for King's Blade and the Queens who want to suck it4/10/2019 c2 
7Mesousa2877
It's okay throughout with how it feels like a light novel, but as soon as I saw "bubbly trap ass", not gonna lie...you need to have Rana fucked in some way. I always figured he'd be like Astolfo, in that he'd be in lots of lewd situations, but also gets, well, wrecked by taller guys or futanari or whatever.
7Mesousa2877It's okay throughout with how it feels like a light novel, but as soon as I saw "bubbly trap ass", not gonna lie...you need to have Rana fucked in some way. I always figured he'd be like Astolfo, in that he'd be in lots of lewd situations, but also gets, well, wrecked by taller guys or futanari or whatever.
4/9/2019 c2 55kira444
I really like how this story flows. It's like, modern dude gets stuck in QB and just goes along with the shenanigans of said world while getting laid in incomprehensible ways. Can't wait to see more.
55kira444I really like how this story flows. It's like, modern dude gets stuck in QB and just goes along with the shenanigans of said world while getting laid in incomprehensible ways. Can't wait to see more.
4/9/2019 c2 6Mr. Grumpy the Depraved
Skipped the beatdown, felt the bandit plebs molestation of the milf was more heated than the sudden oral service. Read the DXD fic. U plan on sharing the mom in this fic as well?.
Does mc have knowledge of this would or just a vague outline?. Nd how old was he coz I feel he is too naïve. Is there going to be violence since this world is focused on combat? Or just filler and an op mc role playing as a girly shota. Have nothing against shota on older women. Actually refreshing change from adonis teen mc's.
As a starting author I feel I don't have the right to crit, but more detail would the fic more immersive in a sense. Hope mc gets that he needs to set his own goals for growth, mybe learn to utilize his 'curse' outside of transformation. After his mother nearly got the shit fucked out of her by a horse.
Like the way you build up towards certain scenes. Will Follow to see where this interesting story goes. Though won't FAV just yet. Hope you take this crit positively.
Thank you for sharing your ideas.
6Mr. Grumpy the DepravedSkipped the beatdown, felt the bandit plebs molestation of the milf was more heated than the sudden oral service. Read the DXD fic. U plan on sharing the mom in this fic as well?.
Does mc have knowledge of this would or just a vague outline?. Nd how old was he coz I feel he is too naïve. Is there going to be violence since this world is focused on combat? Or just filler and an op mc role playing as a girly shota. Have nothing against shota on older women. Actually refreshing change from adonis teen mc's.
As a starting author I feel I don't have the right to crit, but more detail would the fic more immersive in a sense. Hope mc gets that he needs to set his own goals for growth, mybe learn to utilize his 'curse' outside of transformation. After his mother nearly got the shit fucked out of her by a horse.
Like the way you build up towards certain scenes. Will Follow to see where this interesting story goes. Though won't FAV just yet. Hope you take this crit positively.
Thank you for sharing your ideas.
4/9/2019 c2 Nivek Beldo
Amazing chapter, we started with those two on the read, they helped a travelling circus..and them the plot twist...basic but well executed, of course when she pulled those words all make sense and how she wanted revenge against Cattelya...nice Rana and his powers for the save, a shame Sophia, you could be a good haremette if not being so evil witch, hope you never bother our heroes again.
And them it happened, catt found rana fapping and them decided be the good japanese mother and take your urges and seems with a blowjob and titjob...hope next chapter is sex
So you make common polygamy is common and normal in gainos, specially for the amazon-tamer alpha males, so go for it, go for melpha next, and all the girls too
Amazing chapter, we started with those two on the read, they helped a travelling circus..and them the plot twist...basic but well executed, of course when she pulled those words all make sense and how she wanted revenge against Cattelya...nice Rana and his powers for the save, a shame Sophia, you could be a good haremette if not being so evil witch, hope you never bother our heroes again.
And them it happened, catt found rana fapping and them decided be the good japanese mother and take your urges and seems with a blowjob and titjob...hope next chapter is sex
So you make common polygamy is common and normal in gainos, specially for the amazon-tamer alpha males, so go for it, go for melpha next, and all the girls too
4/9/2019 c2 Theguy you passed onthe street
Can’t get into this story as much as your others. I’ve watched a little of the anime and didn’t really like the art style. Generic as it was, if I am remembering the right anime.
Can’t get into this story as much as your others. I’ve watched a little of the anime and didn’t really like the art style. Generic as it was, if I am remembering the right anime.
4/5/2019 c1 Nicolas
Me gusta los auto inciertos mas cuando falta el sentido común.
Me gusta los auto inciertos mas cuando falta el sentido común.
4/7/2019 c1 Nivek Beldo
Unique idea for SI, still Rana dunno, i'm not that fan of incest still easy already having a canon characther and one with a beautiful warrior to protect you.
Go for full harem, all girls, Leina,Elina,Risty, Aldra, all the girls, even rebellions one if you got that far, use all girl for your harem as you say, all the queens to suck your rana self.
The rest make more lemon and Catt and Leina as the harem queen, Leina is my favorite.
Unique idea for SI, still Rana dunno, i'm not that fan of incest still easy already having a canon characther and one with a beautiful warrior to protect you.
Go for full harem, all girls, Leina,Elina,Risty, Aldra, all the girls, even rebellions one if you got that far, use all girl for your harem as you say, all the queens to suck your rana self.
The rest make more lemon and Catt and Leina as the harem queen, Leina is my favorite.
4/3/2019 c1 Guest
Please do some real sex next chapter also hurry up and get to Leina soon because she's my favorite character.
Please do some real sex next chapter also hurry up and get to Leina soon because she's my favorite character.