually care and want the best for him.
You are a great writer! Keep the chapters coming! I need to know who did this! And I need the happy ending. Hopefully :)
12/5/2019 c21 Guest
Wow...didn't see that coming. Another great chapter in a very original story. Can't wait for the next update.
Wow...didn't see that coming. Another great chapter in a very original story. Can't wait for the next update.
9/24/2019 c20 Guest
Eeeep finally San is getting the divorce! Finally Brittana can start to get together!
Eeeep finally San is getting the divorce! Finally Brittana can start to get together!
9/17/2019 c20 2-22
Will you be updating? Anxious to see how this ends.
Will you be updating? Anxious to see how this ends.