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5/10/2022 c1 FlowerxxxBOMB
Awww I cried at the end.
3/21/2020 c1 neckflix
This is such a beautiful inner monologue about everything he's been though, seriously you're an amazing writer and you captured his thoughts amazingly
12/7/2019 c1 13degrassian98
I have no words other than LOVE.
6/3/2019 c1 82moosmiles
This is so heartbreaking and beautiful. I absolutely love it.
4/4/2019 c1 12drizzletomyhurricane
Wow, I’m in awe at this. Your writing is beautiful and you capture their grief so eloquently. It was a bit strange to read a piece entirely without dialogue, but it was an interesting perspective. The only line that struck me as a bit odd was “he didn’t exactly want the baby,” because while I get the conflicting emotions about having a kid so young, Eli in canon seemed pretty happy once he learned the baby was his. Just a very minor thing though. Overall, super well done! Strange to read a non-Hollingsworth fic from you, but this was such a treat

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