for King's Blade and the Queens who want to suck it7/26/2019 c5 alec-potter
Fantastic chapter.
The saint business and everything was great
But you left just when the things finally were getting very interesting.
Next chapter should be FUN.
Keep writing.
Fantastic chapter.
The saint business and everything was great
But you left just when the things finally were getting very interesting.
Next chapter should be FUN.
Keep writing.
7/23/2019 c5 Guest
Okay now that Lana has escaped Aldra's trophy room I'm pretty sure that he'll stay for the Queen's Blade to get some answers but good news is that means that he can make his harem bigger. Also give Lana the ability to make women's breasts bigger from him having sex with them.
Okay now that Lana has escaped Aldra's trophy room I'm pretty sure that he'll stay for the Queen's Blade to get some answers but good news is that means that he can make his harem bigger. Also give Lana the ability to make women's breasts bigger from him having sex with them.
7/23/2019 c5 Guest
Dang it Cattleya's breasts returned to their original size after they were drank from.
Dang it Cattleya's breasts returned to their original size after they were drank from.
7/23/2019 c5 Guest
Wow Cattleya's breasts are growing I didn't expect Lana's powers to be able to do that.
Wow Cattleya's breasts are growing I didn't expect Lana's powers to be able to do that.
7/23/2019 c5 Nivek Beldo
Seems Rana was Enjoying his time with Melpha and how was threated as a living saint, but seems your Self Insert loved CATT so much and wanted to be happy with her(i would be full harem mode) and seems even melpha was to guide them...and them Aldra happened..HECK she even confuse Rana as a girl too, you should use both eyes for those things aldra and even delmore got suprise of that...hope you conquer aldra and add her to the harem, having the current queen is practical
I got two mad ideas..1. Rana holy energy is so big purify Delmore out of Aldra(you can use him later on if you want... or just kill him, we still have the witch.) and you got a quick growth aldra before the tournament as already waifu aldra..your own waifu...that is cute
2. Only Leina Sword can kill delmore but Rana make him a cuck inside aldra, you fuck aldra so much you take control of her and delmore become a cuck inside him, heck he would be want be purify to be put out of his misery...
only two friendly suggestion buddy.
Hope next chapter we got a full fledge lemon, and if with aldra, better, and even better if we add the girl of the city watch too
Seems Rana was Enjoying his time with Melpha and how was threated as a living saint, but seems your Self Insert loved CATT so much and wanted to be happy with her(i would be full harem mode) and seems even melpha was to guide them...and them Aldra happened..HECK she even confuse Rana as a girl too, you should use both eyes for those things aldra and even delmore got suprise of that...hope you conquer aldra and add her to the harem, having the current queen is practical
I got two mad ideas..1. Rana holy energy is so big purify Delmore out of Aldra(you can use him later on if you want... or just kill him, we still have the witch.) and you got a quick growth aldra before the tournament as already waifu aldra..your own waifu...that is cute
2. Only Leina Sword can kill delmore but Rana make him a cuck inside aldra, you fuck aldra so much you take control of her and delmore become a cuck inside him, heck he would be want be purify to be put out of his misery...
only two friendly suggestion buddy.
Hope next chapter we got a full fledge lemon, and if with aldra, better, and even better if we add the girl of the city watch too
7/22/2019 c5 
3BrotherCaptainSheperd
EEhhh? No lemon? Oh well. The rest of the fic is smokin so its fine
3BrotherCaptainSheperdEEhhh? No lemon? Oh well. The rest of the fic is smokin so its fine
7/22/2019 c5 Blaze1992
C-blocked by a bowl of food.
Also did she seriously just try to kill him because of the whims of some ghost wannabe?
C-blocked by a bowl of food.
Also did she seriously just try to kill him because of the whims of some ghost wannabe?
7/22/2019 c5 Anbu69
If you are at a writers block, might I suggest starting a new story? I want to recommend don’t nag Harry Potter. I think you can make magic with it (pun intended)
If you are at a writers block, might I suggest starting a new story? I want to recommend don’t nag Harry Potter. I think you can make magic with it (pun intended)
6/25/2019 c1 Guest
Update?
Update?